AmethystMare
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Sorry for taking so much time to respond, I am really happy to see a sequel to this story and it off on a good start. I love how you explain how his situation was for Arctic sense the lat story and love how he has settled in in his role now. I like the tidbit about that he hope that this pet system would maybe lead to actual love show show well how brainwash he is at this point . I can't wait to see how it will turn out for him.
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It is pretty much suspended disbelief in his relationship - but that's the purpose of having a fantasy like this one, to be honest. In reality, his relationship with Fluttershy (in the last story) would have been abusive but in fantasy it's hot and, of course, no one gets hurt. I think this one requires far less suspended disbelief except that we must believe in colourful cartoon ponies for the tales!
Shorter one, unfortunately, as there was a lot that could have gone into this tale, but it all came together nicely throughout! Thanks for reading along!
Generally ,I am not too keen on Anthro MLP, but they here are those good one that I enjoy, but I can understand it was asked by the commissioner to turn him into an anthro, but you managed to present the TF in an interesting way that I could enjoy. I did like how you descried Arctic's relationship with Shy and how he is not broken in a way to let just anyone playing the art. Over all it was interesting to see NNM and Daybreaker for some reason. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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I must say, I do enjoy writing transformation scenes, personally!
Nice, I take it there is still one more chapter to go with this story?
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Try now, for some reason it seemed to cut off the word count even though the total words noted was correct, apologies.