follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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I hope she keeps her promise. Except for the thorax part.
* "so Zack wasn’t able to see them, and see how terrified they were."
Alternatively
* "so Zack wasn’t able to see how terrified they were."
Nice
Bittersweet indeed. Remembering a happy memory only to realise that you might not see the ones in it again
Poor little bug ponies, Zachy’s going to get you.
nice chapter
There is your warning Chryssy.
to burrow from mudbriar, technically they were using you. It was just that you have no idea how the changeling feeding thing happens.
on another note, do see a chance to escape since dumbass went into the cell proably leaving the door open. I mean the restaints don't inhabit a changeling's magic *cough thorax*
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hopefully this gives my readers a look into Zack's character from a different view. I know I've been writing him as sort-of an ass and cold shoulder kind of guy that takes awhile to warm up to, so I wanted to so people that Zack is not naturally like that and is a normally a pretty laid back and caring person. it's just his current lot in life has made him become such a hard person to get close to, especially with current events.
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we are defined and learn from our experiences. from how he has been so far im guessing that he has taken his new experinces to heart and now might either slowly warm up to people carefully now or he will only warm up to people who he respects and actualy wants to like (spike for actualy being the only one who could and did what zack asked and needid and was able to become close to her because of that).
im hopeing you go with the escape route but if you go with zack either overthrowing or killing chrisalis then he would proberbly be a good person to tell the changlings what and how thay can do better (after smacking the one who fed on her after she knows about that). im not saying zack would be a good queen or some sort of speach maker that could lead the changlings to a better life but maby she could point out some flaws in the thinking and possibilitys that she can suggest for them that she would be able to see due to her detachment from the conflict between changlings and ponys ( could also bring up how if zack had been a changling then shining would have killed her which means that changlings could be kill on sight in equestria?)
A small part of me wonders if this is secretly an Elfen Lied story or at least influenced by it.
Wow, that was pretty daring. That drone will be disposed of within a day once Chrissy finds out he stole love she had reserved for herself,..
The Changelings are not very observant...
- Zack is not a mare. Hermaphrodite
- Zack has a different Cutie Mark.
- Zack had predator teeth not pony teeth.
- Zack behavior is very differetly...
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Elvensong was a story about self-reproducing nature of human hatred taking tangible manifestation.
In a way, it is.