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dirty little secret


I tried so far... and got so hard... but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (SubscribeStar)

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Comment posted by golarala deleted Jan 16th, 2018

Hot as the sun. But that ending made me feel sad.

............. Damn that was hot... nice slow build up, no rushing right to the sex... passion, emotion between them, not just mindless "insert tab A into Slot B" Some real well done feels for each other and a nice touch of romance with the ending. No endless sessions, just one long, well paced one ending in a great climax. And still managing to get pretty kinky about it.

This sir, is some grade A awesomely done clop.

wow that was depressing, who knew that was coming!?

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Thanks! ^.^ What did you like most about it?

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Thanks! ^.^ And I do have to give some credit to Loveless, who commissioned this story.

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Heh, it's been a while since I gave a story any real feel punch at the end. Time to do it again!

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She's got a lot of potential with those tentacles tendrils and all... I might have to use her again in something.

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Heh, it's been a while since I gave a story any real feel punch at the end. Time to do it again!

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She's got a lot of potential with those tentacles tendrils and all... I might have to use her again in something.

Ohhh YES PLEASE! To both. Feels just. make a story so much more 'real' even clop. Gives it that extra punch.

And naughty tentacle time is NEVER a bad idea.

“Thank you, Mane-Iac,” he said as the portal began to swallow him whole, “I love y—”

Then she tackle hugged him and they fell through the portal. Happy endings for all!

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but that feel punch was equivalent to mike tyson punching an infant :fluttercry:

You commissioned nineteen sexy images for just one story? You spoil us.

7447923 I was going to say I love you for making this, but after reading this comment, just shut up and take my money!

We need more uncommon spike shippings. I need to work on the one i have.

I really hope she remembers him the next time he comes back. I want my true happy ending!!! :raritycry:

7447923 good possibility to, you never specified what cut him off. the portal was just starting to take him when he saying that. plz do make it a sequel.

Well I was going to joke about Mane-iac getting pregnant with pony-dragon hybrids with animate manes, but considering the ending...

Very nice. The images laced throughout really made the story pop, though damn, that must have taken a long time to draw.

ITS TO LATE! I'VE SEEN THEM ALL, YOU CANT TAKE MY MEMORIES!

Changed to incomplete because I somehow totally missed half the story I was supposed to do. :facehoof:
Still might have to take the story down before it's finished.

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That is the result for not let me see your story first before publish it out, my dear lovely writer. *Evil laugh* :pinkiecrazy:

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Yeah, that would have helped fix a lot of things... :pinkiesad2:

That was good.
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And it's marked as incomplete?
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hmmm...

I didn't ask for all these feels, damnit.

7448704 You didn't ask for them, but they're there all the same...

Images now only available through artist's patreon.

$20+

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But the story itself was excellent. Really well written and the characters really shone through as people instead of the meat-puppets you tend to come across in this sort of thing.

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Writer used it without my permission. So I have to take it down. The arts was gave to writer as a concept to write story only. Not for him to show it in publish.

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Ok, understood.
Thanks for the clarification!

So the whole thing is a lie? He just builds false relationships in an imaginary world just so he can have sex?

Well, at least you captured the reality of all relationships, I'll give you that.

Just remember everyone who has a boyfriend/girlfriend; they don't love you. You're all garbage they just like to fuck. They just want your money and a means to relieve their own stress. After you're out of cum or dead, they'll move on and fuck someone else. You're all fools - your boyfriends / girlfriends are out there fucking other people right now, and they laugh at your name because you're too dim-witted to know what goes on behind your back.

So enjoy your delusional relationships, people. You poor silly sods.

Congrats to 'dirty little secret' for showing us the reality of real-world relationships in this story.

What I liked most about it was the pacing it was well done

I always seem to find your stories even when I try not to find them.

You have cursed my computer and I demand retribution in the form of a Coca-Cola.

7448923 I'm sorry you feel that way, and I'm more sorry if you feel that way because someone hurt you. I hope you find someone that cares about you.

I've never had a clopfic give me feels like this.

ALSO THIS IS SOME OF THE BEST MANE-IAC STUFF ON THE SITE.

7449310 Never had a relationship. Don't think I'm worthy of one.

And why the negative comments? I thought what I said was what the story was about? I thought the story was making some kind of meta commentary and I just took the interpretation a tad too far?

Huh...why do I bother looking at clopfics when I don't even understand the point of them?

Wait...why DID I try to interpret the hidden message behind this one at all!?

WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME!?

KILL ME, SOMEONE! I'M SCUM ON THE FACE OF THE EARTH!

7449435 Edgy?

Like the scythe under my stairs that I made in metal work?

7449434 It's no edgy, the hell you talking about you weirdo?

Now, Mandopony playing a Barbie doll game and convincing himself afterwards that he's still a man...well it's not edgy but damn is it funny to imagine. Ha ha ha ha ha!

7449450 stob being edgy. You're hurting muh frend tal

7449469 Yeah, I bet you're quote, unquote, 'friends'.

Hot sweaty lovers, I'll bet. There are no friends in clopfics. Just people with benefits.

Like myself, for instance. Befriend me today and you'll have the pleasure of knowing somebody who can make you look cooler and more normal in comparison.

Ye. I'm here to make weirdos like you and everyone else here look like rockstars.

Except dirty little secret.. The authors more a popstar than a rockstar. While I don't agree with his/her fanfic genre choices, I nevertheless respect his/her decision to do them. Plus I get to 'play' with people like you.

Ready for a mind fucking? (unzips trousers) I AM READY!

BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA SO MUCH IS WRONG WITH ME AND I DON'T CARE ANYMORE! WHO IS THIS DICK? RODNEY? SHAFT? PENIS? ALL OF THE ABOVE!

7449474 I prefer 'Bad Company' That's a good song. Please go back to YouTube and put that song up here please, will you darling or sport?

7449484 no. It's time to stop. Seriously... I didn't even know about this until he told me you were being edgy and I decided to come look at this... This is weird anyway.... Two dicks? The fuck? I'm not really into this kind kd thing unless its... Tittysprinkles I think the name is... She's good at this shit. Anyway kid no. We aren't gay lovers.

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