You are Anon, iconic figure of Equestria. One day while hanging out in the fields you are struk by lightning, but instead of dying you develop an amazing power: The Force Telekineses!
But at what cost did you receive these powers?
A story that was actually edited and proofread by a couple people.
Huge thanks to Mist_Chaser (and my friend James who doesn't have a profile) for help proofreading and editing!
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"James"
Huh. Suddenly thoughts of the movie "Phenomenon" come to mind.
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Doot doo dododo
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Never seen, but if it's anything like this it must be pretty good
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PATRICK!!!!
No words have ever been more true
This made me laugh my ass off so loudly that it startled everyone in the college library I was in.
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The plot of the movie is similar in concept, only the guy not only gains telekinesis, but enhanced intelligence. And instead of his head exploding, he has a lethal brain tumor.
What?
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exactly!
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I should try and find it, thanks for telling me about it!
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Well I'm glad I could make other people around you feel uncomfortable, glad you enjoyed it!
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Preach it brother!
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I like you. Have a follow and upvote
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Thank you, you didn't have to do that. I hope you continue to enjoy the works I put out! (Also is your name an SCP reference?)
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I was thinking that too but couldn't for the life of me remember the name of the movie.
Excuse me WHAAAAAAAAAAT?
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Exactly!
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Thanks for making this story suck less!
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All it reallly needed was a few minor spell checks and a little more sarcasm. Scene with Twilight breaking the news was your only major problem to be honest.
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Thanks for everything anyways, I feel like it's much better now after your help.
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Glad I could help
How high were you when you wrote this? I need me some of that shit.
First: WHAT?!
Second:
What the hell was that?
*Upvoting*
The ending was definitely inspired by that one old spice commercial. You know what I'm talking about.
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Yeah
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noice
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Pure beauty is what it was, thanks for the upvote!
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POWER!!!
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Sorry, drug machine broke
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Indeebd
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NOO!! I wanted some
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Sorry B, nothing I can do
Oh my fucking God, I died laughing.
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I'm glad I could make you laugh
It was like a train derailing...
Beautiful.
Guess you could say that this story was quite... mind blowing
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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HAHA, good one!
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Bingo, glad you got the reference!
I don't have any witty comment then have this
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Haha, nice!
EXPLOSION.....YEAH!!!!
why??? just... why?
Wonder if this could be turned into a real fanfic and not just the usual shitpost I enjoy? 🤔🤔🤔
I cri evryteim
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Are you seriously asking for a reader insert story to be anything but a shitpost? You must be on something, or smoking something.
i don't even watch starwars and yet i get this quote