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Ralph R. Winston writes about adventures! Wonders! Not little ponies nor the dainty one that can't take a hint. But little did he knows, she's leading him to his next great adventure.
Written for the F**** This Prompt. Might make a full story out of this later.
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I respect that.
I wrote this as a contest entry with the prompt being Ship Your Self-Insert With One/Or More of The Mane Six. I took a lot out trying to hit the deadline and in the main fic, I guess the romance would be a lot slower with an over-arching plot. But with lots of angst cuddles. Angst cuddles is like a drug to me. I'm addicted.
I liked that a lot as a first chapter.
Imma follow you around.
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Thanks. I hope you enjoy what you'll find around here.
Human Husbandry sounds like the perfect title for a story set in the Your Human and You-verse about a human being found by the Apple family and them proceeding to try and breed him or her.
That's it, that's all I got.
It's aight but I prefer less 'epic' reasons for the HiE. The whole one thousand and one (always write the words, not the numerals) story idea is more, uhm, mythic than others I've seen but it usually ends up being a huge emphasis in the story and not just the human being there, ya know? Not that I think this would have gone that way or anything but the potential for the ponies to end up as background characters is high - though finding a thousand and one stories for Ralpho might keep the ponies in the forefront, having him fight dragons or punch Discord or whatever OCs do these days with the ponies around is tempting to some. Uhhh ...
Yeah, that's it really. Otherwise, I think it's okay. Ralphy is a bit on the 'douche' end of the 'douche-wetnap' scale but we've just met so I'd be willing to give him a chance to get outside the kicking Fluttershy thing. If you do end up making this a larger story, I'd give the readers a chance to meet Ralphmeister before he punts Shyshy off a cliff.
Dayum son you deserve a follow so I'mma follow you so I can comment on all your blogs.
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6302382 and to anyone who does write that try to not make it dark, there has been too many "human tortured and/or mistreated" fic popping up lately.
I love the way you set the tone between the two characters. You can almost smell the grimness from the human, and flutter-shy is the foil.
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Made the edit.
Meh. I guess it's would be spoilers but uh, Fluttershy has been implying that Ralph has been going about finding stories the wrong way. He should just plant his feet in a place and live interesting moments, treasure every day. Gooey gushy stuff like this.
I tried that before. It got rejected. But seriously, I'll give it a think.
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Awesome.
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That sounds like a great idea! Thanks for the suggestion.
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I'm glad you liked it. I was worried that I was moving too fast, trying to spit out the story before the contest deadline. Some ideas stayed in the finished work (Fluttershy's edits and the whole notebook gimmick) but a lot of other ideas were cut out. Depends on my mood, I might add back in some things or if I'll expand the whole thing.
6303655 please don't make it dark.
It looked alright. Not bad but not great, i'd say average imo. Only issue is it ends completely abruptly other than that good job.
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Yeah, so long as you keep with that plan it'd be aight. I just know that a lot of writers would take a more action-y route - to the detriment of the story in my opinion. This would work as a vignette series I think. Small looks into Ralph-o-man's life in Equestria. Slice of Life at the finest.
Its Good. Slice of life is where it's at. Would love to see more. Though applejack s one sentence feels very ....odd. I would check it again.
Finally, a fic that touches my feels.
I liked this story... Mostly for its potential to be a great tale but also to stop right there and leave people content... Well most people.
The image that really spoke to me was when he put down his huge pack and boots next to her suitcase because that implies so much
Been a while since I read a story that told so much with so little words
6403020 Oh, hello Tenno. Fancy meeting you here!