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"I haven't seen a bigger waste of talent since Dan Marino." -Lucky Seven; Want to support me?

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Soarin' and Spitfire have been friends for a long, long time, and their relationship shows it. Right before the Wonderbolts disperse for Hearth's Warming Break, Soarin' drops by the Captain's office for a farewell chat, which leads to more than they both thought.

Written as a request from Wonderbolt Writer.

EDIT: Non-mature featured, which is pretty cool I guess ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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Comments ( 31 )

Cute as all heck, loved their relationship of being passive aggressive. :twilightsmile:

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I always loved Spits as tsundere, it just made sense.
Also, Soarin' is fun because he has no established backstory and thus, has so many versions.
These kinda tales are the best, love it!

I can always enjoy some good SoarinFire. Nice job.

Some new soarinfire? Hell yeah!

Tbh, things felt a tad over-descriptive at times, but all in all, a very cute one-shot! It's always great to see more stories of this pairing. A cool change of pace too, with Soarin showing the strong initiative in this story. Well done and thanks for writing!

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It just honestly fits them to a T if you ask me. A very well written story, along with just good characters that are believable, really make this story stand out for a short little oneshot, it's fantastic! :rainbowkiss:

I died from diabetes. The story was too sweet! :pinkiehappy:

Grreat, now I want to know what happens the next day.

Great work CGrant, this is one of your best!:pinkiehappy:

Uh...damn. That was really good. Like seriously, REALLY good :raritywink:

I loved the chemistry between the two and the dialogue felt real and not forced. Nice fluffiness between the two. I legitimately want another about these two from you :pinkiehappy:

Keep up the good work my good man :twilightsmile:

Gah, I'm so glad I'm not the only one who enjoys these two, and someone who still writes them. :twilightsheepish:

Absolutely adorable.

This is brilliant. Highly enjoyable and I like the interactions they shared.

That last scene was about as cute as my SoarinFire too which is a bonus, cause it's hard to find really cute fics on these two :pinkiehappy:

The story was excellent, and i had to let out an immediate "aww" when I first saw the description. Deserves a like for sure, and enjoy this warming and lovely tale. However, I noticed you included church in this. Now, I would normally associate church with Catholicism, Lutheran, Christian, Protestant, et cetera, and don't know enough about the actual Equestrian history to know if they do have churches. Yes, there was a wedding in the actual show, but I don't even know if the ponies of Equestria have a religion. I know Celestia is essentially a god alongside Luna in the actual thing, but are the ponies all Aethiest or is there an actual religion?
I digress, and I don't believe it was too confusing. I do think that this was a great fic, and love your craft. Keep up the good work, and Merry Christmas! (Or whatever you celebrate!)

“Worst case scenario, one of your brothers hits on me.”

Heh, 'one of.'

The back and forth exchanges at the beginning were particularly excellent here :pinkiehappy:

This was really warm and cute! You really showed just how deep and meaningful their friendship is even when Soarn' knows that Spitfire won't let her guard down. They are best friends and they both know it!

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I'm so glad everyone liked this- thanks for your kind words!

Holy hot potatos man! :rainbowlaugh: This was good! Sorry it took so long for me to get to. :fluttershysad:

It hasn't really felt like Christmas around here to me, the year has gone by so fast.

But this story...I definitely felt the spirit of Christmas. This has helped my holiday. :scootangel: I really started to relate to Soarin when he was all - "it's cool, my Mom's chill and I can smooth it over." Sounds pretty much like me there.

I really like the relationship Spitfire has here with Soarin. Like they could easily become an official couple. And It also feels like a good starting point for more of their loving, joint holiday adventures (hint, hint :raritywink:)

Spitfire isn't the easiest pony to get close to, or to have her let her guard down before you. So it feels extra rewarding to be allowed to break that barrier down and have moments like they shared on the couch. Again, it wasn't hard to imagine myself in Soarin's shoes in this heartfelt moment.

Spitfire looked up at him. “Does that matter? Do we need it?”

I laughed, after uttering a hearty - 'Heck no we don't! ' remark. If I were him I'd hastily draw a crappy mistletoe and duct tape it above us if that was really necessary (for traditions sake of course) :derpytongue2:

So thanks Grant, for writing this. Loved it! And Merry Christmas to you too!

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UwU

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I'm so sorry it took me more than a year to get your request done, but I really hope everything was worth the wait!

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No worries, it's all good. It was worth it. :twilightsmile: Thanks again, for taking the time to write this. It was kind of you.

See this folks, he may forget from time to time (he's human) :derpytongue2: but he shall deliver the cuddles!

Wonderfully fluffy little read.

Comment posted by Nh_Bleker97 deleted Dec 14th, 2018

Adorable christmas shipfic

That was cute.

:twilightsmile: thought there was something familiar about the writing

Awww, they really are one of the best ships :heart:

Beautiful. Reading this felt really good. Thank you for that.

Upon second read... this still is an enjoyable story and very cute.

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