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Abramus5250


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Read through it.
Loved it.
Looked back at the cover art.
Made a size comparison in my head.
Winced at the thought.
Faved.

Loved it amazing work my friend really looking for more... :twilightsmile:

Now before I read, I see three things.

Spike

Nightmare Moon

And a romance tag.

....

God damn it Abramus. Stop making me worship your words.

I liked it,
and after seeing that it's still incomplete I like it even more! :pinkiehappy:

i must ask, is there clop in the first chap? need to know if read now or save for later

5473096 Whoops! Sorry about that, meant to have it say complete.

5473363 Knowing me, what do you think? :trollestia:

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Whelp..my hopes are now crushed.
Well thanks for the cool fic anyway.

Comment posted by Animated Rarity deleted Jan 7th, 2015

Love the story. Have a fav.

Twas great. This is definitely one of those ships that need to be written more

good crack ship. like the way you portrayed spike. Would you be willing to make a longer story of spike

Since this is marked complete, is there any chance of a sequel somewhere down the road?

Didn't even check the tags before reading. Went the opposite direction I first expected. Loved it.
On another note, We need more straight NMM stories.

HMB
HMB #15 · Jan 7th, 2015 · · 1 ·

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Her legs weak and her head heavy

Hooves are sweaty

She came about twice already

You know the rest.

A great one-shot for two great creatures! And your right! Not enough of this pairing.

And, Spike, makes a great mate for the bad/misunderstood females! Spike stories for the win!

Oh, who am I kidding?! This is just begging for, at least, one more chapter. Come on! Pretty Please!:pinkiehappy::moustache:

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:rainbowlaugh: Best comment.

E: You read this as D
D: You looked up reread that again

Don't think these are reasons to write this.

Comment posted by NZM7842 deleted Jan 7th, 2015

Is there any chance of more of this, ornah ?

The alicorn could not even speak, only moan and whimper and occasionally squeak at the dragon gave her an extra large tongue bath.

Smallest mistake in the history of mistakes.
7.8/10 - Too much liquid.

5476915 Fixed and, may I ask, too much of which liquid? :trollestia:

5476930 The amount of liquid created by one character in this story would be enough to consider it enough. Bear in mind there is two, that makes it twice enough.

The funk has been doubled.

'cos everybody needs somebody to love!
nice little story there though :twilightsmile:

I need sequel so bad I'm gonna explode

5479318 SHIT, I'm laughing so hard...that even you somewhere in the world can faintly hear it

5475671 Sorry, don't get it....

Would ya kindly explain :D

HMB

5479687 Wait, you really don't get it?

Like, are you being serious? The smiley face has me confused.

What I am getting, here, is that she just needed to get laid.
Ok then

5479678 no wonder the dogs were barking!

That was a fun story.

Not sure how this will work out. But its nice to see there is at least a chance for Nightmare Moon to grow into something other than being a monster.

Also seeing spike grow up into such a perceptive and kind dragon, as well as a natural lover, gives me warm fuzzies.

5480910 Yea... sorry for that

Am I the only one that sees a song reference in the title and the chapter title?

"I", not "We" Luna

aww Moonie finally found someone to love :heart:

i wonder what the future would bring.

sequel? :pinkiehappy:

You did well my friend. I say sequel

5475671 Did you just..

Oh my God you did.

All I have to say is:

I know that this has a sex tag, but does this have actual clop in it?

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She's nervous
But on the surface
She looks hot and ready to get some
No, she'll never be forgetting
What it felt like
To get spiked
She moans so loud
She opens her mouth
And hot breaths come out
It feels good but how?
She can feel her heart beat now
His endurance ran out
Now he's gonna cum inside her. BLOW!!!

HMB

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*Laughs*

Let's have se- I mean let's go make a mixtape.

I'm finding your use of colons disconcerting.

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yep, and good one!

“Who are you?” He asked simply, his baritone voice sending a chill down Nightmare Moon’s spine.

He's actually met her before, you know. As Nightmare Moon. Briefly, before he fainted, in the Season One two-part opener.

While I don't think Princess Luna is a virgin, Nightmare Moon might well never have been with anyone. Her only previous existence was, after all, as a wrathful emnation or Shadow possessor of Princess Luna, she didn't get much time on Earth, and she was kinda busy with trying to conquer the Realm at the time. And her characteristic vices are Wrath and Envy, rather than Lust.

Spike's Dragonmusk must be pretty awesome to have that much effect on her. On the other hand, it might not work on a more balanced personality, such as the real Princess Luna, who has enough complexity to not simply be pulled about willy-nilly by stray desires. Nightmare Moon is much simpler.

“That would be my doing, I’m afraid,” the dragon said with a whisper. “A side effect of it being a certain time of the year for my kind.

That explains why Spike boarded up the castle. He really didn't want to have every mare in Ponyville climbing through the windows looking for sex. Among other things, he probably likes the Ponies of Ponyville too much to humiliate them like that.

“I must say, Miss Moon, you have quite the figure for an alicorn.”

He would know, being closely related by adoption and marriage to two of them -- Twilight Sparkle and Cadance Mi Amore. Which makes this quite a compliment, since he's saying she's hotter than the Alicorn of Love.

Down, swinging casually underneath his predatory body, Nightmare Moon spied...

... something that would normally be sheathed in armor plating. But then, Spike's kind of turned on right now.

Nightmare Moon, incidentally, would have seen Spike before. But only briefly, from a point of view of "Wait, was there a baby dragon riding that lavender unicorn a moment ago? Who just fainted and fell off? Wow, Equestria's gotten weird over the last millennium ..."

Ironically, my version of Princess Luna was once quite friendly with Dragons (though not quite this friendly) and would probably be well aware of all the details of draconic anatomy. But Nightmare Moon probably never bothered when possessing Luna to consult her memories of the shape and size of Dragon penises (which she might have briefly glimpsed in some context), because ... well, why would she? Note that in All the Way Back, Luna befriends Fischfootur, but is not at all interested in trying to seduce him.

Even though my Dragons often do mate for life, I agree with the main thrust of the analysis of draconic psychology here -- it is largely a matter of either protecting a hoard or protecting the people they care about, and if they love people they see them as their "hoard." And Spike is about as enlightened as Dragons get.

Though I still think he's more likely to wind up with Rarity.

By the way, try reading the story with this playing in the background ... :raritywink:

"O Spike! Greatest and chiefest of stud-muffins!"

I would have like to have read what happened after, Moon and Spikes relationship and how they really got to know each other. And the reactions,
"HOLY GUACAMOLE! Did I just? With her?"
"A Dragon? Well that's not something you wake up to everyday."
Not the best but you get the idea.

I would love to see this become a full story :pinkiehappy:

Loved this one-shot (even through I want there to be more chapters) and this is every cute so keep up the good work and if you get time you should make more for this
Demur signing off

The things that a bit of dragon pheromones can do to a lonely, sexually-repressed genocidal goddess :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I guess Spike is getting another monument for saving the world :moustache: That and a litter of rowdy alicorn-dragon hybrids in about a year :twilightoops:

I'd very much like a continuation... but alas, sometimes we can only dream...

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