• Member Since 5th Oct, 2014
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anonpencil


Don't read my stuff if you have a weak stomach or are easily bothered by traumatic genitalia damage. That's seriously all I've got in here!

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Something about this pony world just ticks you off today. Things are poorly designed, poorly written, poorly paced, and you can't help but be annoyed by everything you see. Obviously, the best thing to do about all this is to complain!
You know that someone's got to be at fault for the state of things, and hopefully someone, or somepony, will fix it for you.
...Even if you hate the word somepony, oh my god, be more original for once in your life!

Contains a lot of sarcasm and some wall breaking. But mostly just whining.

P.S. Now with working cover art!

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Comments ( 29 )

You best watch that blood pressure Anon.

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No kidding.


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...oh.

Professor Plum
Story Approver

That was not funny

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Poor little Tim Drake...

Awwww, you took away the video. I liked that scene...
Edit: Thanks!

Rammus would be proud.

The punchline was worth it.

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God I hope so. Thank you.

Well, that got a good laugh out of me.

good job

#poorapplebloom

It’s 2017, bitch, no one likes country bumpkin lolis anymore.

Guess I'm no one, then. :applecry:

From this confusing series of noises and actions, a scroll appears with a flash of nonsense, exposition, and green fire, a rolled scroll appears.

You put a thing twice

Sometimes, it's best to just shove it so far in the back of your mind that you forget it's even there at all....

Just like Priest's update schedule.

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Did you just fist Apple Bloom?:applejackunsure:

It took me awhile to find the time to read this. I'm glad I did.

Speaking of being angry about things...

have the time you’re some sort of furry abomination.

This SHOULD have been half the time you’re some sort of furry abomination.

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Taken care of.

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Aw...you were supposed to leave it, and then leave me a comment saying "OK"! I mean, you undermine the point of your entire story by going back and changing it now! :pinkiesad2:

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Should of, have instead of half, and your vs you're are very frustrating to me, even if I'm just screwing around.

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All right. I can understand that...

Well I don't know what I was expecting... Huh right right

I hate to admit this, but I was giggling the whole time I was reading this. :facehoof:

Ladies and gentleman. Anons view of equestria

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The picture in the Author's Note is broken.

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