Rarity and Twilight have a nice, simple, delicate lunch with absolutely NO sexual overtones whatsoever.
Written to try and break myself out of my mental block and other struggles related to writing. for the Monochromatic chat.
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that's a very good pie.
I'd half-expected a ghostly Pinkie trapped under a tree, but this works too. Hope it helped break up your writer's block.
9791603
This is genius
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9791603
The first time I saw TEL's cover pic in the feature box, for some reason I thought it was going to be a murder mystery, where Rarity must find out who killed Twilight to put her spirit to rest (and stop haunting the dang library)
That was really cute!
This was really sweet, and a great execution of their characters and character dynamics. Also it was very adorable and that's good too.
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Everyone knows it was Themis with the Candelabra in the Library.
Why was I expecting an M fic here?
That is just risqué enough to be very sweet and was just wonderful!
Perfectly portrayed on both characters.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Life is simple.
I see Flutterpriest, I upvote.
Probably in my top ten pies. Nothing can beat key lime pie. Not even sexy pie.
L-LEWD!!!!!!!
9791603 And I'd half-expected a Pinkie who keeps jumping out whenever Rarity and Twilight start ratcheting up the romantic mood together.
Oh, this is fluffing adorable!
Ahhhhh, Marshmallow Pie - Twilight's favorite
You have done Mono proud.
Five minutes later. Spike walks in.
"I smell whipped cream. Twilight, did you make strawberry shortcake aga-"
Spike looks over to the table, eyes going wide at what he sees.
"...AHH! AHH! AHH! AHH!"
The screams reverberated throughout the castle. Meanwhile, Starlight Glimmer, sitting in her room, hears said screams.
"Oh, a shout-off, huh? Well, you're on, Spike. AHH! AHH! AHH! AHH! I'M BEATING YOU!"
Perfect.
...raritwi? Raritwi!
I think because I'm so used to reading/writing "X falls in love with and/or asks out Y, end fics", I somehow assumed they were Best Friends (TM) for the first half of the fic, and Rarity was just blatantly flirting because, well, Rarity. Granted them actually being marefriends does make much more sense, but ya know... Have an upvote.
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is that a reference to something? i feel like i remember that from somewhere else
9793796
Tis a Family Guy reference.
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ah, felt it was familiar
Oh my. What a pie....
Indeed a delicious pie that is
I can hear the "foomf" of that wing pop. Sweet adorkable Twilight.
Thanks for the story.
Great fluff! But "contraire" is the usual spelling.
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thank you!
Well that was
I mean...um
Wowza
Fifth best pie