We Finally Did It

by Rated Ponystar

Wait, "It"?!

If there was one thing every creature loved about the weekend, it was a time to relax and have fun. Lessons had been heavy with homework and projects, due to the second semester almost ending, but one of the benefits of having friends was helping each other out to get it done faster. Of course, most of that was thanks to the bookworm changeling known as Ocellus, but the others pitched in as well. Even Gallus and Smolder, after they were done griping about it.

With the last of their assignments over, the group agreed to do some fun in the sun after their last lesson on Friday. Sadly, a storm from the Everfree Forest put a damper on that.

“This. Sucks.” Gallus said, placing his jack of spades on the pile in front of him. With nothing else to do, the group was forced to stay indoors in Gallus and Sandbar’s dorm room playing cards. “I don’t know what’s worse. The fact that this is the fourth game I’m losing or that I’m bored to death.”

“Oh suck it up,” Smolder replied, smiling as she took in the biggest pile of chips yet. “Wish these were jewels. I’d have enough to eat for a week with the pile I’m building up.”

“I still wish we played Monopoly,” Ocellus replied, shuffling the cards with her magic.

“Oh no,” Gallus said, shaking his head and holding up his talons. “Last time we played that, Yona actually thought she owned The Royal Castle and tried to kick the Princesses out while moving her entire village in. That was just utter chaos and I’m still picking wool out of my feathers.”

“Speaking of which, where’s Yona and Sandbar?” Silverstream asked, flying in with a plate of freshly made cupcakes.

Snickering, Smolder helped herself before taking a big bite. “Knowing those two...” she swallowed a bit chunk. “They’re hugging it out while nuzzling each other's neck like the love stuck puppies they are.”

The four couldn’t help but smile at the fact it had been three months since their two friends got together. Everyone was surprised when Sandbar and Yona announced they were going steady instead of just a single date night at the dance, but they were all happy for them nonetheless. The two could often be seen nuzzling each other, winking, and even going out for lunch or dinner on the weekends. It was adorable, even if it got a bit silly sometimes.

“Remember when Yona tried knitting some winter clothes for Sandbar?” Silverstream, giggling.

“How could I forget,” Smolder laughed. “She made the turtleneck as long as an ostrich and the rear end of the pants so tight he moved around like he had to use the bathroom all day! Ha!”

“But he still called it the best gift ever, dawww,” Ocellus squealed with delight. “Just feeling the love from them makes my heart aflutter.”

“Wishing you got a special changeling or something?” Gallus asked, smirking with his eyebrows up.

Blushing, Ocellus rubbed the back of her head. “Well, I wouldn’t mind finding somecreature...”

“Oh, I want a special somecreature too!” Silverstream cried out with excitement. “Someone strong, funny, handsome, and can help me get a big family!”

“Woah there, Silvey. Get past first base before you start thinking that far,” Gallus said, snickering.

“But I’m not playing baseball? I’m playing cards,” Silverstream pointed out.

“Figure of speech, Silver. A figure of speech. I’m getting you a book on such sentences on your birthday...” Gallus muttered as he looked at his cards. However, before they could begin, the door opened and in popped Sandbar looking tired and sweaty, but smiling like he won the lottery. “Well, speak of the devil. Look who has finally arrived.”

“Hey guys,” Sandbar greeted as he went over to the group, sat down and took a cupcake in his mouth. “Mmmm, that’s good. All that hard work really puts up an appetite.”

“Where’s Yona?” Smolder asked, placing a card down.

“She’ll be here soon. She’s just recovering,” Sandbar answered, finishing his cupcake.

“Recovering from what?” Smolder asked again, eyebrow raised.

“Oh, we just finally, did it.”

There was a long silence as a confused Sandbar tilted his head upon the looks he was getting. All four of his friends were staring at him with wide eyes and jaws wide open. Gallus dropped his cards in shock while blushing as Smolder suddenly slapped herself to make sure she was hearing right. Ocellus had turned bright red to the point that she was almost as red as an apple while Silverstream had crumbs from her half-eaten cupcake drop from her mouth.

“Um, what?” Sandbar asked, his eyebrow raised.

Gallus shook his head and rushed towards his friend, gripping his shoulders. “Wait a minute! When you said you two finally did it, you mean you did... it?! That kind of... it?!”

“Uh, yeah? We’ve been preparing for weeks, but after a lot of preparation,” Smolder held her hands to her mouth to prevent her from laughing but Sandbar ignored her, “we decided to do it.”

“But... but... You...” Ocellus looked ready to burst like a volcano before she walked over to a nearby sink and started drinking from it, to calm down.

“Dude... like... seriously? Since when did you two decide this?” Gallus asked in awe.

“About two weeks ago,” Sandbar replied, shrugging. “Yona thought it was time we finally finished what we started. Sure it took us a while, but we finally mastered it today.”

“How do you master?” Silverstream just muttered to herself before shaking her head. “But what about the consequences?!”

“Consequences?” Sandbar asked, rubbing his chin. “Well, I guess there was a problem with Yona being bigger than me. But it’s not about your size, but how you move after all when you're in the action.”

“Oh, sweet tap-dancing Thorax help me...” Ocellus whispered, covering her ears while Smolder started laughing as hard as she could.

“But I meant... what if... what if she uh...” Silverstream tried to say, her talons poking each other as she tried to come up with the right word.

“Well, he is a pony and she is a yak. I don’t think they have to worry about... little surprises,” Gallus said, pointing out the obvious biological differences. He then turned to Sandbar. “You did use protection, right?”

“Of course, last time Yona really went at it and we both got hurt. I was sore all day!” This made the others rear back a bit but Sandbar didn’t notice. “But after some precautions, we were able to make it work really well.”

“H-How well? How well was she?!” Smolder asked, unable to help herself as she struggled to stay sitting still.

“What are you, a perv?” Silverstream hissed silently.

“Shut up, this is good,” Smolder replied.

“Oh, it was great. Yona was an absolute beast. The way she moved, and flipped, and stomped. I’m surprised you couldn’t hear us from here,” Sandbar answered with a smile, making the others blush again from the... images that were appearing in their heads. “Of course, I was no slouch myself. I asked my Dad how he was able to do it with Mom and he taught me a few moves. Yona was laughing with joy as I lead us straight into the climax at the end.”

“I bet she was...” Gallus whispered with a whistle.

“But aren’t you both a bit... young?!” Ocellus shouted, fluttering in the air with sweat beating down her neck. “I mean, you’re both still around fifteen-years-old! I don’t know about the rest of you, but I think that’s way too young to be doing this!”

“Not really,” Sandbar shrugged, “I mean, Professor Rarity was doing it our age. She even helped us out during our practice sessions.”

A much longer and more uncomfortable silence went on as instead of red, the four were starting to turn green. Ocellus had enough and soon was puking in a trashcan while Silverstream looked ready to faint. Smolder finally stopped laughing and stared at Sandbar like he had grown two heads while Gallus was thinking about where he could find the nearest professional authorities.

“Of course, she’s much better than Princess Twilight. I heard she did it once with Princess Celestia and she’d messed up so bad that she was all but forbidden on doing it again with her,” Sandbar pointed out.

That was the moment all four of them looked at each other with pale white faces. Thoughts of quickly running away from Equestria forever started to form in their minds while trying to convince their leaders not to do anything anymore with the ponies. They might have been cute and friendly on the outside, but clearly their society was deviant to allow such immoral actions.

“Hey, you guys should join in too. I think the six of us can-”

“NO! ABSOLUTELY NOT!” shouted Ocellus, finally having enough as she grabbed Sandbar by the chest and shook his body. “We. Are. Not. Having. An. Orgy! I don’t know what kind of sick and twisted things you ponies do here, but I am not going to have my inner purity be taken away because you guys are a bunch of sex freaks!”

Sandbar pushed her away and stared at Ocellus like she was insane. “I- What?! What are you talking about?! Orgies?! Sex?! What brought this up?!”

“Uh, you and Yona, duh?!” Smolder shouted. “You were just telling us how awesome you two had it in bed together?!”

“What? No! What are you talking about?! I was talking about our dancing!” Sandbar shouted, turning bright red.

“... Huh?” The four asked.

“Yeah, after the dance, Yona and I decided to try to get better at dancing together. Professor Rarity has been helping us and we finally finished our routine. We plan on entering a contest to try it out,” Sandbar then raised his eyebrows. “You seriously thought me and Yona had just had sex? We haven't even kissed yet!”

“Oh, thank goodness,” Ocellus sighed in relief as did everyone else. “For a second, I thought...”

“I think... maybe we all need a break...” Silverstream said, slowly exiting the room.

“Yeah, I need a shower or ten...” Smolder replied, exiting as well while still being red in the cheeks.

“I’m going to read a book... a nice long and calm book...” Ocellus muttered, following her friends.

When it was just Sandbar and Gallus, the two just looked at each other in silence before Gallus asked, “What? I sleep here.”

“Ugh, I’m going to find Yona and take her outside on a date, even if it is raining. You can think your perverted thoughts to yourself,” Sandbar grumbled as he exited the dorm room and slam the door behind him.

Gallus stood there alone, in his dorm room, before rushing over to his desk, opening a hidden drawer, and pulled out his big black book of ideas. Grinning, he took a pen and started writing while muttering to himself, “The Dance of Stormy Passion By Bluefeather G. ‘It was a dark and stormy night as the Prince Waterline, ruler of the Pony Ocean Kingdoms, secretly met his lover, the Ice Yak Princess Yuna, under the cover of night. Little did they know that at long last, their forbidden romance was going to turn hot as their loins began to dance against each other…’”

Author's Note:

I had this idea in my head that kept telling me to make this and make this so I finally did it.

Comments

[foxsevent]

You should've rated this as mature just for kicks. :)

[Jedi Wolf]

[Munro]

classic xD good work and that ending, no one of his friend's better find that book xD

[SuperPinkBrony12]

And now you know why you don't play the pronoun game, Sandbar.

[Twinkle_Shine]

This was funny they really thought Sandbar, Yona, Rarity, Twilight and Celestia done...IT( sex)

[SpikeSmolder fan]

OMG this was priceless!

[Thisisalongname]

I liked it, was a fun read. Only recommendation I have would be to remove the "puking" part. Kinda overkill on the reaction and not really warranted in that situation. Is thinking of Rarity so gross that it can cause you to vomit?

[Rated Ponystar]

9855734
It was thinking that Rarity was doing a threesome with Yona and Sandbar. Keep in mind Rarity is an adult while Yona and Sandbar are teens.

[RainbowDoubleDash]

I am choosing to believe that Ocellus was flustered largely because she’s annoyed that she couldn’t be next door and get a great spicy meal. And her bit at the end about orgies and inner purity is because she didn’t want to run the risk of getting fat. Like, really fat.

[Scholarly-Cimmerian]

Wow. Just... wow.

[MagicLover2128]

I didn’t know Gallus wrote stories?

[SuperSonicHeroes]

Well that was pretty funny.

“Oh, sweet tap-dancing Thorax help me...” Ocellus whispered,

Haha! I guess Thorax has officially reached the status of becoming an expression like Celestia and Luna.

[RainbowDoubleDash]

9855818
Let’s be real, you can easily imagine Thorax tap-dancing. And it’s probably pretty sweet.

EDIT:
And then I was listening to this and now can’t get tap-dancing Thorax out of my head.

[TheFVguy]

Gallus! My boy, why you writing erotica of your best friends?!

[Trinary]

9855747

I like to think she didn't want to be tempted into leaping onto a certain dragon and confessing her feelings. XD

[Late_Night]

9855743
i'm not seeing any real issue there, but then again, that's me
also, loving the covert shipper gallus there
nice touch

[Grailm]

Ahh classic misunderstandings.

[RainbowDoubleDash]

9855869
Dammit I have something for this, but I’m stuck at work.

I’ll be back.

[Anonomis]

What we got here is failure to communicate

https://m.

[OmniFox]

I can imagine what will Spike say to his friends as he tells it like it is with his relationship with Gabby,

[Trinary]

9855927
Looking forward to it! XD

[RainbowDoubleDash]

9855869
Right. Thought this up when you made this comment but at work on an iPhone wasn't the best place to type it up.

Also now there is a slightly expanded version of the below posted as a story in its own right here, posted with Rated Ponystar’s permission. This version will stick around for posterity.

Smolder awoke when the door to the dorm room opened and the dim hall light crept in. There had barely been any noise, but dragons were light sleepers, at least as long as they weren't bedding down for a century-nap. Opening her eyes just a crack, she saw Ocellus. Or rather, she saw a snake, but the snake had familiar patterns and closed the door after itself with its tail. Snakes weren't that polite, whereas Ocellus was more than polite enough to close a door after herself and even turn herself into a snake so as to make the minimum amount of noise.

"Didn't work," Smolder mumbled, rolling onto her stomach. "Woke up."

"Oh," the snake said. There was a flash of blue fire, and Ocellus was back to her normal amazing technicolor lovebug self. Smolder grinned a little at the sight, but hid it by burying her face in her pillow as Ocellus spoke up again. "I'm sorry."

"S' okay." Or that was what Smolder tried to say, anyway, but with her mouth in her pillow it was a bit closer to "mmm hmm-ffmmm". Ocellus seemed to get the intent, anyway.

"I didn't mean to stay out so late. I was just...full. Very full. Trying to walk it off."

"Mmmph."

"Because of...you know. Sandbar. And Yona. And everycreature else...talking. And feeling."

Dragons of course always felt heat rushing through their bodies, but a particularly warm flush went to Smolder's cheeks. "Mmmph," she repeated, tail flicking under her covers. She used her claws to hold them down. She tilted her head a little so that she could actually speak. "Something 'bout inner purity."

Ocellus was doing that thing she did. Blushing and trying to hide it by turning her face away, but that just gave the observer a better view of the other half of her face. It was cute, Smolder had to admit. "Um...there wasn't a lot of love, but there was the, um...the other emotion, and it was everywhere, and it's very rich. Filling. Not nutritious, really, but...like cake. Like four big cakes all in one room and I was the only one who was eating them."

"Mmmph."

"I don't want to get fat."

Smolder did nothing to hide her chuckle. She shifted, laying her arms on her pillow and her head on her arms. She used a claw to indicate the tiny, lanky changeling, the smallest of her friends. "You of all creatures don't have to worry about that."

"Mmmph," Ocellus said, echoing Smolder. She did the cute blushing thing again, made cuter by using one foreleg to rub another. "U-um...a-and also, I was...uh...j...jealous."

That was a new word from Ocellus, and Smolder smiled. "Jeaaalousss...?" She purred, turned so she was on her side, one hand now resting on her hip, claws drumming a beat on the sheet that covered her. Behind her, her tail wagged again, but she kept its movement slow lest she drag the sheet off. "Do tell."

Ocellus turned to look directly at Smolder, or as directly as any creature with compound eyes could look at anything. In spite of that, though, she was shaking just a little. "B...because...because it would mean...th-that Sandbar and Yona...did...it, first. Before any of the rest of us." She licked her lips. "Before...us."

Smolder drummed her claws on her hip, but otherwise remained quiet for several seconds, drawing it out. She knew that Ocellus would do cute things around her to promote little emotional reactions from her, and looking right at her and saying what she'd said and how she'd said it had to be intentional, too. It had been a little unnerving to think about at first, but now Smolder thought of it like little love-bites. Which is exactly what they were. And of course, the great thing about changelings was that if you knew you were looking at one - that one was nibbling on your emotions - you could change your mood, pick their meals.

Ocellus had assured her that it wasn't any different from a creature feeling an emotion and expressing that emotion, thereby causing others around them to adopt that emotion too. Emotions, she'd said, were like fire. They spread out from one creature to the next to the one after that, warming and caressing everything they touched. Changelings just got a few extra benefits from emotions that other creatures didn't.

"So," Smolder said at last. "How jealous were you?"

Ocellus took a tiny step forward. "A little."

"A little?'

"...a lot."

"Shouldn't be jealous of some creature for having something you don't."

"I wasn't jealous of something I thought Yona and Sandbar had." Another tiny step forward. "I was jealous of what I thought they'd lost."

Smolder chuckled. Her tail reached over her leg, its tip curled just a little, and when she started drawing it back, the bed sheet went with it, an inch at a time. "I'm a dragon. I don't get that. Isn't it always better to have things?"

"Not everything."

"I dunno..." Smolder sang in a low voice. "I think this thing we're talking about is pretty valuable."

"Mm-hmm," Ocellus said. A much larger step this time. She was right up next to Smolder's bed, looking down at the dragon. The bedsheet was no longer covering Smolder. Her claws tapped out a steady rhythm on her hip's scales.

"Irreplaceable." Smolder spread her wings out behind her, stretching them, popping the joints. Arched her back a little too.

Ocellus licked her lips, and wobbled just a little. Smolder's smile grew at the visible sign of how good her emotions - one in particular - must have tasted. Ocellus put one hoof on the bed's edge. "Not irreplaceable." She leaned down. "Trade-able. But only once. One." She leaned down. "Time." Her other hoof came forward and rested on Smolder's shoulder. She came forward, leaned into the bed, brought her head right up so that her mouth was only a tiny tremor away from Smolder's lips. "Only."

Oooh...Smolder wasn't sure who was manipulating who's emotions at this point. And she didn't care. She reached out and wrapped her arms around Ocellus. Their eyes closed as their lips met. Neither had mouths really designed for kissing, but they made it work as Smolder rolled onto her back, holding the changeling tightly so she lay on top of her. Ocellus was more delicate. It would be better if they started with her on top.

The kiss ended. Ocellus started to draw head head back, back, but Smolder held her close, opening her eyes and looking deep into Ocellus' own. The changeling had hit all the right buttons tonight. First cute. Then coy. And finally, playing on her greed. Her draconic desire to have things. To take things. She'd already taken a lot of other "firsts" from Ocellus, built a private horde of intimate memories...and tonight that horde was going to get its crown jewel. And for every one of those firsts, Ocellus built her own horde of firsts from Smolder. A horde that Smolder could share, for as long as she had Ocellus. And dragons didn't give things up easily.

"Mine." It was a growl, a statement of fact and a promise, all in one.

Ocellus grinned down at her, leaned down, gently nibbled on her neck. Smolder's toes curled. "Yours," Ocellus responded.

Smolder made a mental note to remember to thank Sandbar at some point tomorrow. She wouldn't tell him what for. Unless Ocellus wanted to, of course. Lord it over them in proper draconic fashion.

But that was tomorrow. Tonight...tonight was her and her lovebug.

[Xanderfox]

Ok Gallus being a romance novelist I did Not see coming.

[Trinary]

9856299

... *Thunderous Applause*

Seriously, I am blown away!

[Trinary]

9856299

Please, for the love of Luna on her throne, pleeeease tell me you'll incorporate Smolder into Lunaverse next!

[RainbowDoubleDash]

9856323
I’ll see what I can do. Sadly the fact that the world was already so developed makes it had to bring in the full Young Six. Sandbar, Gallus, and Smolder would be easy enough. The Lunaverse world map doesn’t leave room for Yakyakistan on the main continent of Cissanthema, but I could place it in the lower parts of Rime (a northern continent analogous to Antarctica, but, y’know, in the north), or in Occidenta (not!Asia).

There’s been a Hippogriff State on the map since the beginning but we haven’t done anything with it. It’d be fairly easy to add, but seaponies on the other hand have a completely different origin, so Silverstream would probably remain a hippogriff full time (also a name like “Hippogriff State” doesn’t lead me to think of it being a monarchy).

Oh, and of course, Ocellus was already added last year.

[Trinary]

9856343
Yeah, that's the same problem I have in wanting to work them into my own stories: I love the characters, but the specific setting that allowed for most of their development doesn't exist in my stories (I have a few issues with the Friendship School as established in the show), so I'd be putting them in but it'd be hard to get them to the same place character-wise that made me want to incorporate them in the first place. Frustrating.

But even if they are different, it's still a delight to see them: as was the case with alien Ocellus in your Ling stories.

Still, I am awed and blown away that you'd write up a 1K scenelet based on a comment I made. You made my night!

[RainbowDoubleDash]

9856347
Wait, 1K? I wasn't keeping track, I wrote it in the comments field. How close is it to actually being 1K...1264? That's more than two hundred words over the FiMFic minimum.

Hey, 9855743, would you be okay with me publishing this? I'd of course give full credit back to this story. And to you as well, Trinary.

[Trinary]

9856352

1,239 words, if my Word doc's counter is accurate.

[shinigamisparda]

HA! "Bluefeather G", huh?

[Scyphi]

What I'm trying to figure out why Sandbar thought he needed to refer to it as "it" in the beginning at all. I mean, obviously he would've saved everybody some discomfort if he hadn't.

[tirilee]

[Unshackled_Unbroken]

Hah! I knew he meant dancing, that part with Rarity literally gave all the answera.

[Not-Yet-A-Brony]

HOLY #@!&! I couldn’t stop laughing while reading this! Poor girls, they need some serious brain bleach. And Gallus better hope none of his friends find his fanfics. Great job with this story!

[Kembrius]

this gor enjoy this fanfic

[TerraZeal]

Gallus ships Sandbar and Yona. XD

[GryphonLover709]

Wow! That was awesome!

[Dan]

Why does this disturb Celli-chan? Are hardcore lustful emotions literally distasteful to changelings?

[NicLove]

“Well, he is a pony and she is a yak. I don’t think they have to worry about... little surprises,” Gallus said, pointing out the obvious biological differences. He then turned to Sandbar. “You did use protection, right?”

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[Dragon Dred]

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[canehdianbacon]

OH MAH GAD!!

[The Lunar Rebel]

I always love misunderstood comedy; espicially this segment from YGOTAS

[Julian the Dreamer]

That was hilarious XD

[anon26182]

This is what happens when you play the Pronoun Game.

[Hillbe]

For Spikey and I it was a little awkward at first but with proper rhythm it was fabulous
Did you use any protection?
Of course we had all the Royal Guards as back up, In case I came up short

You were splendid darling...
It takes two to get tangled

[Darkstarling]

Alright, well I'm officially in stitches. What really got me was actually "What? I sleep here."

[Amos Anon]

There was a long silence as a confused Sandbar tilted his head upon the looks he was getting. All four of his friends were staring at him with wide eyes and jaws wide open. Gallus dropped his cards in shock while blushing as Smolder suddenly slapped herself to make sure she was hearing right. Ocellus had turned bright red to the point that she was almost as red as an apple while Silverstream had crumbs from her half-eaten cupcake drop from her mouth.

Smolder; SMACK! Heehee, that mental image had me giggling.

[Juria]

I came, I read, I was thoroughly entertained.

[Lord Zarcon]

I listened to a reading of this, and it was great.

[Lemon Lime Light]

I needed a good laugh tonight, this was hilarious and had me literally laughing out loud