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Rainbow Dash is more than excited for being the chosen reserve for the Wonderbolts' performance at the Royal Garden opening, but Rarity brings up an awkward conversation about one of the team's stallion that may change Rainbow's way of seeing him. As she comes face to face with the Wonderbolts once again, she does her best to hide the conflicting thoughts.

Soarin's situation haven't been much different, as he has to deal with the insinuations that Spitfire and Fleetfoot have been making about his friendly relationship with the rainbow maned pegasus.

But everything's fine. They can avoid these strange feelings for as long as they want, right?

Unless a new mystery leads Soarin to confront Rainbow Dash against his will, and the both of them start to notice that they care for each other more than they thought.


Set before, during and after “Rarity Investigates!”, so some moments from this episode will be narrated. I think I don't even need to say that this is a SoarinDash story.

I came up with the title with the help of a friend of mine. She doesn't have a fimfiction account, but I feel like I need to thank her, because I had no idea of what I could use as title before she helped me.

This is my first published story. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

Thanks to DeltaNutmeg for editing the story!

I hope you enjoy! :twilightsmile:

I only now realized that there's a song called Storm of Emotions. I swear I didn't know about it!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 89 )

It's soooo good so far and great job with the grammar :pinkiehappy: I can't wait for the next chapter :rainbowkiss:

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I'm glad that you liked it. I'll do my best to meet your expectations :twilightsmile:

7108847 Lol don't worry about other people's expectations, just write what's in your heart lol I know that sounds cheesy, but trust me if you love your own story others will too :raritywink:

7108897 Yeah, I usually worry too much about that. :applejackunsure: Thanks for the advice :pinkiesmile:

First really good SD fic I've read in a while. I spotted a couple grammar mistakes and sentences structure problems but in the end, this story really makes up for it. I already like where this is going! Faved and liked.

7109156 I can't stand people who breathe XD.

A fantastic start. There were some minor errors here and there, but those can be easily fixed.

Looking forward to the next chapter :twilightsmile:

7109156 Oops! Yeah, that's what I meant. :twilightblush: I'll fix it right now. Thank you for showing me :pinkiesmile:

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I'm so happy you're liking it!

As I said, I'm still learning English, so it's been a little hard for me to deal with some translations. I'll see what I can do about it. :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the support! :twilightsmile:

7110314 Haha, you're welcome then. :P

I laughed at myself when I noticed it too. I was like :rainbowderp: “Dear God, I just made Fleetfoot say that mares would rather kiss dead stallions or something.” :facehoof:

7110662 Hehe, guess I exaggerated a bit. I'll edit my comment to a less weird choice of words. :twilightsheepish:

Dang this has potential I want MORE
THIS IS AMAZING
ITS A GOOD SOARINDASH STORY

Can't wait to read what comes next!:pinkiegasp:
Great story so far!

Lovely chapter.

You're doing really well. Can't believe this is your first story. The best thing to do is make sure you have your story planned and you know when and how it's going to end. At least, that's what I've found. :twilightsheepish: Anyway, this story is fantastic and you're doing a great job.

7131723 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Actually, I already wrote the whole story. I'm just adding a thing here and there before I can consider the chapters finished. I'm even starting to write a sequel. It'll probably take some time for me to publish the first chapter though.

I'm happy you're liking my work! :twilightsmile:

Good good
Next update will be interesting

Lol I find it hard to believe that English isn't your native language because the grammar and punctuation is better than a few other people's stories with English as their first language lmao

It really shows how much you care about your story. Great job, great chapter, and I can't wait until the update :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

7132496 Well, actually, I had the help of an editor in this chapter. I still have a lot to learn. :twilightsheepish:

Thanks anyway! :raritywink:

It is so divine !!! love this story!

Wonderful chapter, as always. Great job! :twilightsmile:

Awhhh only one more chapter left? :raritycry: Lmao it's okay :twilightsmile: Loving this story!

Great chapter
Can't wait for the update

WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER COME OUT??
I CAN'T WAIT!
I LOVE IT!!!

7170891 Glad you're liking it! :twilightsmile:

I'm just changing some things in chapter 4, but it shouldn't take long, so the next update is probably coming soon. :pinkiesmile:

When is the next chapter I can't wait anymore :pinkiesad2::raritydespair::raritycry:

7203695 I'll publish it now. :pinkiesmile: Sorry for making you wait. I had too much school work to do :twilightsheepish:

Great ending! :twilightsmile: I can't wait to see your future stories.

Wait that's it? So in the end...nothing of substance really happened and you end it just after four chapters. :facehoof:

I honestly thought this would have more of a story behind it and not just centered around that one episode with an actual romance going on between those two characters but in the end they didn't really get anywhere, maybe a couple of steps but that's it.

7204881 Actually, this story wasn't meant to be about them getting together. It was just my idea of how their relationship would be after the whole incident. I didn't want to make them date now because then I wouldn't have anything to write in the sequel. I like to write romance in a smooth and slow development where we can analyze the inner struggles of the characters. And since one of the characters is Rainbow Dash, at least in my point of view, it's gonna take a lot more to happen before she could actually notice and admit her feelings, something that would require a lot more chapters, and this story wasn't meant to be too big. Sorry if I disappointed you though.

So cute :raritycry::raritydespair: And I'm so happy to hear that there will be more Soarindash yessss! :rainbowkiss:

7204973 You're welcome! And omg did you see the new episode? Lmao out of all ponies to test out her Rarity impression she chose Soarin :rainbowlaugh: It seriously looked like she was flirting with him :rainbowlaugh:

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I liked it. Only problem: It was too darn short! This was very good, but the ending seemed very abrupt. If we (and by that I mean the three main voices/personalities in this head) don't get a sequel, we're gonna... I don't know, shoot a puppy? Well, its a good thing you said you will (at some unknown point in the future) make a sequel.

7205097 lol Yeah, that episode was epic. I couldn't stop laughing. When she was imitating Rarity, I didn't know whether to squeal because of the SoarinDash interaction or laugh at Rainbow's imitation and Soarin's reaction. :rainbowlaugh:

7205118 Haha, yeah, at some unknown point in the future. :twilightsheepish: I'm glad you liked it. And sorry for the short length. I wanted it to be short, but not this short. But then school took all my time, and since I didn't want to keep the readers waiting even more, I published it the way it was. Maybe when I have the time in the future, I'll add a little more things.

7205209 If you do change this, be a dear and send me a message to alert me, would you?(I am completely male if the wording makes ya think otherwise. I like to write in such a silly, formal fashion despite our words when speaking sound Southern half the time.)

PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. MI BEG OF YOU, THIS WAS MARVELOUS, MAGNIFICENT ,BRAVO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7205177 Lmao :rainbowlaugh: my sister was cracking up when Soarin got all flustered lmao my sister claims that she doesn't care for the show that much but she was just as excited as I was lmao

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