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Awesome story so far, keep it up.
9024079
Hi there, this has been written up in full and will be posted one chapter per week until completion. Thanks!
I'm going to have quite some trouble waiting each week for the next chapter. But wait I shall.
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Unfortunately, my proofreader can't blast through this in one go for me, as I've had them take on a hefty project only a couple of weeks back. But the second chapter is being proofread now and will be up tomorrow. :)
9028798
That's entirely understandable. I do look forward to it though.
This keeps on getting better and better, can't wait to see what will happen to him in he next chapter
9034497
Thanks, it's nice that more people are enjoying this as I was pretty much braced for controversy on this one!
9034995
Oh why do you believe that? I have been waiting a long time to have a good FluttershyDom on male
eww gay
9036999
I'm sorry, is there a problem? This is a story containing straight erotica.
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Hm... a new comment popped up above that illustrates this in part hehe. And more because everyone has their own version of the chars, I'm getting voted down to heck here but the commissioner was lovely and I thoroughly enjoyed writing it regardless! ^_^
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I've seen trolls before they didn't even bother reading it and just do it for the LOL in their little petty spiteful minds. I am sure your reader ship will grow large soon enough. Well, at least you had a good time doing this with the commissioner at least. Can't wait to see what you will come up with next for this story.
Things seems to be going well for the most past for Fluttershy in breaking in her new toy, which seems that the conditioning is actually sticking and that she can soon trust him not to run off on his own, I wonder how things will ultimately turn out for the pour pet of here's. This is a fun read so far and I am looking forward to see more of this in the future.
Will you be writing more stories like this?
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This is a commission but I often work on furry/anthro femdom too - those are up on my furry pages under the same username. Inflation isn't something I've worked on previously but big yes to all of the BDSM in past works!
9045775
She is particularly mean to him - I mean, she could have probably wooed him over months and teased him into it but I expect that would have taken too much time for DomShy!
Next on Saturday and thank you for following along :)
I love this keep it up please. You’re a great writter
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This is a commission story which has been written in full, no worries!
Neat this was even better then the last chapter, I am really starting to wonder what is in that liquid that Shy keeps giving him? From the sound of it it's an aphrodisiac and maybe some mind altering substance that seem to make him more pliable, I can't wait to see what will be the end results of this. I like the Nurse Red-heart in with her I wonder what she will do to add to his suffering. Normally I am not really into watersports, just never been into it really, but you managed to grave my attention with it and make it sound fun for once. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you (yet again!) for following along! I imagined a mix of potions with one never knowing what was coming next, as she wouldn't be able to use magic (being a pegasus). Red was chosen as she'd have knowledge of what's safe in terms of bodily fluids and such but I've grown rather fond of her too!
I'm glad I was able to make the kink more accessible. I know this is "just" an erotic fic, but I think power play is less about the act and more about the emotions it arouses.
Another great chapter I am really liking the slow burn of the story with the mental conditioning that Fly is subjecting the guy to and how it is finally starting to hanker down in him mind and actually start to accept and want to server her. As usual, I am always looking forward to see more of this story again soon.
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Hi and thanks again! There were a few extensions to this chapter and tweaks that I'm glad came through on the mental side of "play" between them. A follow-up of sorts has been commissioned and we're just putting the plot together currently before going ahead with the writing side. :)
Oh, this is gonna be good
PS: I'm calling it now: there was something in that tea. Something designed to make stallions hard.
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I'm glad people are enjoying it! :)
Yup, his tea was totally laced with aphrodisiacs. Called it!
Oh, this was exactly what I was hoping for for the pore bastard, now with his mind nearly compliantly in-caged. I love the latex suit, I hope if will before a permanent fixture in his life now, and hope there will be more added to come with that outfit and that he will lose the ability to fly so atrophied his wings will be. I wonder if the water-balloon inflation is something that all pony or that he was given something to make it possible, and does it serve a purpose in his conditioning of his body? What does his diet now consist of?
I wonder when his last amber of willpower will finally rise up again, leading to his final rebellion before being snuffed out of him to stay permanently in the mindset of a pet. I wonder if he will still be able to function in pony society, only because he is told to replace the pony that was Arctic and act the role he had, and is his Mistress Shy's pet in closed doors; complete disconnect of the pony he once was. I wonder if he will be given a new name as well by her?
Again great chapter, you are delivering everything I wanted so far I can wait to see what will happen next in this story.
PS. do you actually manage to live off your erotica literature now?
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Hi there - bear with, brain fried!
I think the latex will come back with great pleasure later on (as, of course, shortly working on the follow-up to this). The inflation wasn't detailed with a reason but more a bit of a side-effect of his particular condition in being over-endowed and a rather kinky, needy sort of stallion! For the rest though, you'll have to see over the next two weekends! <3
I do work on writing full-time although I am striving to branch into non-erotic paid work, although I did not have enough time, before I was fired, to build up that audience. Nothing happens as you plan, does it? But I make enough to live frugally, pay all bills easily and give all of the animals the top care and TLC they deserve. After only a few months, that is an excellent beginning and I thank everyone for supporting me in moving forward. :)
I hope the final chapter will be the pony version of the FBI breaking into her house, only to slowly walk away after seeing what she did to him.
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I don't think that would be in keeping with the flow of this erotic commissioned tale.
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I did say I hope that’ll happen. I know it won’t but I can dream right?
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I'm afraid the dreaming is in vain, as that is not how it ends! ^^;
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yeah...it’ll probably end with him being part of a four-way looking at the progression this fanfic is going at.
Well this was an interesting read, not as much exiting as he his mind didn't seem to struggle much any more, I was hoping for some last remaining resistance be sapped out. Still, is was fun to see all those characters fucking Artistic and has been a fun ride all the way through. Now I wonder how his life will be like for him in the epilogue.
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Yes, it wasn't intended to be the struggle in this chapter so it was intentional here. :)
I've got to say I look at some of these characters differently now! The epilogue is very short (may upload it here earlier if it is edited up/proofread), fair warning! But written up chapter one of the follow-up mini series :D
I can only imagine the amount of water he would have to drink to make up for all that cum...
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Probably should just hook him up to the hose!
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also as a side question, how many “pets” did Fluttershy have before Arctic?
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I'm sorry - I don't own the character of Arctic and I don't know the history of this mini world beyond what I've written here. Apologies!
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oh right, this was a commision. That’s ok, it was just a minor question I had.
It was short as an epilogue, I but does a descent enough, Like the idea that he came back to his home, not keen on the idea Princess Luna knows about it. Still, it had been a fun ride for me, I hope to see more MLP stuff from you.
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Hi - apologies, this was what was requested to wrap it up. It was written to spec. :)
There's more coming: I should finish drafting the next one this coming week but then it will need to sit and go through editing, although it is shorter.
Is it just me... or did Arctic go an entire 12-ish hours without food? Fluttershy had breakfast, but Arctic somehow ended up with nothing. (Except a mouthful of pussy, but that's not really food, is it?)
9130293
Hi, I have limited word counts to work with on commissions and I didn't want to waste space on detailing bathroom habits and diet in the meantime, along with sleep. Thanks! :)
I don't know about Fluttershy being so manipulative. I actually like the idea of Flutterdom but that's because I think it goes well with her caring nature. To trick an innocent stallion like that seems more something for Rarity. Fluttershy would be patient and keep things clear so that she's sure he's agreeing to it.
How exactly did she keep him from cumming?
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This was written for a client and is tailored to their specifications, as noted. :)
10049193
This was written so long ago, I don't have it in my mind right now. It would be in the story though!
10051651
You can play quite loose with that.
10052275
You seem to be commenting across multiple sites - I don't think I can help with your queries.
One of the best stories on Fimfiction! Apart From Nightmare and Daybreak, and all the side stories, this one I really like. Walking into this, I thought this was going to be another sex story where nothing really fascinating happens. I also had doubts about how you were going to take Fluttershy, an innocent, sweet caring pony, and make her the dominate one. After reading the first three chapters, I took those thoughts and threw them in a fire. You are such a talented writer! Keep up the good work!