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Pinkamena Diane Pie is best pony. :3I write in my free time, so yays! :D


Caramel finally understands his feelings, but is he too late to act on them? Will he break out of his shell and find love? Is Big Macintosh even available?
A love story between Caramel and Big Macintosh (obviously...). Contains M/M coltcuddling and some innuendos. If thou doest not enjoy such topics, shield thine eyes.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 63 )

Oooh... I like where this is going. It's hilarious that you started with puking, by the way. Although horses are physically unable to puke, I will simply assume that magical ones can...

Also, I added this to the M/M shipping group (we have cookies) :duck:

Well written, nice pacing and premise, very curious to see what happens.

Guessing the down votes are from general m/m hate, since I couldn't find anything worth down voting.

Ooh cookies! ^.^
Huh, I didn't know that horses couldn't puke...Well, ya learn somethin' knew every day :D
Do you know how a frog pukes? It throws up its stomach so it's inside out and hanging out of its mouth, and then scoops out the stuff using its front legs. Gives a whole new meaning to the Princess and the Frog :twilightoops:

Oh my lord, I'm squeeing with every paragraph:pinkiehappy:

Love it, keep it up!:pinkiesmile:

Augh! Cliffhanger! MOAR:flutterrage:

:raritycry: <- Me during this chapter. Hope to read the next soon:pinkiesmile:

it's not tears....




why is there no Caramel icons!

:fluttercry: Poor Caramel, I really hope this ends happily for him

I can safely admit that I audibly cried out, "NOOOOOOOOoooooooo!!" when I saw that Twi was with Mac. :fluttershysad:

Hee try not to hate Twily too much :twilightsmile:

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!! :twilightsheepish:

all of my head cannons are in a state of chaos now. ;w;
all of them.

Thank you! I'm looking forward to what happens next.

I know it's cliché, but I'm a sucker for happy "I've actually loved you too the entire time" :pinkiesmile:

Well, there's nothing wrong with a little cliche now and then :pinkiesmile:
But seriously though...in the world of shipping, I'm pretty sure every ending is cliche... :ajbemused:

this has got to be the single most adorable chapter in this entire story. i awwwwww´d so hard it took me a few moments to realize the looks i was getting.:twilightblush:


You got that right! So rather than shunning them, I say embrace them!:rainbowwild: I demands squee-worthy Pony Yaoi with happy endings!:pinkiehappy:

Hee, D'awww away, brotha!
I'm glad you found it D'aww-worthy :raritystarry:

Hee, yess...
Pony Yaoi with happy ending is best Pony Yaoi :yay:

Aww, I'm sad to see it complete, but it's been a fun ride. This has been such a squee-worthy story. Loved it:pinkiehappy:

As a coltcuddler myself, I can easily say this is the best gay shipping fic I've seen. :heart:

D'aww, thank you! :twilightblush:
Coltcuddler brohoof? ^.^/)

OMG somebody else that gets it
Mares can be weird... Really wierd:pinkiecrazy:

Stallions are creepy, too! :rainbowderp:

D'aawwww they're zo zweet to each other lol

Such a D'aaaww story . I loved it
Do Moar:rainbowwild:

I definitely will do more. But it'll take a bit o' time, mmkay?
So uh...just wait for a bit, mmkay?
Too much South Park...:rainbowlaugh:

I'm not the only one that thought date rape near the end am I. But the last line made it clear. I enjoy the writing of this story even though I'm straight.

Squeee!:pinkiehappy: That story was SO CUTE <3 It's so hard to find any decent length Caramac stories, definitely one of the cutest of both ships and stories evar!:pinkiesmile:

Hrm... I didn't even think of that!
You have a sick, sick mind, mister! :flutterrage:
Just kiddingggg :pinkiesmile:
Glad it was clear at the end!

Hee thanks! :pinkiehappy:
Dunno if you've read it, but you could try "Winter Apples" by Cogs. Just Google it, and you'll find it.
It's longer than mine, and I think it's written beautifully :raritywink:

Sorry. He just got sleepy waaaay too fast. So it was suspicious:trixieshiftleft:

Hey, thanks! I'll check it right away! :pinkiehappy: Thanks bro! :pinkiesad2:

Are ya' going to continue!? I hope so! It's such a GREAT story. U-Uhm.. I was expecting.. Uh. .A.. N-Nevermind! Just a certain Scene!! It was WONDERFULL! :rainbowkiss:

D'aww, thanks!
Unfortunately, thou hast reached the end.
I um...I was going to uh...um...write a....certain scene...you know...the super...lovey-dovey cuddly types? :twilightblush:
But I decided against it because then it would turn those innuendos into a full-on mature story.
And anyways, they just got together. There's no need to rush into that sort of thing! But I will continue with these two some time later. I'm working on a F/F currently (Mares? For shame! Coltcuddling is the best!).

Heh, I'm glad you liked it! It's so true though! Like actually...when do they ever eat anything that's non-apple? Like...never!
On a separate note, what the hell is wrong with Fluttershy... :rainbowhuh:

I adore this fan fic its really really good, i literally squealed every time i finished a chapter :twilightblush: and i read it twice already. i really enjoyed it and im looking forward to your next fan fics :pinkiesmile::yay::pinkiesmile:

Aww, so kind of you! :pinkiesad2:
I'm almost done with edits for my next one, although it is F/F, so I hope it turns out to be a good one! :raritywink:

Purplesmart likes more-forward ponies... Thunderlane might be bipony.

Silly Caramel, missing a possible opportunity to free up Mac.





Prin-ceeess Biiiiig Maaaaaaaaac!

Eee hee hee!

LOL Purplesmart. That took awhile for me to figure out XD
I was like... Purples-Mart? Do you buy purple things?

Princesses need love, too! Even the ones with dicks... :twilightblush:

OMG... as a coltcuddler, and critic, I must say that this story has it's ups, it's downs, and over all is the best CaraMac ship I've ever read. I love it, it pulled at my heart strings, and made me cry like once or twice, but it also made me laugh. It had real character development. And it takes alot to do that. Good job! I'd even call it fan-tastic :heart:
:moustache: Frank West, signing out.

Oh thank you! I mean, that's really nice of you to say :raritystarry:
I'm glad you liked it :raritywink:
Hrm...I like Pinkie Pie better, but Rarity just has such amazing facial expressions of fabulosity :pinkiesmile:

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