• Member Since 15th Apr, 2012
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Lux


I am a writer, artist, role player, and fan of MLP!

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(Second Person Fanfic)

You are a shy person who loves animals and has recently found a job and a home at an animal sanctuary. Then you meet a pink haired girl with a fancy for yellow clothes, a way with animals, and a very shy personality. Will you be able to help Fluttershy overcome her fears? Will your relationship be just friends or something more?

Chapters (13)
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The pic looks like that one chick from the FF13 series. I think her name was Sarah.

You meet a girl in an animl shelter that bears a strange resemblance to a certain yellow pegasus

Should be animal, by the way.

Story itself? Not big on 2nd person, but this wasn't bad at all.

Am I the only one who dislikes the cover picture? Looks like she's made of clay.

Lux

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It is ultra realistic, not like the more cartoony looking pictures. Really it was the first one I found of my Deviant Art favorites.

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It was strange for me to write A Girl Named Pinkie Pie which was also in Second Person, but I got used to it. Second person is interesting because it puts the story more on an Everyman point of view.

Also, 25 likes already? Wow! :yay:Thanks all. Err... not sure about those dislikes though. Just hitting the Dislike button does nothing to tell me what needs to be fixed. :fluttershysad:

Yes, there will be dialogue in the next chapter as this was a prologue.

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Dunno, I still prefer this cartoonish stuff.

I like where this is going. Mostly because I can relate to the character.
In real life though. On the internet I'm kind of a dick sometimes.
You my friend have earned a favorite

please more...............................MAKE IT LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!:raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

2896700 I agree, this needs more!!

Damn you for teasing us in this way, but I also love you for it!!!!!

2896655 my average chapter is less than 600. 800, tops.

Lux

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Most of my chapters I try to get around 1000 or whenever it feels ok for me to stop.

Another fine chapter! You got Fluttershy's personality down to a T!

Lux

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Thanks!

Just a note: Next chapter will be tomorrow.

Lux

In the meantime while waiting for the next chapter, have a picture of a human Fluttershy in her cottage.

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I think this will be a preview of what we'll see in the next chapter.

Angel's female? Interesting. Wonder how long it will be till the shyness wears off and her assertiveness comesout.

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I don't think the ever say what gender Angel is in the show, so I had to take a guess.

As for her shyness, given how long it took the Fluttershy from MLP, I'd say it'll be a while :yay:

2939564 The MLP Wiki states that Angel is male.

Sorry.:twilightblush::twilightblush:

2939564 Also, as this is the topic of our discussion, I think this is rather appropriate here...
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Lux

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Edited. Wasn't a big fix.

Interesting story, hope to read next chapter soon, also Angel is a male not "S=he" .:scootangel:

People... laughed at Fluttershy....and I can't do anything about it due to the armoury being closed on a weekend except for emergencies...

Sex tag... won't be anything like that...

You know, I thought the same thing. Then one of my stories ended up being about 1/5 of the chapters requiring the tag.

Just give it time.

Lux

And we hit the 50 likes mark (fires off Party Canon) Thanks to all who read and liked my fic so far.

Wow... Fluttershy's personality is pinpoint perfect in this story. I literally heard her voice while reading this.
You never cease to write good chapters, my friend!

Oh, I bet there's a few dreams I could make come true for her!!

maybe one is about her in equestia, and how she got to earth!:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::moustache:

This story is.... :twilightangry2:

TOO DAMN AWESOME!!!!!!!! :twilightsmile: Seriously, Fluttershy is my favorite pony and your story is just making me like her more. :pinkiehappy:

Lux

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Well, this Fluttershy didn't travel to Earth. She's more of another Fluttershy, like one from our dimension.

Those bullies? Sorted. Oh, this dumpster? No, that's tomato ketchup. Not blood. No, don't look in there!

Anyway, I too was bullied, from around year five to year nine. Don't know what that is over there, but it finally stopped when I pinned someone up by the neck and smacked them in the jaw, and later that day threw another through a window. I didn't even get detention. Needless to say I wasn't bullied much after that.

And now when I see them around town, they steer clear of me.

I remember being bullied i remember it started in 4th grade it ended in 7th when i smashed a bullies face into a brick wall.

I remember the days I was bullied until eighth grade and I'm the strongest and tallest in the school standing at 6 foot 3 now in heading into ninth grade this September
Lol:pinkiehappy:

Also I almost killed a guy almost got expelled as well but oh well I'm lucky I guess:twilightsmile:

I to was bullied, I had problems with speech so there was that and I didn't have much friends so that to. Just a good thing you didnt snap like me. I was a 1st grader and a bunch of 3rd graders were bullying me and had me against the wall. Finally I snapped along there amd everything faded out. I fell back into consciousness with me choking the kid with one hand and his friends backed away because I was glaring at them. Thankfully someone saw the whole thing and the bullies hit first and I saved myself in self defense. But right before the middle of of freshman year im a sophomore now I was still bullied.

TL; DR I was bullied and I snapped at a young age, also ibwqs bullied till the middle of freahman year

Sorry for this being long. I just need to let it out sometimes

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Lux

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I like to think of it like Equestria Girls. There's the Fluttershy we know as the yellow Pegasus and the girl going to Canterlot High School, and in my fanfic a girl that looks more like our type of human but with some similar traits.

Quantum physics and Multidimensional structuring for the win!

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Ohh, I guess that makes sense:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:!

Yeah... he's taking her shopping.

Also...

Also the tattoo that Fluttershy is afraid to show, it's somewhere actually fairly innocent

Damn, was hoping it would be around her butterfly.
:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Lux

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Not shopping... yet, although that is a plan for later on.

So... Is the tattoo mid-to-upper thigh?

Lux

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Yep, but I'll get into that later.

Yeah... wonder what else happened on that dream...
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And to the cheering section.

I'm not sorry.

Try being bullied from 2nd to 7th grade and then the 9th. I hated myself and others but I learned to use the pain as an example to never trust that many people again

Lux

Expect the next update to be tomorrow or Thursday.

I'll give you a little spoiler: a certain group of three fillies we all know and love will be making an appearance. :scootangel:

feels a shudder go down his spire...

Oh god... kids... someone save me!!!!

Mom: The kids are coming for a play date with your brother
Me: TIME FOR GENOCIDE!

3084455 RUN FOR THE HILLS KIDS!! AHHHHHHHH

What am I doing,” you heard here say, “Why am I

Think you meant 'her' not 'here'

You herd her get u

heard... unless there are more then one of her!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Well, there was one comment that I forgot to put last time, but it seems I will have to use a slightly different one to what I had planned.
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