We all know Scootaloo’s tough, that she’s cheerful, and positive, and a generally good, friendly mare.
But even Scootaloo’s capable of falling apart, with the right words; the wrong words. And she heard those words. You’ll never fly.
Now, Rainbow Dash just has to figure out if she’s capable of being put together again.
Suicide/Self-Harm tag added for implications of the act. I don't find it absolutely necessary, but I'd rather be safe than sorry.
Now rewritten, and desperately needed, too, I fear...
Think you made a typo
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Thank you!
Oh I can't believe I didn't notice that!
Nice! Even if they Never make scoots Fly in the Show, we can.
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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You're Welcome!
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Yet, you didn't correct it?
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How do you mean?
Is there another error I missed?
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Well, I'm not sure what error Seral refers to, except for the fact that the first paragraph repeats itself. (And no, it's not corrected. I have double checked.)
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Oh okay. I should've noticed that a lot sooner
I thought you guys meant the space I missed, but I'll go fix that right now. Thanks!
There should only be one sentence that says Ponyville
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Thanks! I'll go fix it now.
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You’re welcome
This is good stuff. A little darker than I tend to look for, but told very well. And an ending that didn't feel like a cop-out. Excellent.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! And about the dark part, yeah, I get that. This wouldn't be a story I would directly look for either.
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I just tend towards sappy, fun, and wholesome stuff. Sad gets a pass since I'm in the fandom for the FEELS.
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You and me both
When i first clicked here, i was scared
In the middle of it i was shocked
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Is.. that a good thing?
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Was not sure how to word it, but lets think that you got a reaction from a reader wich affected its emotions
And it was good, because you impacted with the story, wich means it worked!
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Oh okay. I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you
I feel really bad for scootsy