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NeverClever


ACAB | Kinky aroace ♠️ | All pronouns accepted

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Delicious~ :raritystarry: This new season has so much fetish shit, it's ridiculous.

Haha, I was wondering when someone would write clop about the new episode. Good enough job...and props for being first.

3663479 IKR? Like we as fans needed more things to work with.


3663545 Sadly, I'm actually not the first; there's even a Power Pony fic right before mine in the new stories list. :derpytongue2:

The internet works fast, if nothing else :rainbowlaugh:

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First I've seen and that's good enough for me.:moustache:

i was waiting for these fics..and i can say i am plesently surprised at how well its done i do we get to see some of the other characters..enjoooy our new villainess's attention

You did good, child.
I'm...proud of you.

Benny #7 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · 1 ·

I didn't really care for this fic. It felt rushed, simple, unimaginative... understandable, for the time frame, I suppose, but I would have rather waited a while for a more refined end-product than what was published here.

3664450 The rushed feeling was partly intentional--a mentally unstable supervillain is not the type to take their time and make things enjoyable. I will concede that I may not have portrayed her callous attitude clearly enough (especially at the end).

As for your other criticisms, they are accurate and to-the-point, as I've come to expect from your comments. Thanks for being honest :twilightsmile:

Mane-iac is awesome

My god.

What have you done?

...

Nice work.

~Skeeter The Lurker

congrats:moustache:

You get the title of First Porn for the new villian

I'm pretty sure that this is the first clopfic to star the Mane-iac on this site, if not the first fic in general.

All I can say is: you work very fast.

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Actually, if you wanna be technical about it, Plotpony did it first before the character was even named.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/119195/madame-marelevolents-maretropolis-brothel

But yeah, in terms of actual canonically named, you are in fact the first to use the Mane-iac, and probably the first to use Radiance in a clopfic.

3669445 Lol, and yet, the rest of the internet still beat me to it :rainbowlaugh:

3665710 I have no idea

3669574 Actually, Radiance was in at least 3 clopfics published before mine http://www.fimfiction.net/group/200381/folder/21820/1/clopfics (I can't find the third because it was rated 0/9 and not in any groups, but it was before mine in the New Stories list :derpytongue2:)

Right on cue! FimFic delivers again.

This may sound crazy but if you could put the other mane 5 it will be written the same as rairity so you can answer this question?
note:this question is for the author.

3697935 I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what you're asking. Your grammar is a little hard to follow

3698713 What I mean is if Mane-iace is going to pass the time don't just stop with Rairity what about the others like fluttershy, applejack, rainbow dash, twilight, and pinkie pie:moustache:::eeyup:

It's spelled adrenaline, right?

3737446 Both are valid spellings

And what if Mane-iac try to rape Twilight and fight with Chrysalis for Sparkle has her prize? xD

Good fic :3 :heart:

Another Mane-iac x Twilight fic? Q_Q

5225790 In this case, it's Mane-Iac and Rarity.

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