Also, there's a mistake in this chapter and the last one~ You referred to Caramel as a "she" at one point in Chapter 1, aaaand in Chapter 2 you're missing a word here: “Mac, that’s not why I asked if were single.”
Of course! She needs to be his date until he is finally ready to admit his feelings. Rain you are a genius! Oops Oblivion already said that. And ha! i get to read it right now instead of waiting, like brony96? 69? I'm just evil :)
this is going to get interresting.......
Looks like this is going be good!!!
Hah! You're a genius RD
This should be fun
Oh god, I like where this is going. XD
Also, there's a mistake in this chapter and the last one~ You referred to Caramel as a "she" at one point in Chapter 1, aaaand in Chapter 2 you're missing a word here: “Mac, that’s not why I asked if were single.”
94332 Thanks for pointing that out. Both those problems and two others I noticed in the first chapter have been fixed.
not bad cant wait for chapter 3
Of course! She needs to be his date until he is finally ready to admit his feelings. Rain you are a genius! Oops Oblivion already said that. And ha! i get to read it right now instead of waiting, like brony96? 69? I'm just evil :)
Woohoo gaybar!
Rainbow Beard