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Storm Butt


I am an aspiring writer, romance enthusiast, and a horrible over emotional mess. If you're here I hope you like homosexual stallions. If you enjoy my work and want to support me I have a Ko-Fi!

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It's been a long year since Soarin and Braeburn went their separate ways due to Soarin's work, and somehow every opportunity for the two to meet up was canned in one way or another. They keep in touch through letters, trying to keep their pathways of life entangled no matter how far apart they remain. What either pony was half-expecting to be a simple week of passion and discovery grew, in a way, through this connection. But still, it's not enough. This becomes clear when Braeburn's letters one day cease to arrive.

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I honestly don't know what makes me feel so refreshed whenever I read this. Otherwise, good way to kick off the new series.

Here we go again:pinkiehappy: I wonder what will happen. Or already happen... And AJ in character box! This gonna be epic!

>Releases chapters way earlier then expected
>Releases sotries way earlier than expected
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Ha ha, good to be seeing you enjoying your writing! This is beliveably set up, and Soarin's emotional motivation makes sense, even if he's a tad dramatic. Either way, looking forward to actual romancings to come~!

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Like it how you used Soarin's perspective this time. Thanks for the early release this time and keep up the good work.

ASdgnsalf, I've been so excited for this, and it's finally here!:heart: Thanks so much for uploading it early. :pinkiesad2:

I wonder why Braeburn hasn't written back. Poor Soarin... :fluttercry:

But this was really awesome. It was cool how you started focusing on Soarin, since Winding Roads started with Braeburn.

I can't wait for more:heart::heart::twilightsmile:

Yay, glad that you wrote this so quickly after finishing the previous one. Hope that Breaburn is doing alright. Eagerly waiting for your next installment.

Early release? EARLY RELEASE!!!!!

TLC

Anticipation!:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:

I read your other story today when I saw this you got a new fan :heart:

685259 I have never played that game! XD.

684908 Don't ask me why, I just don't want to write anything but these two at the moment.

It's a good thing though... :raritystarry:

684699 Too bad AJ won't be in for a while XD.

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But she'll apper later. That's good, this gonna be awesome:rainbowlaugh: Let me guess... She will have same problems as Bare.:pinkiehappy:

"you get this super early since I wasn't lazy as buck for once"...your previous story was one of the most frequently updated stories I was tracking...and that was LAZY to you?!:rainbowhuh:

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I wish my laziness was as productive as yours is...also good start to the sequel since i seemed to have forgotten to say that.:twilightsheepish:

can't wait for more!
update soon

can't wait for more!
update soon please

can't wait for more!
update soon please

Um, Um, I know you wouldnt really kill Braeburn, it would ruin the story but, Im really afraid, update soon!:twilightsmile:

Ouch... I think that sooner than later Solarin' gonna kick some flank, hard.

Oh my...that was...wow, a lot worse than I thought it would be. :raritycry::raritydespair:
I need the next chapter! I need to know what happens!

Ok ok ok, at least he isnt dead I would have cried if he had been (I was on the verge of tears) man, I hope he wakes up. Either way you are a fantastic writer and I hope you write more soon, because I will die if left on this cliff-hanger for a while.:fluttershyouch:

I came thiiiiis close to manly tears...

:pinkiesad2: poor brae, if i was soarin i would be like.... nooooooooooooooo.com/vader.jpg

'He wasn't worried about getting lost; all pegasi seemed to have a built-in extreme sense of direction in their heads.':derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::facehoof:

Oh hey a link........*click*......GASPS!!!! *climbs to top of roof, holds iPad in air*

YEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

Emphasis on everyone hating him, gosh..... If your gonna be an antique hard ass to someone for their preference, just leave them alone. Don't be Duce and attempt murder. I mean realy. Get ALONG little ponies!!!! :flutterrage:

Sighs..... But people do that anyways, I wish it weren't true. Your not making this up.:fluttercry:

If this happened a month ago why is there still so much blood.

707127 Criminal investigations? Not told to touch anything that might contain evidence, BAD WRITING, or just laziness of the sheriff?

Please dont kill Braeburn. Please, please please dont! :fluttercry:

707379 As in why is Braeburn still bleeding.

707583 Wounds re-opening, they are meant to be pretty severe.

Yeah, that's right soarin, go after your colt friend

hopefully, everything will work out.

696630 This sentence makes total sense! :derpytongue2:

Can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

Also, I really am hating appleoosa.

The short chapters dont matter, but it took a while for you to write the third chapter, I was on edge, I hope Brae gets better.

:flutterrage: I hope Soarin kills whoever hurt Braeburn! :raritydespair: Poor Brae Brae!!!!

Anywho this is still the best Soarburn fic yet! Can't wait for more!!!! :heart::pinkiehappy:

Oh mah gawsh interaction at last. I'm going to sound incredibly silly when I say this but I can't get over the way you write Braeburn and Soarin together! I mean sure, independantly they're both still good and well-written, if not a little weaker on Soarin's end, but together your writing just becomes way too endearing, I love it! With how well it's worked before I was in such a mad suspense for the first two chapters, so it's good to see it showing up again! Lovely work, as per usual!

727092 I hated having them not be together as well. And I agree, Soarin is weaker. But this story is meant to flesh him out more, since the last story Braeburn was fleshed out enough so that people ignored just how flat Soarin was at times.

I want to know who hurt Braeburn so I can kill them. I don't have this katana so I can slice fruit!! I use it to kill griffons and who ever is mean to Braeburn.

Well, I'm hoping that the low point of this story is past so there's nowhere to go but up. You've really put these two threw a hell of a lot, breaking Breaburn's legs has destroyed his applebuckin career, and Soarin might have to choose between his career and Breaburn, so I don't know how much more your willing to beat them down before things get better.

I'll have you know, I can bitch! It's what I'm good at!
If I were a pony, I'd have a bloody tiara on my flank!:flutterrage:

I like the story so far, though. Minus how dark it's starting out, of course, but fingers are crossed.

I say burn appleloosa to the ground :pinkiecrazy:
They are ignorant enough to deserve it at this point.

Also, good chapter, looking forward to next one.

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