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8189864
Yes
Not bad at all! Definitely not my cup of tea, but it's well-written, the anon is a pony (for once), the setup isn't too unrealistic,... Well done. That plot (not Celestia's mind you) has already been used a whole lot though (Celestia's too by the way), so you lose a few points in originality.
Overall, for this fiction, I'd give it a total of 8.5/10, my enjoyment being along the lines of 55-60%, but then again, Celestia "teaching a lesson" to an oblivious colt is not my forte.
Still, a good fiction. Keep doing that kind of stuff.
Oh boy! Here I go fapping again!
8189870 Maybe.
8189897 I don't know.
8189919 Can you repeat the question?
10/10
. Anon got to touch the sun and not get burnt.
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Truly a great and benevolent leader to let him live after that test of strength and endurance.
One can only hope that purple smart finds a way to be the teachers pet
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So well written, and so very disturbing. It's amazing how often those two things coincide.
8189969 It was supposed to be like yes no maybe so I don't know, but I realize it didn't really work..
"Learning From The Best"
Ah, so a story about me then?
I kid. I'm shit. Congrats and nicely done.
8189969 YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME NOW! YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME NOW! YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME NOW, AND YOU'RE NOT SO BIG!
Oh boy... after reading "A parent's night out", I know I'll enjoy this!
Need some clean up on the prof' reading. No, I'm not going to go line by line in the comments. There are levels of asshole-ness I won't go. Also, not sure why I am here.
Yep, broken the princess.
I swear to god I saw a similar fanfiction of this. Did you use it as inspiration or am I just crazy? (Probably the latter)
More foalcon? Trying to say something Priest?
Have you SEEN the baby?
8190239
Good authors, who want to get better, appreciate line by line pointers.
8190783 Yes. Don't like the clutter in comments. PM better. Professional. After awhile you just see trees and can't see the forest. Could explain better, but I'm not wording very well.
8189969 Hey, you're not the boss
Hehehe... ooooh mai... aside from some typos and such that bug me, this was actually pretty damn good.
Nicely doen Priest, I approve of this.
Hehehe... ooooh mai... aside from some typos and such that bug me, this was actually pretty damn good.
Nicely doen Priest, I approve of this.
I remember reading a story exactly like this. Am I just going crazy?
8195860
It was in my "older stories" archive until it got a lot of attention, so i separated it.
"Nope." You answer, walking back to your room. "But I'm definitely looking forward to next week."
^^^ this
Is this rape in the story or only close to rape? There are probably laws and such but princess celestia makes the rules so everything is cool, probably.
Part two please?
This would have been my response (assuming that the pony in question is actually there. If they weren't though, what would I even be doing there?)
"You know my friend, Trixie? It has come to my attention that besides me, she has no other friends, which is a shame, really, as once you get to know her the time that you spend with her is very uplifting. So, what I'm saying, is that if you want me to put I a good word with Celestia for you, I'd appreciate it if you would try to make friends with Trixie sometime and not let her initial personality turn you away. All right?" Thus averting the whole "Boast Busters" incident, and making it so that Trixie never loses face during that incident, as Twilight would be extremely angry at the two morons who had just risked her friend's life just to see some "impressive magic". If you can't tell, I'm still extremely angry about that episode. She is a stage magician. It's in her job description to tell tall tales to keep the audience interested. No one in their right mind should have thought that she was telling the honest truth when she was talking about defeating an Ursa Minor. And what she did to the Elements of Harmony that were mocking her show, and that willingly got up on the stage to try to outdo her, was perfectly justified. Heck, in the WWE one time, a fan got in the ring during a fight between Triple H and Eddie Guerrero, and they looked at him, looked at each other, and proceeded to throw his ass out of the ring! As far as I'm concerned, they're just lucky that Trixie didn't think about the old "saw a pony in half" trick, or the trick where a pony goes into a box that can be shifted around, and their body parts all get rearranged. Of course, she'd have to do each trick correctly, lest she be charged for murder, but notice that I never said anything about reversing the trick. She could just do the trick halfway, and then wait until her show was over, and when they demanded that she pulled them back together, she could just say, "but Trixie's a fraud, remember? How would she know how to put you back together? Of course, if Trixie wasn't a fraud, she might be able to put you back together, but alas, I, Trixie Lulamoon, am just an attention-seeking fraud. Or do you perhaps have something that you would like to say to Trixie?" thus coercing them into apologizing for what the said during her performance, and begging her to put them back together. Which, of course, she'd do, because she's nice like that, and after she put them back together, she would say "I hope that, in the future, you will remember this little lesson, as I'm sure that none of us want to repeat this experience, am I right?" To which they would fervently nod their heads.
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8193969
Nice repost of the same exact comment.
Speaking of typos...
Your comment should have read
Done is spelled d-o-n-e, not d-o-e-n.
8189864
No what?
8189870
Yes what?
8189897
Maybe what?
8189919
What don't you know?
8189969
What question?
8527744
Well, when you have absolute garbage internet, you tend to repost the same thing once, or twice, or thrice without knowing it until it's too late.
M-my god... it is?!
8527941
love the sarcasm.
8527941
Sorry about leading you astray. We still friends?
8189969
Unless she has a flamethrower