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Ava have always been a doormat and a really quiet person. But one day, one of her favorite characters from her favorite show: My Little Pony, came into her world. She tells fluttershy how she needs help standing up for herself. Fluttershy knows just what to do to stand up for herself.
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While the story needs to be edited better(no offense to the editor themselves as my content is/was way worse before being edited), the story does have charm and for me, that's all I need in a story
10289926
Thanks
10289928 Of course. Also, just to make it look better, I suggest when crediting the editor, just their name is fine as it looks cleaner. Like this-
Pinkiepartypie29
Of course, you don't have to do it but just food for thought. Sorry if I'm imposing
10289932
Thanks for that. I’ll use it next time
10289966
Thank you so much
I agree this story does have quaint charm, besides we all start somewhere.
I had fun, above all that's really all a story should be.
Good job!
10290001
Thank you
I really liked this! Sometimes the stories between humans and ponies don’t flow super well, but you did a really nice job on this one! One teeny, tiny tip would be to not be afraid to be more descriptive, but, like I said, I liked this story a lot.
that’s so Fluttershy to help out like that.
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Thank you