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Spike has many friends in his life, but Twilight has come to realise that he has virtually none his own age. So, knowing of three little fillies who have just recently started spending time with one another, she decides now's the perfect day for him to make some.
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This was cute, if a bit simplistic. Good job, author!
A fun, short one-shot that gave me a smile on my face when it finished
I knw it's just a one-shot, but it would be fun to see scenes like this about their interactions in other episodes that featured Spike or the CMC's in significant ways...like after the CMC got their cutie marks, or after Spike went on the migration or got his wings or became Dragon Lord.
This was a very sweet story, I loved it!
I wouldn't mind seeing more interactions between Spike & the CMC during key moments in the show like another reviewer pointed out, would make for quite the tales!
...and this is why Spike doesn’t spend much time with the cmc.
This was simple good fun to read. And I agree with other comments, it would have been nice to see other interactions between Spike and the CMCs!
He should spend more time with them.
Great job on this enjoyable one-shot. Loved seeing Spike spending some time at the Crusaders' clubhouse. Yeah, the exchanges concerning Twilight's study group as well as bits and pieces of Scoots' family life were great. And I'm glad Bloom was able to patch things up with Twist. Spike had a good point about how they go to the same school, but only recently became friends. Yeah, the bit about Spike's crush on Rarity being spilled in earshot of Sweetie (who seems to have signs of having a crush on HIM in the end of this one-shot) was another well done detail.
All in all, splendid job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in all the right places.
They're rarely shown together because it would highlight Spike being an (unequal) part of the adult world rather than treated as a child. And raise questions like "why do they go to school while he works?"
Can't have been too long after "The Show Stoppers," then.