• Member Since 29th Jan, 2013
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DoctorDerpy


The show may have ended, but I'm going to keep on reading until the last writer stops writing!

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Comments ( 39 )

That was cute. I like it.

This was heartwarming and fun. Keep on writing. I'd love to see more!

You know what? That was awesome. It was well written and just all around pleasant. You get a like!

Just by reading the title, I knew this was going to be cute. I'm glad to see it didn't disappoint.

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Thank you all for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it, as I had fun writing it. :twilightsmile:

Sooo adorable but now I'm wondering if derpy and the destroyer can go on hugging adventures

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Grumio Zul the great hugger! Hugging the nation, filling the quiet with laughter. :rainbowlaugh:

BEST STORY I'VE READ! :pinkiehappy: Thank you for making my day bright again despite all the stress I had all day, the weight on my shoulders vanished and I'm smiling again, thank you! :twilightsmile:

Loved it. Would love to see ya write some more horsewords.

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Glad you liked it! And I'm happy that it helped brighten your day :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! I'm planning on doing a couple more short fics before I move on to a bigger one I have planned.

:rainbowlaugh: Nice one! Happy go lucky pony scenarios always cheer me up, thank you. :derpytongue2:

Me: Can I get a free hug?

Derpy: Sure. (Hugs me)

Me: (Melts into a puddle from the amazing hug)

Derpy: Did my hug do that? :derpyderp1:

Me: (From the puddle) :heart:Yes.:heart:

Oh... Derpy's just so cute!!!
Too cute!!!
*melts into puddle*
I want a Derpy hug now!!!!

Derpy is BEST pony!!!

That is just too cute.:heart::derpytongue2::heart:

Awww...that was sweet.:twilightsmile: Have an upvote for that!

This was adorable and made me smile.^^ Light and fluffy, just what the doctor prescribed.

D'aawwwwww!!!!

For you, Great Grumio Zul, the day you visited Ponyville was the most positive, life-changing, paradigm-shattering day of your life.

For the citizens of Ponyville, it was Tuesday.

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Me: Can I get a free hug?

Derpy: Sure. (Hugs me)

Me: (Melts into a puddle from the amazing hug)

Derpy: Did my hug do that? :derpyderp1:

Me: (Bubbles affirmatively)

FTFY.

Cuteness OVERLOAD!!
(Derpy reminds me of a cat, will pay ANYTHING for a box)

:heart::derpyderp1::heart:

Afterwards Grumio Zul! The great destroyer took a new name as Grumio Zul! The great Guardain and Protector, as he roamed the land helping ponies and other races and fought the very evils that mae him loenly in the first plac.
In return he made many friends and gave plenty of hugs and was given in return, all thanks to a one crosseyed Gray pegasus with bubbles as her cutie mark.

That was very cute and enjoyable. Great job with your first story! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Can I get a free hug too?:fluttershysad:

I'd take that hug in a heartbeat.

She's gonna be a billionaire with that marketing plan.

Hiya! I luv dis. is gud story. yu get upvote from muffin horse ~:derpyderp2:

This story is flawed. The plot is fairly generic as far as conflict goes, there is an excess of adverbs and the dialogue runs on a bit. As a critic, I find this story to be a little above average...

...but as a brony, by Starswirl's beard did this bring a smile to my face! Your characterisation of Derpy is just so loving, it could easily be an episode of the show, and it's just so freaking CUTE I love it all the same! Call it a guilty pleasure or what have you, this is a story I would happily read to kids at bed time who are fans of the show. Good work!

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Thanks! I'm hoping to improve my writing by just creating a bunch of fics as practice. The stories that I usually write are ones that I'm emotionally invested in so I hope that I can bring that out in my work even if the prose isn't top-notch.

I'm happy that you enjoyed it nonetheless! :derpytongue2:

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Eh first part I disagree with, second part, yes.

I did an Audio Narration on this... hope that you don't mind...

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Thanks Mr Allan! :twilightsmile:

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Hey, what can I say except, you're welcome?

First off, spell out the name of the Pony speaking, then you can describe her after that if you feel the urge.

Unless the pony is unfamiliar, you don't even have to go into details.

“You'll see sweetie!” she announced, before flying out the open window.

requires a come before "Sweetie", regardless of it it is a proper Name or just a diminutive or something like that.

Ps: Wait, this is after all the FiM site.

Around thirty minutes had passed, and while a few ponies looked at Derpy's box with interest, no one had actually come over for a hug.

And like that this story turned into an horror-story.
I mean, what living being could be so cruel??
Poor Derpy! *buys a dozen hugs*

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