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Shadowmane PX-41


Just your average british lad. I write things for a living. It’s the strangest living you’ll ever find, second only to my inability to take myself off of the grid.

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Canterlot High is hosting a talent show, and Trixie Lulamoon—as great and powerful as she always says she is—is trying to win first place. She's been polishing her magic tricks, improving her craft, and preparing herself for the competition.

But when one of her spells takes an entirely different turn, Trixie needs to see if she can control her three tiny helpers before they make a mess of Canterlot High...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 29 )

It was at this moment that Trixie knew... she screwed up.

8208803 That is a dank mei-mei, my good sir.:twilightsmile:

8208864 Damn it! I forgot to fix that...

MJP

why dioes Twilight still wear her crystal prep uniform in the specials

Uh-hu, looks like Trixie isn't getting out of that one easily

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Just here to say you should put the Equestria Girls tag

This story reminds me of one of your older stories. What's its name? " A Threat Older Than Time"?

MJP

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how is Twi still wearing her cpa uniform a spoiler

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Telling anything related to the Specials that have not aired yet is still a spoiler no matter how minor.

Uh-oh. Looks like this didn’t go as greatly and powerfully as Trixie thought it would.

Oh, I'm definitely going to track this one!

So cute. Sunset really knows how to handle kids.

Interesting, but I think you need a pre-reader.

Mommy Sunset is best Sunset. :twilightsmile:

Hopefully things will go better than anticipated.

Just need to point out one inconsistency:

"I'll help out too..." Fluttershy whispered as she clutched on to the geode around her neck, causing light to spill out of the cracks of her hand. A few pets sprung out of her backpack and started to run towards Trixie. "Please, little animal friends. Stop Trixie before she gets away!"

Isn't Fluttershy one of the babies? How did she suddenly gain the ability to form cohesive sentences?

Other than that, keep up the good work.

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Shit! I messed up!:derpyderp2::facehoof:

Now everyone's gonna see that...

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Don't worry. Just make an appropriate correction and it will be fine.

I doubt anyone can match what Trixie did.

Eh, we all come up with duds from time to time.

It’s so cute that rainbow and others are acting defensive to sunset. Awww

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She’s trixie’s mommy first and foremost ghough

"It's so cute that it's almost sickening..." Trixie scoffed as Sunset played with the babies. "Trixie just wants this to be over soon... We must be halfway into the talent show by now and the acts must be getting shorter and shorter." She bit her lip. "If we can't save these girls, then Trixie will lose, and be responsible for having three of CHS's best students go back to day-care! Oh... I'm never gonna live that down..." She slapped her head and groaned.

Is that a little jealousy from trix ;)

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