follow a college guy who some how gets turn into a perfect copy of Twilight Sparkle, and tries to find a way home.
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I don't know who that individual is that's watching all this. But what I do know. Is that I wanna be where they are. Because a buffet sounds rly nice right now. And I ran out of popcorn :(. So that's rly the only I wanna see this buffet. But hey great chapter. Also at some point instead of here it says hear.
Interesting.
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how so?
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The fact that they didn't realize how she was taking it sooner. Ps like how it was just the pony world this time.
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well ponies are shown to be really....dense when something so obvious is staring them right in their faces. their hindsight is a 2/10. for the most part.
Not good enough. Going by this Celestia should've under house arrest for fighting her sister. And this sets in the minds of ponies that even if your life is in danger you still can't defend yourself against a mad royal. This is dumb and you know it.
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the law in our world is stupid too but in equestia with all the stuff in their world its not really supprising that the law is still a pain. i am supprised that there hasnt been any mention of starlights crimes and how she didnt really get punished for them i mean if you want to point out a parralel starlight did try kill or at least maim twilight during their time travel so zack might find that out and bring it up soon
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I know.
I see what you're trying to do; I really do, but it doesn't work. A punishment in the eyes of the public wouldn't be reassuring. Regardless of whether it's an actual punishment or a veiled safety measure, which honestly from where I'm standing it's a punishment made to sound better than it is because Zack is ultimately confined, the circumstances of said punishment are that a royal attacked her and she defended herself, and she's being punished for acting to preserve her own life. I'd be afraid of the royal class of any nation that did that, because threat of punishment could be held over the head of any civilian any royal wanted to use as a punching bag if they didn't just take it. And they'd have to keep quiet, too, because if word got back to the royal family that one of their own was attacking a civilian, the question 'is this true' would be asked in some form, and the royal would fabricate a tale that they fought back as punishment for 'being a snitch'.
Yes.
All considered, that might be a good idea amyway.
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Well Zack does have an idea of what Starlight did, when the ponies first introduce themselves, but he doesn't know the full extent.
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understandable, but even so, the general public in Equestria are essential mindless sheep for the most part. so if Celestia tells them that things will be alright, they'll go along with it because they trust her. and as for being punished by royals, Celestia seems to be the ONLY royal to hand down any forms of punishment. none of the other princesses seem to have this level of authority, and i sure as hell know that none of the nobles have that power. and because ponies are by and large a docile peaceful race (85 or 90% of the time) i doubt any pony in Equestria would abuse their authority for violence, SA is the exception because he's technically not a real royal, and he was just being a trigger happy idiot.
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but does Twilight have access to the royal treasury? or does she still live off of........whatever income she's been having all her life?
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true, but the incident between Zack and Shining is an isolated incident. and as i just established in this fic, these types of acts are virtually unheard of. also, aside from SA who is royal in name only because of marriage, can you see the other four royals (i.e the princesses) attacking anypony for no reason? also, Zack's punishment isn't really a punishment, just a stupid way of Celestia saying: 'Stay in a safe place, so this doesn't happen to you again'.
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it is still a punishment. and that fact this happened ONCE means it can happen again and you just set standard operations for this. punish the victim because the attack is royalty. THIS IS NOT A GOOD THING! WHY CAN YOU NOT FIGURE THAT OUT? This sends the wrong message out there. and I am not the only one calling it out. I beg you. drop the punishment.
She's so going to kill Discord when she finds out what happened
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alright, alright. i just changed Zack's punishment, to a more you were right but we still want to make sure your safe. Read Ch. 6 through 8. to see the changes.
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do you mean Zack?
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idea! Odd one, but still.
If she were to buy some of those with... whatever means she does, then she put them in one of the castle's
copious rooms, maybe on a lower floor..., (maybe charge admission, for tourists)
It would have the nice bonuses of some extra change, (peanuts really, but still, it's a little more than she would otherwise have) making the castle somewhat less lonely-seeming, and delaying (if not stopping) moments like these when they start to come on.
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that's not a bad idea.
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Just put in some Bubble Bobble/Bust-A-Move, Ninja Baseball Bat Mare, a few others to start... And as she accrues more of the earnings she can put it right back into expanding it.
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Yes you only use she as a pronound even though Zach is a hermaphrodite
At least Zack learned that aggressiveness approach wasn't going to solve her problem or make it faster than it currently is.
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it was more high levels of stress and annoyance that's been building up, not straight up aggression
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will every time i have 'he' and 'she' to describe Zack, people complain in that they get lost or it makes it hard to read the story.
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That is if Discord actually the reason he lost his home and form. He's obviously watching, but was this his doing or did he just stumble upon Zack and now having time of his life watching him is not clear. So, he might be innocent and besides unwilling actually incapable to help.
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at the end of the day its up to you but zack has not told anyone about his gender change yet has he? if thats the case then it wont be too important untill you have some bit where he makes his stance on which he likes known but i dont find anything wrong with how your doing things atm.
willing to give you the benefit of the doubt Discord since you usually do shit for a lesson of some kind. I can't figure out what the lesson would be in doing something like this except 'its fun to fuck up someone's life if they can't fight back'
It's distressing but unsurprising they really haven't really attempted to grill him for more details on his arrival. Like, most unstable world gates have a rather quick decay time, and they haven't even asked "hey, we saw you come into Canterlot, so you were obviously here in the world for some time. Where were you at the time you started flying?"
It's been nearly a week so there's not much hope for a backtrace, but it still should have been considered or inquired about. Even if they do find a way to hop dimensions that isn't purely theoretical, they still need a method to actually target the correct endpoint, and by now they're almost guaranteed to have lost it.
Seeing as Zack has Twilight's magic. I can actually see him beating Discord to an inch of his life to force him to send him back.
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Somehow, I always picture Discord as this being that's bound by rules, no matter how much he might dislike them. Thus, I think there's only one way to beat him - at his own game, within the rules he set forth, as he's just as bound by them as the players are.
If you just try to take him on without any game construct to support it, only the general rules of "don't kill" apply... That would likely be a bad time. Besides, I've a feeling that there's a rule that he can defend himself if attacked, and it might open up a few loopholes.
But he's the ex captain so that doesn't really apply since he's in charge of the guards within the crystal empire currently
Oh so you are mentioning his daughter but not the mirror portal
Shining Armor needs Therapy if he is lethal violently on a assumption.
see - not she