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NeverClever


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Contains; [Humanized ponies] [Eggflation] [Oviposition] [Cum inflation] [Brainwashing] [Goo] [Cock vore] [Transformation] [Goo ponies] [Unbirthing]

Just muh thing :pinkiecrazy:

I'm tempted to read this just because of the huge list of unusual triggers, haha.

I'm hoping something happens that twilight will get her senses back and she goo-rape Chrysalis.
I'm really only saying this, because I've never seen it before.

Hello:

Well I will say, this is the best story I have seen in about 2 years. I do not know how much luck I will have with this but I will say, I hope you will be one of the authors that #1, won't abruptly stop, and #2 will actually (just once) have a story where Chrysalis wins. I would commission you, but I have not had a lot of luck with that....

i really liked yer concept, and the idea of Chrysalis actually going to bed with Shining, AS Candance, and feeding off him has a LOT of power and possibilities no one seems willing to explore. It woudl be refreshing to have the mind control stick for a chance and See Chrysalis slowly work her way thru the Mane 6 and Celestia and Luna....

I will say, while it worked, I was a little sorry to see the futa, I think an unbirthing would have worked better then a "cock vore" (but that may be yer thing) Futa and cock vore always feels like your trying to JAM too much in, and make things too convenient....

If you ever willing, I WOULD commission ya..but for now I just have my vain hope...

best of luck and thanks, contact me if you like

Wow, so many of my fetishes

5115916 Sorry to tell you, but the fic is already complete.

those fetishes tags... :pinkiegasp:

I'm definitely going to have to check this out later!:pinkiehappy:

[Humanized ponies] [Eggflation] [Oviposition] [Futa] [Cum inflation] [Brainwashing/Mind control] [Goo] [Cock vore] [Transformation] [Goo ponies] [Unbirthing],

MAH FETISHES :heart:

I'm not sure how I feel exactly about this, it's not exactly what I'm normally into what with the devouring dick and dissolving Twilight then cumming her back out as goo. Although I am curious what would happen once the wedding is over and everyone discovers the truth

5116064 Is it? It's hard to tell with the new layout.

5116434 Top right corner. Check mark means done, pause symbol means hiatus, and pencil means incomplete.

5116810
:eeyup: Hey Rainbow Dash, you ever been mistaken for a stallion?
:rainbowwild: No; have you?

I like it.

Gee, I don't know about

>NeverClever

This is going to be good.

>Edit
It was good.

[Humanized ponies] [Cum inflation] [Brainwashing/Mind control] [Transformation]

We definitely need a [NTR Human] fic with Celestia x Twilight< Chrysalis :heart: :twilightsmile: :trollestia: (and we need a chrissy Icon Q_Q)

Honestly I'm downvoting this, not because it's not good but, that you claim it's complete without showing the results of it all this and that my dear author is worth the downvote as this had so much more potential.

I wished there was a scene where Cadance was getting impregnated.

Get this out of the feature box. :ajbemused: Way too many Chrysalis-wins stories lately.

5115848 That's the main reason people usually pay attention to me, yes :derpytongue2:

5115963 I actually considered making it an unbirthing story, but the images that inspired it really hinged on the cock vore. I figured it would be interesting to try writing something new.

While I'm flattered that you think I'm good enough to commission, I generally avoid commissions since I tend to write better at my own pace (i.e. really slowly).

5115916 5116064 5116346 5117228 A continuation is not out of the question. I've learned from other stories, however, that one needs to be careful with tacking extra chapters onto porn. It runs a high risk of repetition.

5117370 I didn't really bother with it since so many other fics cover the same ground and I wanted to try something different.

5117723 I already admitted in the Author's Notes how overdone the premise is :derpytongue2:

5117763 I actually like getting downvotes--shows that people were paying attention. If something this bad received universal acclaim then that would probably not be a good sign :rainbowlaugh:

5117876
Eh, not really your fault it got featured. :twilightsmile:

[Humanized ponies] [Eggflation] [Oviposition] [Futa] [Cum inflation] [Brainwashing/Mind control] [Goo] [Cock vore] [Transformation] [Goo ponies] [Unbirthing],

You probably already know.

5117876 Could you PM me a link to the storie's picture please? I'd like to see it.

Hope you're going to post more, I really want to see the others' reactions (especially Celestia) when they realize what happened to her. I also really like the direction you took this, very different from the rest. Keep up the good work.

how can there be goo ponies involved if this is human i wonder? let's find out.....

5117876 Have you thought about a NTR Yuri fanfic?

All my favourite fetishes, plus a tie-in to an actual episode?
BRILLIANT! :moustache:

“Cadance. By Celestia, what did that impostor do to you?”

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What the fuck did i just read!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::twilightoops::rainbowwild:

5118337 I lol'd :rainbowlaugh:

5118408 Thanks :twilightsheepish: A continuation isn't out of the question, but I write super slow.

5118724 Derp. And here I thought I managed to catch all the reflexive "someponies" and the like :facehoof:

5118748 I didn't know what NTR was until today. Cuckolding barely seems like a fetish--I like my fetishes excessive and unrealistic :derpytongue2:

5119746 Kinky BS? :raritywink:

It's a good fucking thing that I just happened to derp around my favorites, glance over "Her Body Was Cold" and then decide to check up on you, or else I would never have known this fic was posted.

Also, I keep trying to scroll up to see the rest of the cover image.

I hate being "that guy", but I look forward to reading this later tonight.

Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. 10/10

5119860 Well, NTR (NeToRare=Cheating) generally involves MindBreak/BrainWashing, and there are not much humanized fics about Twilight and Celestia.

Yiu did a great job :3 :heart:

okay, yeah, that was just as great as I thought it would be!

I was hoping for eggs in twilight :fluttershysad:

Mind blown...:twilightoops:

im interested in tha full cover art:raritystarry:

everytime I click source for the cover art it takes me to the frequently asked questions section.....could you put a link in the description please? I wish to see what it looks like....other than that good story so far

5122801 5123506 There was a link in the source, but I'm guessing a mod removed it. Check the Author's Note in the second chapter :derpytongue2:

5120507 Eh, I guess I kinda see the appeal, but it just seems a little silly. If you can brainwash people why would you bother with also stealing someone's girlfriend/boyfriend and draw attention to yourself in the process?

Shrug.

5120522 Thanks. No one does cavalcades of smut quite like me :rainbowkiss:

5122272 Check the Author's Note in the second chapter :raritywink:

5120246 Yeah, I tried cropping it a few different ways, but I didn't have a lot of options if I wanted to get past the site guidelines :trixieshiftright:

Well that was certainly novel, which isn't something I say about clop very often. I liked that Chrysalis is so burnt out on experience that ejaculating Twi out of herself was a numb experience. :pinkiehappy:

The egg laying aspect wasn't as um in focus as I would have liked but this was a really fun story never the less and I'd love to see more. I've very curious to see what cum-Twi is like...actually that could be a series in of itself. Would you be ok with me borrowing the concept? :twilightsmile:

Whoa. I've heard of blowing someone, but turning a sac into a vacuum? That's... New. Looking forward to the next chapter.

5123622 oh :twilightblush: Sry i didn't see that part

:moustache:

5124537 Go for it. I don't have any problem with people using my ideas in stories as long as they credit me in some way :twilightsmile:

Considering how unoriginal those ideas are, it would be rather hypocritical to say no.

Lol. To whoever is downvoting all the comments; you are not really accomplishing anything except making me laugh. Feel free to PM me or something if you are so morally offended by the story or dislike me as a person that much :twilightsmile:

5127388 Thanks, I'll be sure to credit you as my inspiration...though given the story I've got gestating right now I'm not sure you'd want your name attached to it. :derpytongue2:

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