Derpy has had a not-so-secret crush on Ponyville's premiere cellist player for a while now, but sadly the only pony who hasn't figured that out yet is Octavia herself. Too shy to admit her true feelings, Derpy instead gets Octavia alone for a private cello lesson, in hopes that a little bit of flirting will nudge things in the right direction.
Unfortunately Octavia is as blind as a bat when it comes to romance.
My entry into The OctaDerp Fan Club's first ever contest. [Winning Entry, huzzah!]
Chapters (1)
Holy crap that was good! Derpy's attempts to get Octavia's attention are so adorable. I want to see what happens next. Any chance of a continuation?
4595537 Trust me, I want to continue it, but I've got my hands full with a bunch of other projects right now. Maybe after it all dies down I'll give this story a few more chapters.
awesome, cute and funny
wish it ended on a better note♫ though.
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Man, I think the story is perfect as it is. No need to continue it IMO. I mean, I would be nice to know if Octavia recoprocrates Derpy's feelings, but that ending was just PERFECT. I haven't considered myself a shipper of this before today, but now, I definitely love this couple!
This story was simply hilarious
I don't even support this ship (and I still don't) but I still liked this story. I really liked how you ended it too. Make the readers create their own ending. Did Octavia return Derpy's feelings? Or did she reject her? Great cliff-hanger for an ending.
Was i the only one thinking derpy would play this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4x9MJXI0KbY&index=76&list=LL4_tKxMHs5SPmAmSkSM5iAg
I'll pray that derpy is not in the friend zone.
Sequel?
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I've been undecided on a sequel for quite some time now... but if you want more OctaDerp, the group might be doing a prompt collab soon.
(sorry for not responding sooner, I've been traveling.)
If they got together, that'd be 2 shades of grey.
Haven't read the story, but I noticed that Octavia's expression in the picture is the same as in the tag. lol
One small problem that's bothering me. There are not 8 notes in an Octive, there are 12. There are 8 Whole Notes in an Octive, though.
Besides that, cute fic!