Living here in Ponyville can be tough if you're not mentally prepared. For one thing, you are surrounded by talking ponies. And the other thing? Well, living in Ponyville as a human of course! These four-legged creatures freak out every time they see me. And they call me weird?
To survive here, you need bits (Cha-Chings $). To actually get bits, you'll need a job. I must've been crazy, setting up a bakery shop right next to the already popular one, Sugar Cube Corner. But hey, a dude's gotta live, ya know?
But...business has been horrible. I can barely make any sales. Probably cause I'm a human. And I'm right next to Sugar Cube Corner. Will anypony ever come to my bakery shop? Will my shop be able to last?
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
My very first HiE. Hope I don't do too badly at this. Also, cover image is adorable.
Cover art by the great BurnedPigeon
The perspective shouldn't change mid scene like that. Otherwise, this story has my curiosity
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Derpy! Don't steal muffins...
This is AWSOME please keep going!!!!!!
5849268 Yeah, I was wondering how readers might react to this. I often heard its not a good idea to do so. Will restrict myself to one perspective!
You have caught my attention. I will withhold judgment until I see some more. This is a good start though.
A Very Merry Unbirthday to You!
TRADE PLACES!
I'm interested. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Interesting name. Is there a story behind it we'll find out later?
I'm not quite sure it was the best business sense to start his place next door to the cakes, but yeah, Saucy's choice. Quite an interesting story so far.
5850051 I have to agree with Link on the perspective change thing. Maybe add a line or something to show the shift? It's not so much the fact that the perspective shifted, it's that it did it without warning or any real note.
5850866 yeah. I might edit the chapter when i have the time. Should've thought it through before going for it
i assure you this wont happen again
Hello! Chapter one has been edited! If you have read this already before the edit, please! Read it again. And to those who just found this, enjoy!
Flawless as always, or at least I think its flawless. Well it is to me
Ill be honest, I'm here because of the cover art
I'm kinda ashamed...
Oh well time to get reading
Shit, I hope something good happens to his business! If he doesn't get enough customers, he will have to close shop!
But....Melody is a da best.
Looking good so far, nice job and keep it up! :D
Really dislike HIE But screw it cause I love Ditzy and I love the way you write. I'm not kidding that was the best thing I've read all month and I loled so many times.
Did you realize oh my glob is a real meme. I didn't. I litteraly found out about five seconds ago.
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Yay update!
Nice chapter, hehehe, good show!
Updated but still on hiatus?
Glad to see a new chapter up and this fic still alive. It's been nearly a year and we're all happy to see it back!
The name of this chapter DEMANDS copious amounts of Metal Gear!!!
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The baker is going to develop a pastry to surpass cake.
"I thought you died alone,
A long long time ago"
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Everytime I read the title my first thoughts are of a shipping between Doctor Whooves and Derpy