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Woo, we need more M/M shipfics here.
I was worried jumping into reading this with no ratings or comments to go off of, but so far, you're doing a really good job! I'll save my rating until chapter 3 or 4, but I gotta say I'm looking forward to reading more. Nice work! :twilightsheepish:

I already rated it so far 5.0 from 1 rating


ill track this to see where its going, see if it gets better.



this is going to get interresting.......

Looks like this is going be good!!!

Hah! You're a genius RD :rainbowlaugh:
This should be fun

Oh god, I like where this is going. XD

Also, there's a mistake in this chapter and the last one~ You referred to Caramel as a "she" at one point in Chapter 1, aaaand in Chapter 2 you're missing a word here: “Mac, that’s not why I asked if were single.”

94332 Thanks for pointing that out. Both those problems and two others I noticed in the first chapter have been fixed.

not bad:pinkiesmile: cant wait for chapter 3

Missing word here: Are coming here again tomorrow?”

Aside from that, good chapter. <3 I love the Rarity mention.

crap. so short! i loved it tho! need more. hope you're workin' diligently on the next installment.

It may take a little longer for the next chapter to come out. I'm working on polishing this up to get it onto Equestria Daily.

More :heart:
More :heart:

Tracking! :pinkiehappy:

Uhm, yeah, okay..

Buck EqD please, just post moar damn chapters already :raritycry:

Horseapples, I want to read more of this story. :flutterrage: Give me more!124011

Don't worry. It will be updated this week. I swear.

Just realised this week lasts until Sunday...

You're going to release the update at 23:58 on Sunday just to torture us but still be right, aren't you? :raritydespair:

(P.S Even if it irritates you, I hound all my favourite writers constantly. Consider it a compliment, AND a kick to the flank to hurry you the apples up! :pinkiehappy:)

Dude, sunday was 2 days ago, HURRY THE BUCK UP GOSH DARNIT!:flutterrage:
Anyways good story though.

Ok guys, I finished writing the new chapter and I'll get it edited during the day.

Sorry for the delay in getting this up. Also, considering what happened in the Hearts and Hooves Day episode, I am so happy I went with Macintosh and Blues instead of using the fandom standard, Macintosh and Caramel.

Oh, and a few errrors :
"Hey, not everyone figures out that aren’t into mares early on"
I assume you meant "Hey, not ev erypony figures out they aren't into mares when they're young." or something similiar? [This is near the end, during the date,]
"Blues raised one of his eye brows" I thought it was eyebrows. [ This is the road-scene before the date. ]

I think that would be the only errors I could spot. Still, good story, and I realllllyyyy want more :yay:

well, finally, a new male-male ship. i'm putting a watch on this.

and yes, "not everyone figures out they're not into females when they're young" is the truth.

i am midly concerned with all these fics saying scoots is an orphan or an abused child. other than that this is nice.

Don't worry. I have no intention of making Scootaloo an orphan or an abused child.

Of course! She needs to be his date until he is finally ready to admit his feelings. Rain you are a genius! Oops Oblivion already said that. And ha! i get to read it right now instead of waiting, like brony96? 69? I'm just evil :)

Yay, I get to cooooommment. First he could have shut her up by kissing her on the way back, I would have, it doesn't mean he loves her, just that he appreciates her helping him out so much. And I'm so evil I don't care if they are both gay I'd still like to see them together.

Scoots may just be going through the same confusing that Dash would have had to deal with as a filly, alone. So she is disturbed that Dash, by dating a stallion, is making her feel like a pathetic freak, by Dash betraying scoots need to be with a positive role model. That is truly sad. I pray this updates soon. Buck EqD. If Scoots is straight she would still need to learn not to be homophobic. Dash should tell her that it's okay to be straight too. (I warned you i'm evil.)

Can we see an update by, kinda soonish, please.:pinkiesmile:

I actually have the newest chapter written, but I'm waiting for it to get reviewed since I kinda suck at catching my own mistakes. I'll post it after it gets reviewed.

Am I the only one that thinks it would almost be easier for Big mac to come out of the stable at this point?

Indeed. Though, being In the same situation as him, I guess I lost the right to judge against that :applejackunsure:

315983 Yeah, I know whats its like to be in that situation, I found it was just easier to just come out than to keep it a secret and play a cherade with my family.

Scootabelle shipping? SCOOTABELLE SHIPPING! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Well, its not like they're discriminating. All my family is very supportive and acceptive of everything. Its just.... Well... Feels wierd. I have told some friends at school, but I dont think they really took it seriously.

Perhaps. Or she's going down the dreaded road of falling for a straight friend. Or maybe two straight friends. Only time will tell. :raritywink:

Logically speaking, yes it would be. But in his mind it's probably easier doing it this way than potentially upsetting Applejack, Granny Smith and/or Apple Bloom.

Sqeeee so adorable.
Sad, but adorable :pinkiehappy:

What is this drop of liquid falling from my eyes? :applecry: :raritycry:

Great chapter as always

Wow, that was some really nice introspection. Don't see nearly enough of it in other fics! Really enjoyed that chapter.

this is very good, it puts mine to shame

Could that comment by Braeburn mean we have some BRAERIN in store? :raritystarry: :heart: :heart:

Very good, Very good indeed, Love how your not only dealing with one coming out with ones own sexuality but are also dealing with the pony's around him and their own issues.

373579 Is that Braeburn and Soarin? That's actually my favorite m/m ship, but no. I was trying to allude to Breaburn and Little Strongheart.


Yeah, Braerin is the term I use for Braeburn/Soarin - I've also heard Soarburn, but my bff is a huge fan of the ship and he calls them Braerin so that's what I started using. Anyway, I was imagining that if Braeburn were in a relationship with another colt, and told this to Big Mac, maybe he could end up telling him the truth and have a confidante within the family. I also just have trouble imagining Braeburn as straight in general, lol. :eeyup: However, now that I know it's Little Strongheart I'm interested to see how the Apples deal with a buffalo in the family if they can't even handle a pegasus! :derpytongue2:

Anyway I really enjoy the story so far, and can't wait to find out more! Also are we going to see anything between Dash and another mare? :rainbowkiss:

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