Discord says goodbye.
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This is sad
Man that hit me hard. I'm still actually crying. It hurts having those you care about go. Amazing story. At least they will be with each other and other friends.
I AM TOTALLY IN TEARS
That hurt.
Thank you for sharing it.
Well done.
it's sad but you have write it for expressed the most of sadness possible
I cried ... I thought Twilight wasn’t going to outlive her friends...
Oh man that's a gut punch. But a beautiful one at that. Bravo.
I didn't wanna feel happy today anyways...
But in all seriousness, this was a good read. And a really... really sad story.
Excuse me, I think I need a good cry now.
Ouch...
I wasn't going to read this, because I didn't want to feel any sadder than I already did after the finale, but I went and did it anyway. Sort of like Discord in this story, now that I think about it.
This was beautifully done. Thank you for writing it.
Ouch...ouch, ouch, ouch, ouch, ouch...one of the most well written fics i've read in recent memory, but also the most painful...
Well, at least to your credit, you didn't go the Oh if we slayed the dragon life would be terrible shinola.
As for it being horrible... well, perhaps it wasn't up to Somber standard, but you wrote a story that made its point, and did it well.
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I'd like to think, this time, no. That if Discord is aware, that he's aware of this moment forever. The feel of Fluttershy in his arms. Her smell. That he gets this moment and can ignore everything else. Discord's previous awareness was due to him being transformed against his will. He was focused on the outside world.
That's my take anyway.
Well... so it was that part that inspired this fic. More feels to add to the pile.
Wow that hurt a lot more then I thought it would. Great story, thank you for writing and sharing
I also made a promise. A promise not to cry.
You can turn me to stone, now.
Goddamit these are good tears but goddam. Good story.
The feels are real with this one.
Beautiful... a few mistakes here and there, but they don’t matter. They don’t. Warms the heart, tugs at it. Thank you.
How fitting.
Forever yours
Well, guess my eyes are getting some extra irrigation today too...
Thanks for writing.
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Aye, this could be interpreted to actually be a terrible fate.
But it doesn't have to be, and I don't think this is that sort of story.
Well, damn. That's sad.
I'm guessing by what they mean, when they die or are close to death, Twilight encases them in stone so they last? That's genuinely depressing, but bittersweet.
I enjoyed it. A couple errors here and there, but not bad at all!
God dam onion ninjas
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A wild I Am The Night appears!
Thank you for this.
I was listening to this while reading. It was a mistake. A beautiful, perfect mistake.
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The first of many of these kinds of fics to come, and almost certainly not the last to make me cry. Not by a long shot.
Man you really know how to write a story that is beyond description
Fuck man, ninjas cutting onions round here.
Well I got some good news. Twilight is not immortal!
Jim Miller revealed the writers themselves don't know how long everyone lives, including her. Well, I guess its kind of open to Interpretation, we can believe what we want. Discord however will likely outlive Fluttershy, so that's sad. 
The reading was relatively good. A few small errors (which I can point out, if you want), but the emotions conveyed were real, and very relatable. Definitely, the feeling of letting go and being unable to do anything tugged at me the most and seeing Discord willingly sacrifice his own freedom to be with somepony he truly cares about is strangely, heartwarming in the end.
The fact Spike and Discord were still able to nerd out despite the levity and how Fluttershy, even in her brief "youth spurt" was still able to forgive Discord for breaking his promise to her, indicates a good eye for character detail and personality. Again, another well done aspect of the whole piece.
Thank you for this.
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Yes it is open to interpretation!! And i'm thankful for that!!
ANd I must say, this tory made me tear up quite a lot!! Such a wonderful story!!
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Sure. I'll fix them if you point them out.
Dammit, that made me cry.
Made me cry. Great work with such a great story ^^
The true heartbreaking horror of the finale.
Ultimate Kindness... Multiple meanings when you have context added.
Kindness is Fluttershy's element.
Kindness is the mercy, chance, and love she gave to Discord.
Kindness is allowing Discord and Fluttershy to truly be together...
The Ultimate Kindness is giving them a dignified end and truly preserving their love and memories in their final moments by ending it on the best note possible.
Oh God, the style, the writing, the little tidbits here and there, everything!!!
They're all conspiring to invade my heart!
Rest in peace, you two, rest in peace.
Ow. Right in the heart. It’s been one emotional jab to the old ticker after another today. Beautiful sentiment and a wonderful image.
Somber, that was beautiful, very sensitive and trutly emotional, I really cried with this, very good job.
Aight Imma cry.
I legitimately cried while reading this.
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Fluttershy's name isn't capitalised at the start.
Proper spelling is "delectable".
Angel Bunny's name isn't capitalised at the start.
Proper word/spelling is "hoard".
"McBiggun", with a "u" not "e".
Maybe use "ponies" instead of "people"?
Squizard only has one "z".
Mis-spelling of McBiggun.
Captain Wuzz has two "z"s.
Discord's name isn't capitalised at the start.
Plural of hippopotamus is "hippopotami".
Use past tense of remember, "remembered" instead. Better flow.
"Draconequus". You're missing an "n".
I'd put a comma after "Quietly".
Use "into" instead of "in" for the last sentence.
"Your", not "you're".
"She", missing an "s" in the last sentence.
Mis-spelling for draconequus again.
"Shmarity", you're missing a "h".
Mis-spelling of Squizard.
Swap out "person" with "creature".
Use plural of word.
"On the base".
"She might not even survive it."
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"Good news, the character you've become attached to will probably get Alzheimer's disease and die a slow and painful death"
Just sayin' - they may be getting older, but age spells are not out of the question. They still have time. And Limbo if they really need it.