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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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This story is a sequel to Trixie's Great and Powerful Revenge


When one of Twilight's spells goes a bit awry, she finds that an affected Rarity might be a little more than she bargained for.

(Originally posted on EqD in April 2011. I originally meant to keep this as a one-shot, but wrote the second part after there was demand for it. I do like how the second part came out though, so no regrets!)

(Also, if you like this story, be sure to check out Tragic Magic! It's a continuation of this one!)

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 118 )

No offence, but this is one of the most unoriginal ideas on this site. "One of Twilight's spells go wrong, and now someone's switched bodies or they wanna f*ck my OC." Very well executed, but your content could use some work! Cheers!

Hey, I remember this! One of, if not, my favorite Twirity shipfics :twilightsmile::heart::raritywink:
Glad to see it found its way onto fimfiction.

998805

...did you even read it?

While the 'Twilight screws up a spell' trope is rather common in the early days of FiM fictions, there was no OC's or mindswaps at all.

This fiction was written an age ago, so im willing to forgive the use of twilight screwing up a spell.

I liked it.

...Surprisingly well written for... something like this. I dunno.

A Doctor Whooves reference?
Well played, well played indeed. :moustache:
And the story was good, too! :pinkiehappy:

I want to see more of Spike's reaction - that's one of the best parts of Rarilight/Twirirty fics.

Not bad. I'm more of a Rarijack fan, but this was quite cute. Have a thumbs up and a favorite.

And a sandwich.

D'aaaawwwww :heart:

Poor Luna, though.

998805 "april 2011"... That should explain the twilight fucks up = love equation. As to the content I disagree with you completely, it was quite good.

999777 Alright, free to your opinion, as I am free to mine. We'll just agree to disagree, then.

Lol, I really liked the story! But, lol, I just can't stop looking at the pic!!! :pinkiegasp:

998805 Whis this "unoriginal Idea" just got featured

Laughed when spike asked to watch, priceless to me for some reason

Nice :pinkiehappy:
'bout sums it up-for me that is

Wait until The Doctor uses the Tardis in the middle of Canterlot Castle.

Twilight is a cat. She is allergic to cats.

Needs Luna based sequel:twilightsmile:

It's just like Green isn't Your Color!

999986

Not much of an opinion, you didn't even read it. You're not free to put down something without even testing its merits. Hell, this story was popular before you were even a brony, no doubt.

Nice to see it on FIMfic, don't let the newbies badmouth it before even realizing it was before their time.

the ending to chapter one just priceless oh my Celestia!! there can be no doubt that Rarity is a heartbreaker

1000712 I'd kindly like to see your evidence that I didn't read it. And BELIEVE ME, I don't judge books before reading it word for word. And I still stand true by my opinion.

1000751

You're totally entitled to your opinion. I can take it :twilightsmile:

D'aaaaaaw

1000761 Thank you, someone with half a mind.:pinkiehappy:

very good if it werent marked completed i would say i look foward to the next chapter

998805

Well, you can't invent the wheel twice.

998838

I prefer "Rarisparkle" myself. :derpytongue2:

999102

I agree that Rarijack is a bit more interesting and compelling. I personally really like the one where a rodeo comes to town and Twilight Sparkle enforces the "dares" that Rarity and AJ were throwing at each other during the sleepover in Look Before You Sleep. ...now I wanna read that one again!

That was a very interesting story, I never truly understood this shipping but the story was just too sweet to resist! Therefore, I gift you a favourite and a thumbs up. :twilightsmile:

1000379 I think we've been wandering around the same stories :moustache:

She stared wistfully at the photograph. It had been so long ago, but she still remembered that colt just as clearly as if it were yesterday. So much time had passed...the hourglass cutie mark on her long-lost love's flank only served to accentuate that. She stared at his brown coat and darker brown mane, and a single tear escaped her eye. If only she could see him just one more time.

Docluna. This:heart:

Sparkle Kitten... That's never going to leave my memory now. Cute nickname, and cute story too. :heart:

This violently conflicts with my preference of Rarispike. I suspect once he found out, he hung himself :fluttercry:

Adorable, but the story does suffer from the "show versus tell" issue. We were shown how Twilight's character handled the situation as it happened, so why were we simply told Rarity's side of the story instead of equally shown?

Now... Luna just needs to stop by Ponyville and run into the Doctor.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

1001467 Not after what he said.

As for the fic: :yay:

Rainbow Dash: Twilight and Rarity, sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-*gets turned into an eggplant*(:twilightangry2:)

998805 they didnt switch bodies. twilight just minorly messed up the spell and it caused rarity to have un-ending love for twilight.

srry author if i got my summery wrong. or missed something

Let the Doctor x Luna shipping begin!

998805 Try reading the description, okay? While others have already mentioned WHEN it was posted, they didn't mention WHERE it was posted: EqD. They don't allow just any random CRAP to be posted like Fimfic does. Only the very best gets posted at EqD. Congrats of making a foal of yourself. Hope you read and enjoy this fic anyway. :3

Not bad not bad at all, really enjoyed the story though wished there was a bit more to read if only to see how the two act as a proper couple. It is always fun to see that but regardless was a nice mini story to chew on as I rest up before reading one of the more -rubs eyes- massive ones. Oh sleep how I will miss thee...

998805
In any case the execution is what matters. While most of what you said is irrelevant, as it's not part of this-- yes, Twilight screwing up a spell is not totally original. Something interesting: Very few things are. Pick any goddamm story off the front page and you can identify twenty different elements that somebody else has already used. That does not make them bad stories. The combination of elements, the new twists, and the execution are what matter.

1001564

While I could see it being interesting to have the perspective change from Twilight to Rarity throughout the story, the way it is now, with the revelation at the end, still works I think. I'm sure we all were kind of hoping it would end in that manner, and to have it been revealed earlier in the story with the perspective change could have ruined it a bit, in my opinion.

Awesome! And SOOO glad you added chapter 2 ...:raritywink::twilightsmile:

yeah...this needs a luna-based sequel in which she reunites with the doctor

This is one of the bets written fics I've read. Definitely worthy of its EqD origins. As for its originality, who cares? The execution more than makes up for such a thing.

Oh, wow. I remember reading this. And I was so disappointed when you ended it like that.

CUT TO A YEAR AND A SUMMER LATER AND MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED. :raritystarry:

Also, Luna and Doctor Whooves shipping? NEAT-O.

I'm starting to think that Twilight and Rarity may be my OTP. I loved this fic.

Yay, it's here! One of my favorite Raritwi fics! The "Twilight messes up a spell" card has been played a lot, but this was written well before it became stale. The only thing I really didn't like was Rarity figuring out the problem before Twilight. Twilight is the most powerful unicorn in history, versed in most forms of magic, and had access to all those spellbooks. But this is merely a small flaw in an otherwise sparkling gemstone.

Read this on Equestria Daily back in ancient times, good to see it's made it's way here. This is the first Twarity fic I ever read, I remember being surprised to see a Rarity shipfic that wasn't Rarijack. Coincidentally it's also my first experience with the "Twilight sucks at spells" trope. :twilightsmile:

Congratulations on getting featured, i'll throw you a like and a favorite for reminding me why Twarity is my favorite main six pairing.

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