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Abramus5250
Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.
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...... or you knoew, tyhey could jsut beat her up >_<
It's good, however, I have a feeling that someone's going to ask you to make one for Eris and Umbra as well...........Oh wait, I AM! It would most certainly be interesting.
Aggressive negotiations? What's that?
6454253 Like regular negotiations, but usually with a lightsaber.
OH HELL, YES!
Most read! Go!
6454304 Dat reference
6454304 I thoroughly enjoyed this as I did the last one and all your stories. Have a fave and a like
That was sweet.
YES! That was hot and lovely! Would love to see a pic of, Chrysalis's, and the changelings, new forms.
Even with how great this story is, I can't help but feel the need for a epilogue or another sequel.
Your a great writer, and I know you have very long running stories, but this is one that's going to need more to wrap it up. If only to explain the new life that awaits, Spike, Moon, Chrysalis and the changeling race, as well as the reaction of the important being in their lives.
Like always, great work. Hope you never stop writing. Especially, Spike, stories.
Hot dam I want see how this all happened from Spike becoming a badass to the after affects of this
N. Moon and S. Dragon, Better Diplomacy Through Dragon Sex. Canterlot: Canterlot Royal Press, 30AR.
What do I think? It's a fic about Spike getting sex, which automatically makes if a piece of crap.
Condragonlations, dipshit, you'll never get those weeks back.
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Eat a Snickers
6456637 Well, that just seems a bit... mean-spirited.
6456793 Eat a dick. I hear they're Spike's favorite.
6456881 What can I say. I've been swayed by the likes of JuiceboxAlvin and Leekfish to the true spirit of bronydom.
I can't help but feel that it was too expositional. There was a lot of talking and explaining--reading about the kids was kind of a slog--and it started getting ham-handed once the talk of "true love" began. And this is mostly personal preference, but I'm not really for using sex as a venue to demonstrate "true love". I totally understand why you did it and that the sex was representative of more, but it's just strange that Chrysalis started feeling the love between Spike and NMM when she Spike unloaded inside her.
Aside from that, it's good for what it is, and you definitely write quality clop. I like this incarnation of NMM, and I would like to see her outside of sexual scenarios. Pretty good read, very much appreciated.
Also, I'm never one for "fixing" the changelings' appearances because I really like the way they look, but that's really heavily personal preference.
6456936 Still, you know, there's the time-honored tradition of just keeping your opinions to yourself. It's hard this day and age, but whatever you say might not be all that kosher with everyone else.
Just saying.
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I'd much rather suck one, more fun that way
A good read. Now to add it to a shelf next to its predecessor.
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Well aren't you a special snowflake?
Newsflash, no one gives a shit.
6456637 Dear sir, If you are of the belief that any story in which Spike has sex is a bad story, you could just look at the tags, and avoid any that has the tags; Spike, Sex and mature. So that you do not have to read them, I mean you can read them, just remember no one is forcing you to.
Regards D.O.W
Sombra next!
nah.
good job by the way. 
Thor: ANOTHER! *Smashes Beer Mug upon the table.*
it was a good rape.
I thought is was a very good cutie-clop.
6462752 I haven't read it yet. Is it really that bad?
6462772 Ignore him, he's a troll.
6462752 doesn't know what a good fic is if he's never written one.
6456936 Oh, really? What is this "true spirit of bronydom" bc i thought it was love and tolerate, not hate and bigotry
6464693 Oh trust me, I know he's a troll. I just like screwing with trolls.
Not as good as your other stories since this just boils down to them drugging and borderline raping Chrysalis to get their way.
i have to say i didn't hate it . i don't love it . there wasn't any what i would call clop. if there bit of foreplay with spike trying to entice but this feels more political than any else. i did enjoy your take on spike and nightmare moons relationship. so decent story though i wouldn't call it clop.
Darkness
While this fic is a work of masTERFUL, BEAUTIFUL WRITING AND IT MAKES ME ASDOJGOAISDHGSADGD
I do have a few pieces of constructive criticism.
First and foremost? They don't speak very naturally. It almost feels like you're trying to emulate Shakespeare in terms of elegance in dialogue. But, nobody talks like that in real life! If it was just for Nightmare Moon during the negotiations, I think it would make more sense.
Second and lastly, the ending was... VERY abrupt, and too fairy tale happily ever after.
The changelings becoming whole again? I can handle, but them turning into beautiful butterfly ponies that are suuuper magical and pretty...
That sort of feels like a publisher came along, and said "Ugh, that ending is too different from what the kids will like, change it so they get some pretty butterflies or something."
In conclusion, I would give this a tenoutaten, but... the sort of janky dialogue and the abrupt, magical fairy tale ending take a bit away from this story. So...
8/10
Awesome job!
great story!
but there needs to be a 3some! part 3 for 3some
Truly a work of art
I can see why it took so long. This story was epic. I really liked this story.
I liked it. I was worried at first, since out wad borderline rape, but all's well that ends well.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Really good stories but I do have to say I would of changed nightmare moons name to starlight moon. But thats just my own opinion
Not bad man. Awesome job.keep the good work.
Maybe, on a different story not connected to this, Spike could become a special type of negotiator that will bend even the strong will to submission.
What I hate about this is now with all the club fictions and FanFictions autocorrect a b**** it makes the changelings no true love then we have the show do the same exact thing just not pornographically kind of pisses me off because everyone else called it before Hasbro knew what they were doing so good story though
7754286 SOO GOOD....!!!!
In this and the prequel… dragon mating seems to have a soul binding effect…
One d*** to rule them all
One d*** to find them
One d*** to f*** them all
And in extacy bind them
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And it needs this song
Personally, I feel like there needs to be...more. Beyond the sex, there is SO MUCH potential...ill be keeping an eye on you, always hungry for more.
so spike is getting a harem of villain mares i think have a f you not shore if you want EQG villains but yer you go
and one's to think
you get right
Could you do one with daybreaker?
Need a sequel! Spike conquering villains!
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Well ... I think that qualifies as "Hilarious in Hindsight", considering the canon take on changedlings.