Soarin' doesn't mind the stallion taking care of him and he might even admit that he's keen on the buck. It's a respite from the starstruck life he's become accustomed to, and he enjoys some of the best pies he's ever had, but, with all things, there's always things that come up. A collection of chapters based on novel prompts.
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Pies do realu solve everything
Holy lord, a colt cuddling fic I haven't read.
Holy lord, a Soarin' colt cuddling fic I haven't read.
Holy lord, my favorite shipping pair I haven't read.
I love you D:
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I have to thank you so much! I mean, not liking colt/colt shipfics and not being a Braeburn fan and still giving this a chance? Wow, thank you so much! And I don't think I've ever really been told my writing style was worth admiring, so thank you very, very much for that! I'll strive to continue writing as well as I can!
This is a sentence without an exclamation mark.
(Icy) Thank you! I'm glad you like this!
Haven't given much thought to Braeburn x Soarin', but the story's humor and writing style are enough to keep me reading
Enjoyed reading this, looking forward to a new installment
15625 Thank you so much, Some Person. It's always so... good feeling when someone is reading my story purely for the style instead of the content. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
19834 I'll try to get the next chapter out soon, HikariAkai! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far!
Prompt: Take a novel, and use the first full sentence on every tenth page as a prompt.
Try that with the Mockingjay... Part of the Hunger Games Trilogy. It will give you some very good sentences to start off of, but they will all be somehwhat dark... Time to read your story now.
hmm... interesting... I don't know really what to say.. This is the first time ive read a colt-cuddling fic... but good job andyway...
This is very intresting. I like the plot. I'm not a fan of Colt on colt Shipfic's, but I like this one. I gave it a 4.5/5
Good work on it, can't wait for the next chapter.
I like the plot. Please continue
60297 I haven't read the Hunger Games, never even thought to try it. I''m glad you liked it?
74515 I love it when people say that. It just fills me with joy and nags me to finish the next chapter, I'll try not to keep you waiting!
81317 I don't think there is plot yet, hah! But really, thank you and I'll try to get the next chapter up soon!
This is one of the few fics I found particularly pleasant to read. As English is not my native language, reading a story in English can be quite tedious for me... But your style and the story really caught my attention. Not to mention there are sooo little coltcuddling fics out there !
Really looking forward to seing the two colts getting closer and closer !
"You smell like apples", "It's a conspiracy" Best.Line.Ever. I love this series, and I can't wait for more! No Braeburn or Soarin' emoticon? I am disappoint :(
What the hell ill give it a try.
It's pretty good but I suggest laying off the accent for braeburn just a teensie weensie bitsy wit
Can't wait for the next chapter
and i agree with Theengineerbrony "You smell like apples, It's a conspiracy" definitely has to be the best line ever
FINISH THIS OR FLUTTERSHY WILL CUT YOU!!
Intriguing. The present tense narrative threw me at first, but it actually works pretty well, especially when switching between the characters.
Hmmm... SoarBurn? BraeIn?.... Gimme a sec...
Ah, nevermind. It's good, I'll leave it at that.
Keep it up.
Goddamn. I don't really like M/M ships that much, and yet here I am. Well done.
Mooooore
fanxxx
Still, really cute but not overly homo yet. Well done!
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I shall do no such thing!
not sure if should read or not
STILL WAITING
Sorry guys, for the really long wait. Chapter five has been giving me a really hard time. It feels like a really contrived chapter to me, but I finally got everything I wanted in it, so now I just need to type it up! I really appreciate all you guys commenting, every time I get an alert for one I immediately start writing, even if it's in school! So look forward to a chapter soon!
New Chapter! I took some advice and tried to lay off Braeburn's accent a bit. I'm also trying to show both the boys' emotions without moving really fast, but without moving at a snails pace. Sorry if the chapter reads a bit stilted, it was really hard to write.
it has been almost 5 months since this was updated. I was almost certain this was an abandoned fic.
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thank you
Take your time. But don't forget us!
This chapters looking good and I think that your showing their growth quite well
“I thought you guys, like, brought home some flappers or something,”
Spitfire, you're amazing; I hadn't expected the 1920s to come calling.
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Much as I enjoyed the thick accent you wrote for Braeburn, I'll concede that it did need some effort to decipher.
Question! What'll happen to these guys once the Wonderbolts leave town? Long distance relationships can be troublesome, even for people who are truly committed to one another, and I doubt that the airshow will be taking up permanent residence in Appleoosa.
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I'm glad you enjoyed that line! I couldn't resist putting it in! And on Braeburn's accent, I'll go back in previous chapters and tone it down. It's so fun to write that I get carried away really easily!
That's a good question, actually. Starstruck, won't really deal with that aspect of their relationship (as of the outline now, that might change), as the story ends before the Wonderbolts leave, but I can say that the two would remain friends even after that. I don't want to spoil the story but Starstruck is about Soarin' coming to terms with himself and his insecurities (which vary from his sudden interest in Braeburn to his age, to the pressures of being a star). Braeburn helps him out a lot, and they'd stay in touch as often as they could.
You forget "e" in the title.
Very good fic. Emotions slowly raising, not to fast, not too slow. Character are well developped, story is well-written so far. I hope for something extra-romantic next time.
Oooo, this is getting really good, I bet they kiss in the next chapter.
It's really cute, the relationship between them. Everything is going well, keep it up.
The scenario is quite believable, btw. I could easily see someone doing what soarin' did. As for spitfire playing as his little 'matchmaking assistant?' A good choice. I think she's going to be a great encouragement for him, and having someone to confide in is a great help for anyone trying to figure their feelings out.
Other than the occasional little typing errors, I don't have any problems with this. I look forward to reading the rest.
Oh, and keep the accent like it is here, it's great.
I am absolutely loving this! The writing is great, and the romance is just so cute~!
Please, please, PLEASE write more!
Oh, I really, really hope this hasn't been abandoned... I'm really enjoying it so far! ^^"
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This.
Good pairing, and I like where it's going.
Yay! I would squee with delight but i fear that my windows would smash at the mere sound of it
Soarburn (Braerin?) Are the best couple there is (followed so very closely by Caramac!) and seeing this i was like 
Brilliant story so far, just hoping that you haven't abandoned us! Can't wait to see more!
I'll admit, this fic is a weak spot for me. The occasional wording or grammar hiccup, but still a solid entry. I only hope nothing... bad happens between the two.
:D
:D!
Wait... is this incompleted or the fic just died... I don't wanna read something that might not continue
I've past over there so much already
...
And also...
SoarBurn is the best shipping
When does he next chapter come out?
Lovely story.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need more!
Piss comes in many flavors? Eww.
Might wanna edit your chapter title, pardner.
If you don't terribly mind we would like more please?
2370528 yea i loled at that before i started reading this chapter, and i would loveto read the next chapter, but if its writers block or anything, i'll just fav this and move on to another story. take all the time ya need.
What happened? It's been over a year since the last update.
is this abandoned?