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I can't wait to see more!


More there will be!

Give me an hour.

Pretty interesting, but I likely won't continue much past that. M/F is a major turnoff.

An intriguing start. Tracking.

This certainly seems promising. I can see this character touching on some rarely seen fetishes, like mummification from all that hair. I'm sure you have a plan, and I'm quite interested to see what that plan is. There were a few errors here and there though so you're going to want to make sure you proof read carefully.

Wow, that was amazing. I loved every word of it. Very well done, and executed fantastically, but now I want more! I want to know about this new mare, you have hooked me, of Celestia you hooked me.

Really enjoyed the character so far, and was very surprised at how much I enjoyed this. I am not usually a fan of either super-villains, or over the top comedy, but the characterization and story, plus writing, so far has me very interested in reading the continuation. I hope it doesn't get too zany(tags look very promising), and that we get to keep exploring her character, but so far I am happy as can be with reading this!

There is not enough yes for me to describe how much I want more of this story. Exceptionally written, and very detailed.

Oh heeeeells yes. This is astounding so far! I will watch the fuck out of this!

I'm a little stunned how fast a story like this popped up after SDCC. How I hope that the real character will be half the mare your Madame is (I know I'd be dropping all my bits away at that place, heh). I'd also like to throw in my own plea for more exploration of Trick Turner and the other girls, although I'd by lying to myself if I ignored the want for more of Madame's scenes.

Here's hoping that Manehatten is big enough to support all that awesomeness of heros and villians duking it out.

And if anyone else hasn't quite made the connection, here's a blast from the past, Medusa.

this story is similar to Alan Gibson's story, "Hells Underground" :applejackunsure:

We are all going to hell for this.

That ending :raritydespair:
You're in the feature box, so that means you'll write a sequel right? :raritystarry:

Ghost story, somepony tell me I'm not crazy, because I don't see this story anywhere in the 'new stories' listing, even as far back as yesterday. :pinkiecrazy:

(Is it possible to be featured without being submitted yet!? :O I- I've never seen that before...)


I must tell everypony!

2922151 OK, I guess I'll send you guys a letter from hell when I get there.

My face before the fic: :rainbowhuh: "I am going to hell for reading this
My face after reading: :rainbowderp: "Was she just raped, with hair?"

Wow. A S4 clopfic two days after the spoilers. I think that might be a new record.

He took off his bowler to reveal a pair of horns, and cackled, a legitimate, deep, cackle. “I’ve found the home of Ms.Marelevolent, and her little pets...” he said the word the way I might say cockroach. “...now she will pay for beating me to the crystal ball of Anicktu! That museum was mine to heist from, and now, I, the Devil in the Details, have all of you to do with as I wish! And I think I’ll liquidate some assets...”

What? :rainbowderp:

Aaaaand the record breaker xD
S4 hasn't even started yet and we have clop of our newest villain...


Heck if it makes the featured box I'll make a trilogy of stories.

You were saying? :trixieshiftright:

Awwwww yisss. What were you saying about making it to the feature box :heart: Oh baby, you've got some writing talent that needs to spread in a bad sort of way:rainbowkiss:

This is fantastic, and I dearly hope you write more. Just enough lewd with more than enough bang pow zoom to make any superhero and pony nut happy. More. More, more, more. This is an actual story set in a brothel so believable I can smell the cheap cologne and cigars.

Ohh this story was just wonderful.
I would love to see a sequel, it has so much, lesbians, super villains, a large splut of grace and other spluts. :twilightsheepish:

Oh snap. What is THIS?

Very much interested!

~Skeeter The Lurker


Yeah... My thoughts exactly.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That's damn impressive. Well done dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Very interesting story idea. Hope to see more.

Pleasepleaseplease don't turn out to be buildup to clop and not be a good story after that

This is too good and well written to end here, this has sequel, threequel and more written all over it. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks, can you send a postcard too? It'd be great :scootangel:

I expected the sex-scene to be a bit more describing, however it was also a lot more artful than almost any other clopficiton, so that definitely makes up for that :)

Loved every bit, :pinkiehappy::yay::trollestia::raritystarry::twilightsmile:
Im hooked cant wait for next chapter :derpytongue2:

What the hell did I just read?....I don't know, but I want moar!

Damn this was sweet! I assume that this was based off the season 4 spoiler video thingy?
And please, make a sequel, the last few lines perfectly set up for one, and a giant (possibly sexy) fight.

I'd prefer a description that makes it more clear the Marelevolent (I can't believe I just typed that), particularly her mane, has an aura of benevolence and intoxication, almost fey-like, that make her rape victems (almost) want to shower her/be showered with love. I can't stand erotica where people fall into the motions just because they happen to be "so horny and slutty."

Purple mare, pink streak in her mane. Twilight?


I hope so! Heaven's going to be a real snooze. :twilightsmile:

There are no words. Tentacle. Hair. Sweet sweet words. Prostitution. Lesbianism. They . . . they should have sent a poet.

Here's the best I can do:


That... Was amazing, I think I might just cry even. Though there was one line that I absolutely loved, "by celestial gilded nipples". I'm so going to be using that one sometime. Please, for the love of all that is pony, MAKE A BUCKING SEQUEL!

MORE!!!! :flutterrage:
I-if that's okay with you… :fluttershysad:

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