Gaining Back Control

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Milly97

Milly97 #1 · May 1st, 2019 · 2 · ·

Oh my god, honestly one of the best things I have ever read, really wish there was anouther chapter or more tho, you know telling the story of after that kind of thing, xx

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #2 · May 1st, 2019 · 1 · ·

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If this gets a lot of notice after the contest then yes there will be more

Milly97

Milly97 #3 · May 1st, 2019 · · ·

9598216
Yaaaaaaayyyyyyyy, in that case I'm defiantly rooting for you 😁

Alphamon_Ouryuken

Alphamon_Ouryuken #4 · May 1st, 2019 · 2 · ·

9598216
Is it weird that throughout this entire story I imagined Twilight being their child?

...or did you plan on making it an OC?

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #5 · May 1st, 2019 · · ·

I actually wanted to give that impression. I'm not sure yet.

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #6 · May 4th, 2019 · · ·

Mm.

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #7 · May 4th, 2019 · · ·

9603496
Good mm or bad mm? I must know!!!

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #8 · May 4th, 2019 · · ·

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It’s a “I wanted this to be better than it actually turned out to be so much, I’m giving this a thumbs down in a spat”-mm.

Little_Draco

Little_Draco #9 · May 4th, 2019 · · ·

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At least you explained your reason rather not replying so I'm thankful for the honesty.

DualThrone

DualThrone #10 · Oct 7th, 2019 · · ·

Good form, old chap! Hats off to you. :)

The notion of Luna and Celestia taking up the mantles of Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker respectively, running respective empires, and yet seeming to be on oddly normal sisterly terms is a neat idea.

Little_Draco