I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.
Twilight Sparkle is summoned to Princess Celestia's castle early one morning, via a letter stating that she is being held captive and needs Twilight's aid. However, things take a strange turn once she arrives.
(I wrote this for the April 2011 friendoff on Equestria Daily. It's not super-graphic, but I think it's enough that a teen rating sounds good. It's also slightly edited; I decided while rereading that I wasn't quite happy with one part in the middle)
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Well...
This was an interesting read... Great writing btw
Was a great read, a little Trixie time never hurts anypony
Well... That was neat. A Trixie a day keeps the trollololz away.
"I'm afraid your princess is in another castle."
......*clicks fav*
Because Mario. Any argument against it is invalid.
Mario! :D
Also, I swear the only fics I've read that contained the idea of horns being sensitive are clopfics. Good to see it somewhere else :)
I really liked the execution of this story. On one hand, Trixie is employing an elaborate scheme to maneuver Twilight into her control and have her way with her. On the other, the whole act is as much giving as it is taking. She gladly lets Twilight have her enjoyment as well. Trixie even gives Twilight a chance to back out before things go too far, secure in the knowledge that she's won anyway. Sweet and nicely handled.
The Generous and Pretty Trixie sure smartened up, not only figuring out how to send a spell through Spike's dragonfire (that being presumably why he was awake so early in the morning), but also somehow casting a spell to trick Twilight into thinking she was in the Canterlot Castle (or somehow changing Canterlot castle itself), AND mind-controlling royal guards. Impressive(ly illegal)
I liked it.
I'll never understand how basically giving a BJ can get a T rating, though. I really don't care, it just seems incongruous to have a clearly sexual act not be labelled mature.
Ehh....assent isn't consent 😬