Shortly after the events of 'Magic Duel', Trixie reconsiders life on the road. She had returned to Ponyville to prove herself to Twilight Sparkle. But perhaps it wasn't for the reason she originally thought.
She returns once more to finish patching things up with her but there are other issues at hoof. Twilight extends her hospitality, but there are her many questions about the showmare left unanswered. Where has she been? What did she do while she was away? How did she amass so much wealth in that time?
Trixie has dodged Twilight's scary questions long enough. But the answers may be more frightening still.
NOW SEQUELED!
Chapters (7)
Something tells me that Trixie did something she really regrets in order to get the bits for that amulet. I am curious as to how she heard about such an artifact.
Please keep going.
Decent story so far I will track and see where this goes.
you had my curiosity but now you my good sir have my atention
I like it lol can't wait for more
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand you lost me
This ought to be good.
1878772 Stick with it. There is a twist later that'll make it go from good to great! Some things are worth the wait.
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I found the story interesting enough. When the clop started is when I lost interest, at least make that part of it a separate story that is linked in author's notes
1879137 As far as 'clop' I really tried to keep it tame (for teen). That ^ right there is as saucy as it gets. I assure you it's not a main focus of the story but it is a necessary plot point (as you will see later). I really did try to keep it all 'implied'.
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Was that an intended pun? Or were you serious? Either way, if it's just going to be implied and not explored, you have my attention. Also, I have a ship fic I'm writing if you'd like to check it out. I'll send you a link to the first chapter through messages if you like.
Nice Event Horizon reference there
Dunno if anyone else saw it, but I did! Clop is fine for me so long as its tasteful and not just pointless sex. Anyhoo, I like what I am seeing so far. 
Keep it up!
1879589 I appreciate that you caught that, it was exactly that scene!
1880976 I want so badly to read this but i'm writing a Trixie story and don't want to accidentaly steal ideas.
I pretty much knew Trixie was gonna be pregnant, but I thought the foal would be Twilight's. <_<;
1884682 denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2669-Smiling_Twist.jpg And you know what? That's not even the BIG twist. Stay tuned!
Big finale coming. Contains Celestia being totally BADASS!
...DAMN!!!
And that's not the biggest twist?
I am scared. I am still going to totally read the next chapter, but I am scared.
Very nice, love the happy ending.
I don't really expect happy endings from stories with the "Tragedy" tag...which makes me wonder why I read this when I don't even like sad endings. <_<;
1888385 Well, considering the events of the story, does the Tragedy tag not fit it?
OH MY GOD!!!
Let me get this straight. Trixie is Twilight's father's daughter, which makes her Twilight's half-sister, and is having Twilight's brother's foal?
Okay. I am going back to reading now. I'm scared of what happens next.
That's right! Don't get on Celestia's bad side.
Wait. Does this mean Celestia and Luna are in a relationship?
In any case, excellent series!
1889111 She meant 'loving' in the normal, sisterly way. She was just being coy.
Wow that was awesome I loved it I wish we could see them raise the foul
Also, the scene where she dismisses her Day Court for Twilight was an extreme pleasure to write. It got my pulse racing just typing it out, her as the protective momma bear figure.
1889158 Ehh... I'm not sure. Maybe a sequel... some day.
Wow awesome fic.
But then again im always a sucker for good twixie fics.
Even tho they seam to be quite rare for some reason.
Any way i hope to see a sequel to this fic at some point.
So i will be watching you
Just... wow. Don't get me wrong it was a good story but... wow. Dafuq?
1889196 well its your store tell then I am happy about what i got.
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So Twilight is grinding her sister who is carring her brothers foal? And now somehow they're getting married which makes Shining Trixies brother in law who conceived her foal during a drunkin pole dance?
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Lol love trixie's dirty humor and dude this fic is severely underrated. Read in an hour, ahhh its so funny and so many
!!! Loved the celestia part and idk il have to read it again for fun. Please make a sequel 
thumbs up and watched. This should've been featured easy
1889976 I'm glad you liked it.
just tie a yellow ribbon
'round the old oak tree
its been three long years
do you still want me (still want me)
if i don't see a ribbon
'round the old oak tree,
i'll just stay on the bus
forget about us
put the blame on me
if i don't see a ribbon
round the old oak tree
1894539 I'm glad that you appreciate the reference.
I'm pretty sure I just read an argument for incest...
That aside, this was pretty good.
1889155 Uh huh. Sure.
1906573 Well I guess we'll all find out in the sequel.
Maybe...
Someday...
I liked
You sir have earned a spot in my offline ebook library. Congratulations.
Dickmare Sparkle!
... Hope Trixie wasn't in estrus...
Well, good so far. The pacing is a bit fast, but it's solidly written and quite enjoyable so far. You've got my like, keep it up and you'll have my fave, too.
Shakespearicles! You magnificent bastard, you!
Pulled a total bait and switch on us. Faved.
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That isn't the big twist?! What the fuck do you have planned?! how can that even be a thing with who the goddamn stallion is and you have something bigger I dont even FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-
Also, Shining needs to pick his locale better. The Mare's got rebels and poncy little milk drinkers.
WHAT.
What the hell would you call that? Incestption?! I doubted you when you said that SA being the daddy wasn't the big twist, but you did it again. You are one magnificent... Greek-English-Muscleman-Writer...
Loved the ending, loved how you kept topping your previous twists. The story was adorable, my favorite pairing, and it hit me right in the feels.
You sir, have gained a follower. Thank you for this wonderful story.
1914448 Thank you for your thorough feedback. It was fun reading you individual reactions to each chapter. Stick around. I have three more fics simmering on the back burner. As well as two sequels that have come highly requested, (including the one for this!) Stick around.
1906729 You're making a sequel?
WHYYYYYYY?
1917931 Eh, yeah. Maybe, someday. I've got like 5 other projects ahead of it, so don't hold your breath. 'Sides, keeps people watching.
you sir are a genius, this made me laugh soooooo much, from the 1st plot twist to the last
And that last scene
- i literally fell off my seat laughing
earned a well deserved follow, thumbs up and I look forward to seeing your future work