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Punished Venom Muddy


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You are Anon, iconic figure of Equestria. One day while hanging out in the fields you are struk by lightning, but instead of dying you develop an amazing power: The Force Telekineses!

But at what cost did you receive these powers?

A story that was actually edited and proofread by a couple people.
Huge thanks to Mist_Chaser (and my friend James who doesn't have a profile) for help proofreading and editing!
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Comment posted by Mist_Chaser deleted Aug 10th, 2017
Comment posted by Punished Venom Muddy deleted Aug 10th, 2017

Huh. Suddenly thoughts of the movie "Phenomenon" come to mind.

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Never seen, but if it's anything like this it must be pretty good

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No words have ever been more true

This made me laugh my ass off so loudly that it startled everyone in the college library I was in.

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The plot of the movie is similar in concept, only the guy not only gains telekinesis, but enhanced intelligence. And instead of his head exploding, he has a lethal brain tumor.

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I should try and find it, thanks for telling me about it!

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Well I'm glad I could make other people around you feel uncomfortable, glad you enjoyed it!

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I like you. Have a follow and upvote

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Thank you, you didn't have to do that. I hope you continue to enjoy the works I put out! (Also is your name an SCP reference?)

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I was thinking that too but couldn't for the life of me remember the name of the movie.

Excuse me WHAAAAAAAAAAT?

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Thanks for making this story suck less!

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All it reallly needed was a few minor spell checks and a little more sarcasm. Scene with Twilight breaking the news was your only major problem to be honest.

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Thanks for everything anyways, I feel like it's much better now after your help.

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Glad I could help

How high were you when you wrote this? I need me some of that shit.

First: WHAT?!
Second:

"Sleep tight, sweet prince" you heard the soothing voce of Morgan Freeman God say as you were surrounded in a bright light.

What the hell was that?

*Upvoting*

The ending was definitely inspired by that one old spice commercial. You know what I'm talking about.

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Pure beauty is what it was, thanks for the upvote!

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NOO!! I wanted some :fluttershbad:

"AND HERE COMES THE GIANT FIST!" You bellowed, terrifying Twilight as she let out one last plea.

Oh my fucking God, I died laughing.

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I'm glad I could make you laugh :twilightsmile:

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0 #37 · Aug 16th, 2017 · · ·

It was like a train derailing...

Beautiful.

Guess you could say that this story was quite... mind blowing

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

"Dive bomb!" You let out as you continued to be unaware of Twilight's fear.

"Anon!" Twilight said a bit louder, but still going unheard.

"AND HERE COMES THE GIANT FIST!" You bellowed, terrifying Twilight as she let out one last plea.

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Bingo, glad you got the reference!

I don't have any witty comment then have this
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EXPLOSION.....YEAH!!!!

why??? just... why?

Wonder if this could be turned into a real fanfic and not just the usual shitpost I enjoy? 🤔🤔🤔

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Are you seriously asking for a reader insert story to be anything but a shitpost? You must be on something, or smoking something.

"By Obi-wan's beard, I have the force. I HAVE THE FORCE!"

i don't even watch starwars and yet i get this quote :rainbowlaugh:

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