My Cute Classmate Is A Horse?!

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Miharu Oushima finds his life turned upside-down when he comes to the realization that his classmate, Fluttershy, might actually be a horse.

Written in a anime-ish, light novel style.

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Regina Wright

Regina Wright #1 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

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I hope it's good.

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HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #2 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 2 · ·

This is pretty funny and accurate in an anime-like setting.

Takarashi282

Takarashi282 #3 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

For a textual anime, it's pretty descent. I've done worse though. A lot worse. x3

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #4 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

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Glad you like it. I wanted to hit all the beats of typical anime but also the keep the slick style of Light Novels. Light Novels are known for being straight forward, having little prose and loads of dialogue. I've probably slipped up in a few places but since this the OVA version, I don't feel too bad about it.

RazDelacroix

RazDelacroix #5 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

Well, that was a nice diversion into the channeling of the spirit of light novel ova's. Well done. Now if you excuse me, I apparently need insulin shots for all the sudden infusion of excessive sugar that just manifested.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #6 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5497535 I'm not big into light novels, but I've watched enough anime to know the references. For some reason, this reminded me of Rosario Vampire with all the monsters/yokai running amok.

nemryn

nemryn #7 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

Well. That happened.

Alaborn

Alaborn #8 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

Shijro isn't a proper Japanese name. Perhaps Shijiro?

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #9 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

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I got the name out of japanese name generator. Can't be surprised that it's not all that accurate.

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #10 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

That pic is great, and this story is pretty damn funny. Never read an anime light novel myself, but pony took anime out of my priorities.

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #11 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

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I'm glad you liked it and thought it was funny. I have a real hard time doing funny. This is the highest praise. Thank you.

Braininthejar

Braininthejar #12 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

As an anime fan, I must say, this makes a frightening amount of sense.

There are some punctuation errors to work on

Telaros

Telaros #13 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

THERE'S NO WAY MY CLASSMATE COULD BE SO CUTE!

*kicks horrible attempt at an anime reference off the screen*

Looks cute. Needs more danjo danjo.

Shine

Shine #14 · Jan 13th, 2015 · · ·

Ms_Fruit_Bat

Ms_Fruit_Bat #15 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Oh my deer lord!
This made me laugh myself out of breath!
This was great, and I would read more of this!
The last line was pure comedy gold!

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #16 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · ·

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I'll give it a comb through today or tomorrow. The story really wrote itself, I'm telling you.

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #17 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · ·

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And I'm done, I think. This is really just the OVA version though.

I have plans on creating two more anime-ish ~~stories~~ shorts ~~idon'tknowmaybeamockumentryparodyofeighthgradersyndromwhatever~~.

Seether00

Seether00 #18 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · ·

The first path of eroge game

Philosophysics

Philosophysics #19 · Jan 14th, 2015 · 3 · ·

...

His logic is so screwed.

Also.

I DEMAND

A SEQUEL!

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #20 · Jan 19th, 2015 · · ·

This is sheer brilliance. This is awesome.

And the numerous grammatical errors actually...work for this story, and I recommend NOT editing it, because it reads like a fan-translated light novel.

Unbridled Dolly