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Feather Gem


I'm a little bit too obsessed with a certain Spirit of Chaos.

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Discord has lived a very long life and has done all he can do to use his chaotic powers for good, just like his best friend asked him to before she passed.
Since then, he has been waiting for her to send him a sign allowing him to venture to the land after.
He believes that the sign has finally come.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

:applecry::fluttershysad: I want to cry... :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I wish I could say I cried stalliony tears... but that would be lying. I am crying my freakin eyes out like a child.

A most beautiful story, I love it. And I also love the song :)
Oh, through the divide I think I've heard a whisper
But was it really you, or just the breeze.
Oh, in every shadow I'll search endlessly for
A sacred sign that proves you true, so far from me.

Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?
Can you feel me...
Cause I can feel you.

Oh, the gate is waiting in the land between us
And if you only knew, that's where you'd be
Oh, it's been hidden by the dreamy darkness,
One day I know you'll pull me through, can you feel me?

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Think of all the lives you might have lived
and all the hope you might have given
if the stars were turned another way.

Can you feel me?
Can you feel me...

Oh, the gate is waiting in the land between us
And if you only knew, that's where you'd be
Oh, it's been hidden by the dreamy darkness, but
One day I know you'll pull me through, can you feel me?

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Oh, through the divide I think I've heard a whisper
But was it really you, or just the breeze.
Oh, in every shadow I'll search endlessly for
A sacred sign that proves you true, so far from me.

When i want to cry to sad stories i often use this soundtrack
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zkvQte7JWpw

or more MLP related
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZZNDiU9ljw
:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair:

well done and freaking ouch.
my feels have gone numb from over exposure to the blinding epicness of this story.

Why must you make me cry?!!! Still this was a beautiful piece. ^-^

Comment posted by BackgroundNoise deleted Aug 4th, 2014

That is very fabulous I like :twilightsmile:

Liquid pride everywhere!!

Touching, and very sweet, have a like.

I cried! You have touched me.... congratulations...
Beautiful story, keep it up for everypony....

Comment posted by RandomHamster33 deleted Aug 16th, 2016

This story is one of those delightfully frustrating oddities that tends to pop up now and then. The narration is repetitive and overly telly, the formatting is atrocious, and the plot flow is nothing to write home about.

Yet this is still a touching and emotional piece that was definitely worth reading. I didn't cry, but I came damn close.

Your skills appear to be dialogue and setting up emotion. For most authors, that's 4/5 of the battle. If you can get everything else fixed, you could be on your way to some seriously good stories.

Feather Gem, you are amazing.
You're a wonderful writer. Your character portrayal is excellent and your descriptions are magnificent. Your stories are a delight to read.
Seriously, you have a brilliant talent.

My tears will forever stain this story until the day its deleted

Comment posted by ology deleted Sep 7th, 2015

I haven't cried over a pony fix in a long time truly a lovely story. Needs more tissues.

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That song works perfectly for this. Author stop making me sad.

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