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After a hangout with her best friends, Sweetie Belle catches a flu and has to skip school. Luckily, Rarity is there to nurse her to health and establish some quality time. But as they enjoy their get together, Rarity notices that it's more than just the flu that's making Sweetie Belle uncomfortable. A casual conversation turns deep as a major truth is revealed.
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Cute!
10299243 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it
A sweet sisterly story, I found it very cute!
Good job!
See, I did get around to reading stories again!
Lol, I'm not entirely hopeless.
10299266 Don't say that. You're never hopeless. Still, thank you for the read. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Incredibly heartwarming - I always enjoy a good sick day story and this one was really cute. You did really well on the dialogue too, it flowed quite naturally
10299283 Thank you for your kind words. However, most of the credit should go to my editor as if not for him, this story wouldn't be nearly as good
Stories centered around sisters definitely make for a great read, especially when it's between siblings like Rarity and Sweetie Belle. On note about the latter, we know she's a very gifted performer with a taste for the arts. Yet while she has a natural voice and once put together a play for the ponies to see, I will never forget that time she refused to perform the solo for that talent show back in Season 1 just because she was scared to sing in front of a crowd. But then again, I want to get that from her I really want to: Being in front of people can be very scary, particularly when we worry about how judgmental they can be (Critics can be the worse and that comes from one like myself).
Still, it's nice for Sweetie Belle to have a sister to talk to about these ordeals. And going through the difference between doing casual pretending like during recess and comparing that to actually preparing a show as part of a class ordeal. Just to have someone close to you saying they'll support you and encourage them to confront what scares them in order to do what they enjoy, I do believe that's just what Sweetie needed to hear.
10299292 Thank you for your kind words. Although without you, this story wouldn't have been nearly as good
10299308
Without your vision, this story would never have been possible.
Suntwi06:
You comment on my page saying ( I hope I don’t disappoint)
I am here to say you have not disappoint me Suntwi06
This story is quite good, it first time I want to read more of your stories suntwi06. So I am pleased that I decided to watch you.
10299419 I'm very grateful you enjoyed it. Also, not gonna lie, I speed read though your comment the first time and I thought it said that you were disappointed>_<.
10299449
Congratulations on the Feature!
This story does deserve it!
i.imgflip.com/4651fm.jpg
10299587 Wait, it was featured? I didn't see it(even with the M tag off)
10299595
I think it booted off, well I took a snapshot.
It hit the board, I bet it'll bounce back up there again soon.
10299601 May I see the picture? Its not because I don't believe you. I just want to see it is all. Or rather, post it here so everyone can see
Nice little story
good job my friend.
10299665
I did, it's in the link.
But I'll post it again.
i.imgflip.com/4651fm.jpg
10299675 Oh. Sorry, I didnt see the link>_<. Regardless, that's suprising
10299677
It was there, even if it were brief.
I was like, awesome that sweet story reached the Feature!
I take snaps if I see any of my friends on the board, lol.
10299668 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it
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10299682 The only downside is that not many get to see it but it's a start
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10299595
You can see which stories were featured by refining `bookshelf:1`
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/377419/SunTwi06/stories?q=bookshelf%3A1&order=latest
10300956 Thank you. This will be incredibly useful
Hello, I wrote a review for this story. I hope you find it helpful.
So cute and heartwarmig faved :3
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That was the idea going into this story. We're very pleased you enjoyed it.