Very good, Very good indeed, Love how your not only dealing with one coming out with ones own sexuality but are also dealing with the pony's around him and their own issues.
Yeah, Braerin is the term I use for Braeburn/Soarin - I've also heard Soarburn, but my bff is a huge fan of the ship and he calls them Braerin so that's what I started using. Anyway, I was imagining that if Braeburn were in a relationship with another colt, and told this to Big Mac, maybe he could end up telling him the truth and have a confidante within the family. I also just have trouble imagining Braeburn as straight in general, lol. However, now that I know it's Little Strongheart I'm interested to see how the Apples deal with a buffalo in the family if they can't even handle a pegasus!
Anyway I really enjoy the story so far, and can't wait to find out more! Also are we going to see anything between Dash and another mare?
My one and only complaint is that you seem to be having trouble with getting the point of view to stay the same. You keep switching from first to third person.
Sqeeee so adorable.
Sad, but adorable
What is this drop of liquid falling from my eyes?
Great chapter as always
Wow, that was some really nice introspection. Don't see nearly enough of it in other fics! Really enjoyed that chapter.
this is very good, it puts mine to shame
Very good, Very good indeed, Love how your not only dealing with one coming out with ones own sexuality but are also dealing with the pony's around him and their own issues.
373579 Is that Braeburn and Soarin? That's actually my favorite m/m ship, but no. I was trying to allude to Breaburn and Little Strongheart.
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Yeah, Braerin is the term I use for Braeburn/Soarin - I've also heard Soarburn, but my bff is a huge fan of the ship and he calls them Braerin so that's what I started using. Anyway, I was imagining that if Braeburn were in a relationship with another colt, and told this to Big Mac, maybe he could end up telling him the truth and have a confidante within the family. I also just have trouble imagining Braeburn as straight in general, lol. However, now that I know it's Little Strongheart I'm interested to see how the Apples deal with a buffalo in the family if they can't even handle a pegasus!
Anyway I really enjoy the story so far, and can't wait to find out more! Also are we going to see anything between Dash and another mare?
My one and only complaint is that you seem to be having trouble with getting the point of view to stay the same. You keep switching from first to third person.