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Everypony knows that Rarity can be a bit dramatic, but when she realizes her affections for another mare, even she has trouble controlling the theatrics. Every time she goes to say one thing, she says another, getting no nearer to the task at hand: confessing her emotions for Twilight Sparkle.

A short fic done by request. To the point, with a bit of humor and light-heartedness, as well as a bit of drama where it's needed. Enjoy.

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Comments ( 31 )

Nothing negative stood out; it was pleasant and well written.

So very sweet. Seeing Rarity getting flummoxed by a romantic situation is a little OOC for her, but explained well enough in the story. Loved the little Fluttershy subplot too.

Flawless Victory.

I've actually been looking for this one for a while. I knew there was a story where Twilight rushed off to study dating and coming back to surprise the other pony. I'm so glad it's your work. So glad to read this again. I will be continually impressed with your work.

"I'm sorry but I have to go study"

Best Line Ever! :rainbowlaugh:

Excellent story! :raritywink:

I demand a sequel about Fluttershy and Caramel!

That was one of the few good Raritwi I've read, well done.:pinkiehappy:

I loved it. Such a nice story. Thanks! :twilightsmile::raritywink:


Raritwi! Not a ship that gets a lot of stories, unfortunately. This is the first one I've come across that I've actually enjoyed. And I've been waiting a while for that, so thanks. My day has been made.

Twilight asking Rarity out by reading directly from the guidebook was priceless, by the way. That was probably my favorite part.

366277 Thanks. Let's face it, she would. It also humors me to think she'd mess up and read the colt's lines. :twilightblush:

363356 Try your own hoof at writing it! That's pretty much how most of us fandom writers start: read a story, can't make our brains shut up, write a fic, edit the hay out of it, ???, PROFIT! :rainbowlaugh:

Love Rarity's letter:pinkiehappy:

:heart::pinkiehappy::raritywink: wonderful. and sweet. a cute lil' fanfic.

Loved it! Short, but well paced. Flustered Rarity was cute and Twilight was adorkable as ever. Well done! :pinkiehappy:

"Sincerely, and with all intention of carrying out such threats,
~ Rarity" :pinkiegasp:

Short and with a good flow. Rarity and Twi-adorkable-light were dead on. Fluttershy was well within character to. I'd take some pride in a good job with this piece.

MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

Just as cute this time round as last. :pinkiehappy:

That was quite lovely, I have to say. Very, very cute stuff. :heart:
Shipping at its finest.

Well done. Favorite part: Twilight reading out loud how to ask for a date.

"You have pets?" Oh Caramel.....this is Fluttershy we are talking about here you know :facehoof:

Cute fluffy story, nice job. :raritywink::heart::twilightsmile:

2394828 I'm a fan of the simple, cutesy ship fics. Those are a bit endangered now. I think canon started to bog that down, I dunno.


Thank you for once again supplying me with my daily dose of diabetes.

2417264 This was, like, the third fic I ever wrote. :rainbowlaugh: Just noticed?

2440410 I wasn't into RariLight back then, forgot about it by the time I was, and I missed it the last 10 times I went searching for more :derpytongue2:

Fluttershy and Caramel? i can't see the reasoning the behind that, but what ever.
This story was all around very good, my rating is a 7/10 not too bad but not prefect ether.

Cute! Twilight reading the romance guide cinched this story for me and gave lots of feels. Damn adorkable pony.

One of my favorite romance stories so adorable

"Oh, you know," Fluttershy began, shying away from the attention she had just drawn. "Maybe you should just tell her. If I were you, I'd go to her and say exactly how I felt."

Who are you and what have you done to Flutters--

Her confidence seemed to shrink more, and she backed down into waters again. "But, um, I'm not you. I would probably just get scared, and maybe start crying..."

Oh, there you are. Hi.

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I mailed all of my own mannequins to myself, so Caramel is without a doubt simply exhausted from carrying all of the cumbersome things throughout my boutique

You mailed the mannequins ALREADY IN YOUR SHOP to your SHOP? If I was Caramel, I'm pretty sure I'd notice what's going on.

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