The Wonderbolts are set to perform in the town of Appleoosa. But when a flight accident puts Soarin in the care of a certain apple farmer, what will become of the relationship between the two?
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I must say, I found it sweet. I would like to see it expanded. +6 from me for a simple, elegant story.
There are a few errors, a few misspellings, but it was good quality nonetheless.
Very nice story but then I am getting a soft spot for these two. Would enjoy seeing more of them.
There was a tense change when Soarin is in bed, to first-person point of view.
. Really, really nicely executed.
However, this was really sweet. I have a huge soft spot for them so this got me right in the
Fantastic job.
Dis gon be good.
I must admit, I love this shipping. I cast a vote for MOAR.:twlightblush:
Just what the doctor prescribed. This story is really sweet, they seem really nice together.(I hope they survive the inevitable rough spots that can plague new couples). Luna darn, I'm going to jinx them before they even fully commit. I'm such a pessimist. Please write more. Even if it's for another story.
I really like this, tracking this in case you decide to continue this!
This is really cute, and I hope you continue it.
There were quite a few grammar/spelling errors, so I would work on that if you continue this, and as RadaVonVon pointed out, an unintended tense change when Soarin was in bed.
But Braerin is a really cute ship and I'd like to see how things develop when they're together in Ponyville!
Ahem...
M
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Aw, I really liked this! Super sweet! How touching when he gave Braeburn his flight goggles!
Plenty of errors, a few tense changes, grammar problems, word misuse...
Content-wise, however, very sweet. I feel the wording for some dialogue was weird, like the character wouldn't have put it quite like that. For example, Soarin' seemed too proper and serious at points when we know he's a goofy guy. The scene where we find out Spitfire gave that ship a little nudge could have been a little different as well. I think Spitfire would have asked ever so slyly how Soarin''s day went and hinted only once that she set him up and Soarin' would have let that slowly simmer in his head before clicking things together himself.
Overall, it was a nice read despite the many errors and the iffy parts here and there. Overall, I give it a 7/10 plus a thumbs up.
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I'd say that was a fair review.
Soarin I think can be serious at times, I mean his famous pie reference occurred at a party of sorts, so he can have fun and be more calm at times.
As for the grammar, EEEYEP. I'm not usually that great with grammar, and the story has been passed along to other people and has been edited, yet the errors are still there :P Cuz thats how I roll.
But anyway, thanks for the review and glad you liked the story regardless of the authors grammar/spelling massacre :P
Awww..... So cute, more soarburn pls.....
Bacon? Really?
Well that aside, the story was pretty good, although it felt a bit rushed after they met Strong Heart, don't know why but the parts before that was felt...better? I don't know.
Anyways, a pretty good story.
oh my gosh please do moaaaar
well im with the rest...MOOOREE!!1
also..a good and cute story yeah it have a lot of potential hope to see a sequel
Good luck
I'm gonna have to repeat what the other have said won't I? Ok. MOOOOOOOOORRRRREEE!!!!
Please make a sequel? 
It wouldn't hurt to go back and fix the few grammaitical errors. As for the story i find it rather well writen and I would like to see how well you do with this possible multi-chapter story.
Bravo my good friend!
download.gamespotcdn.net/d4/user_images/591/moar_2.jpg
MMMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE
Very Sweet.. very-well written, although i feel the story is rushed.. But the whole story is amazing! Here's a like!
So, when's the wedding?
I loved the story so much. I felt like it was happening before my eyes.
P.S - You should totally make another story about Soarin and Braeburn!!!!
P.P.S - PLLLLZZZZZZZZ??!!!?!?!?!?!?