A few friends decided it was a STELLAR idea to see who could write a ship in 30 minutes or less. So I wrote this, and now I'm sharing it with you guys and gals. Don't expect my friends stories, they'll kill me if I posted them. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.
Anyways, Twilight was off to visit her friends in Fillydelphia when she meets one pony that she thought she'd never see again.
Who say's ponies can't change? As long as this is a better love story than Twilight, I'm A-OKAY.
Chapters (1)
Wow, That was. Very Interesting.
that ending
I actually think it was a bit... fast paced. Maybe with a little more time and effort, it could have turned out better.
Look at me, criticizing my own work
Write moar!!!!!!!!!!!
Not bad for a thirty-minute rush job. Considering you have ZERO time to flesh out, ramble, or fill in a lot of detail, I felt like I was there in the story with an okay view of things. Well done.
Lol that's pretty cool for a race /)
Also that ending¬ 
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I know, I thought of that ending and suddenly felt like Rarity.
IIIDDEEAAA!
Loolllll
Like a sir ending
Fast paced, but great for a half an hour story.
You get a thumbs up from me.
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I have all the time in the world for my next idea, this time I can really work on it, perhaps
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Knowing life, I'm gonna get all pumped up, motivated and READY TO WRITE only to be confronted by all my friends bombarding me with texts asking to hang out (That happened before, and I ended up forgeting what the story was about
Thank you for ze thumbs up good sir.
not intolerable for 30 minutes! nice work, heh.
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Why is this doing better than I thought.
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Pic unrelated...?
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You're getting good at this.
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Yay?
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Trixie sat there, hold her horn in her hands. She was staring at it, lost in thought.
hold her horn in her hands.
Hands.
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FFFFFFFFF
I shall fix this.
This is why writing FIMfic's get confused, I have to remember HOOVES not HANDS.
971363 Haha it's all good, I do that all the time.
read this for my youtube channel, hope you don't mind
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I do not mind, link please
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What I don't get is why you read this story and not "Why My Dashie"
People seem to like that one better
Can't blame 'em, I wrote this and left it xD
next chapter? or sequel? please!