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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

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Oh my god, you actually used the rape tag! Dare I say this is progress?

After all that shit you end it on a cliffhanger... (smh)

Hey guys, I think there might be rape in this

8843264
I had my doubts on the situation but your suspects clearly confirmed... Thanks.

8843214
And people are downvoting it more than ever! :trixieshiftright: Progress indeed.
It’s necessary for this one, though. No ambiguity here.
(And wasn’t it the dark tag people were complaining about? You’ll notice I did use it on this one, because this one is kind of dark.)

8843247
a) It was too long already.
b) Leaves me open for a sequel.

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8843399
I don’t know, guys. You’d better read it, just to be sure! :rainbowwild:

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b) Leaves me open for a sequel.

If you do sequel, Trixie should win instead of Twilight. Her rein would be far more interesting in the long run

What kind of patreon supporters do you have for them to suggest this kind of story?

8844035
Heh ... things would start to get weird...
I wonder what would happen when Celestia comes back, though. I guess that could be saved for the threequel that will never happen. ^.^

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The very best kind! ^.^
Eh, they may push me to extremes sometimes, but at least they keep me writing!
(And I promise I have another story coming soon that’s about the polar opposite of this -- vanilla, very sweet, but still really hot.)

can I be pissed that no one writes about what happens after somepony gets knocked up

*Looks at the trigger list in the description*
What, is that all? I've seen 12 panel doujins with more fetishes. Step up your game dls.

8845574
Yes, that is permitted.

8845587
That wasn’t really the point of this story...
I mean, if I wanted to just write a story that was nothing but a whole bunch of crazy fetishes, I could do that... But I’d prefer not to.
Even this one was a bit too much for my tastes.

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For what it’s worth, I do have at least one such story: What the Heart Craves. Most of the story is by my boringly PG ‘good twin’, but I got to write the two optional clop chapters in it.

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thanks i'll give it a read and I may not be a patron or have money for a commission but I would like to see the after math of this story like does trixie end up starting a herd or do the mares get abortions you know just some closer to this

I would like at least an aftermath or epilogue chapter for this. This was just so good!

The moment Twilight was gone, Trixie turned on the five of them,

I'm sorry, what? Who? Where? When? Why?
I actually backed up to see if this was a sequel to something. Your first sentence, and you've lost me. I get that you're trying to segue off of a canon scene but it's been a few years; throw us a bone here. You can do better than this.

8846776
It ... was?
Huh ... I haven’t really been thinking of this as one of my stronger pieces...

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It’s just, you know... Really difficult to refer to ‘the main six, but without Twilight’ without having it sound really awkward.

That feeling when you’ve already accepted that the story is going to be a bit of a flop because it contains extreme fetishes, you’ve checked the feature box over and over, and it’s definitely not getting there ... and then, three days later, you’re going through the feature box to see if there’s anything new you might want to read in it ... and there’s your story.
:rainbowderp:
After all this time, Fimfic can still surprise me.

8847155
Guess that means that people want to see more. :pinkiehappy::raritywink:

8847158
More ... yes. But probably not as extreme as this one. This one crossed some lines that I don’t really like.

8847163
Fair enough. But it would be interesting to see Twilight's "rematch" with Trixie, and its aftereffects.

8847146
then maybe set up the scene a little better. It's obvious *who* you're talking about. The problem is I don't know *what* you're talking about, or *when*.

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I was being facetious. Sorry for the confusion.

Loved the hell out of it. This sort of story will naturally draw downvotes from people angry at the premise alone, but, as a piece of fetishistic non-con writing? Fabu, 11/10, and I loved it~

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Just make sure Twilight gets sexy revenge if you ever decide to make a sequel.

ARG! You got me with your clickbait picture! And then it was you! And now I have to read later this story!



Ooooo! Is that Pavlov's bell I hear ringing?

Hmmm not bad. Do agree not your best, but still overall kinky and sexy. Just a bit too random and quick for me. Prefer really focusing on the fun while this story was more a quick overview moving from one perversion to the next, but still works well for some sexy, sexy clop fun.

Tears sprang from Rarity's eyes as she felt the pain and the pressure of Hayseed's girth spreading her roughly open where she'd never been spread before. “No! ” she squealed. “Hayseed, no!”

Didn't she just pull a butt plug from there?

I don't understand the amount of dislikes under this story. I really enjoyed it! ^^

8847237
Ah, yeah. I can see that.

8847544
Huh... And here I thought that I’d ruined it with the multiple POV’s.

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And maybe a little ‘that never really happened!’ time travel...

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A good cover image will get you 90% of the way to the feature box. ^.^
That’s why I did some work on my own, modifying this one.
Good to know it’s working!

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Good... As long as it’s fun. ^.^

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Um...
:rainbowderp:
Yeah, that might be a bit of a plot hole. (No pun intended.) (Okay, a little bit of pun intended.) (Oh fine. Much pun intended.)
My only defense is to say that maybe she teleported it out, so she never really got ‘spread’ there much?

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I understand the downvotes.
It’s mainly because I mentioned rape three times in the description.
It tends to trigger certain people (even more than just a regular old clopfic), and some people will downvote anything that triggers them.

Hot in ways that are unique to you, DLS, but meh in ways that are inherent to my preferences.

You continue to outdo yourself though, so I'll definitely be back for whatever's next.

8851055
Whatever’s next is a really sweet vanilla clopfic between Fluttershy and Thunderlane. ^.^ Should hopefully be ready sometime next week.
(But Patreon supporters already have access to the almost-final draft. :raritywink: )

I don't have words, usually this kinda thing doesn't interest me nut Celestia damn it I want more now!

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^.^ If you want more, I do have a few other non-con/questionable-con stories. Most of them are tamer than this.

8844035
I want to read that too! Please make a sequel and let
:trixieshiftright: Trixie win instead of Twilight :twilightblush:

PLEASE!!!:fluttercry::raritycry::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::pinkiesad2:

By the way I give this story a 💯:moustache:

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Please make a sequel and let
:trixieshiftright:Trixie win instead of Twilight:twilightblush:

PLEASE!!!:fluttercry::raritycry::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::pinkiesad2:

By the way I give this story a 💯:moustache:

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Aw, but I really want Trixie to get her cumuppance!
There was an idea about having Twilight still lose, but then Princess Luna and Princess Celestia come to the rescue and trounce her.

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I'd love to see AJ's prayers for paternity being answered, Trixie's magic being no match for Apple genetics. Twilight casually stating that even the memory of it all can be erased, only for both Apple sibs to reply "eeeenope" bashfully as they can manage before Mac pulls her closer, possessively...
The awkward silence broken by Rainbow laughing her flank off. :rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

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Kind of sounds like you want to write a sequel...

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I've heard this reading from Scarlett

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Yeah. ^.^ I wish the would do readings of all my stories!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand click the favorites button

Flutters was great in this, while the “bath” near the end was hot, as well as raritiy and rainbow dash, also Trixie was pretty hot in this as well.

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