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... dude, holy fuck
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well, it's like Sunset said her plans don't end with just the kids. I look forward to your comments on the next chapter.
....I like it
I'm just saying if Applebloom was my relative, I would have disowned her, harsh I know but why should I care for a spiteful person like her?
they pushed Sunset to the breaking point, all for what, because they were jealous.
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I was trying to show that Applebloom is taking Sunsets suicide rather hard and is taking her role in Sunsets death even harder so thus is lashing out and is going through one of the five stages of grief which is I believe anger. We all experience grief differently and for Applebloom she is on the stage of Anger.
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true
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also saw a typo
shouldn't that be Manhatten?
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Thank you! I didn't notice that until you spotted it again thank you.
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That makes sense, grief and acceptance. Thou followed by great anount of guilt.
This Sunset would be a good assistant for the Krampus.
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Thank you. I look forward to reading more of your comments.
Ok, thinking about it, the CMC are so fucked. Hopefully, the girls find them b4 its too late.
I'm guessing Sunset will be setting up the CMC as hostages in a Saw like manner, forcing their sisters to maim themselves to save them.
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I am not entirely sure what I will do with their characters yet but I should have something within a few days.
and like that sunset has lost all sympathy they got from me and will likely never redeem it.
8420907 Remember the Demon Heart?
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
15:35_9/11/2017
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what did you expect me to write this chapter to where Sunset shakes hands and makes up with the CMC you have got to be freaking kidding me!? If you don't like the chapter that is fine.
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well it's quite the opposite really the CMC are the ones who've lost sympathy, they freaken blamed the girl they drove to sucide for what happened, at this point if sunset skinned them alive and let them die screaming in a salt mound it wouldn't get them pity.
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its not that. i liked the chapter. i just lost sympathy for sunset.
big mac and granny Smith did not deserve that. she might have killed a little old granny for all we know.
and come on they did a horrible thing but they are still kids. i dont think Celestia herself would condone this.
it just proves that the original sunset really is dead. which is why i like this contrast but still she has to be punished.
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Thank you for the comment I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter.
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All Sunset did to Granny was knocked her out she didn't kill Granny Smith, Granny Smith is still alive just knocked out. The Demons Heart has driven Sunset to madness however she is not unredeemable there is still a chance that one of the girls can save her.
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One of the girls can save her, hmm? In that case ahem:
25 BUCKS ON RAINBOW!
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there just kids would have given them some slack in regards to not realizing what they did originally, but i'm sorry that not an adequate excuse for blaming someone you drove to suicide for being the victim. my dad was a grave digger i worked on a lot of jobs with him, the grief suicide can cause... you can't blame someone because you drove them to that.
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Thank you for stating that I feel that person only put the dislike because he has never had to deal with grief or personal loss before. I know far too well what suicide can and will do to those around you as I have gone through the grieving process of losing someone to suicide. I look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter once it is up and ready for review.
I can safely assume that Sunset is gonna murder the CMC...
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Uh, no. Although they won't get off so easily they will not be killed by Sunset or any other character.
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To knock someone out with a punch to the face means brain trauma was induced, that's extremely dangerous to a boxer who falls on a padded surface with paramedics at the ready. To an old woman that falls on a hard surface with no hope of quick medical assistance that would almost certainly be fatal. Also leaving someone with multiple bone fractures, internal bleeding, and a hunting knife in their leg so they can bleed out probably doesn't bode well for their chance of surviving either.
Oh man I can tell things wont ever be the same again hope it was worth it Crusaders and man sunset did a number on Big Mac and Granny Smith even though they didn't accuse her but seriously I didnt think Sunset would go as far as to punch an elderly woman that demon heart must be pure evil. Even though they were kind of jerks to Applejack these last few chapters hope their ok and no I'm not saying they deserve it I'm not that kind of person. Anyways This story just gets better and better the Main 5 better prepare for the hell they and their sisters unleashed. P.S sorry for not commenting on other chapters I was so impressed by the other chapters I forgot to write how much I loved em. Cant wait to see whats to come later on.
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THANK YOU! That comment alone is the reason why I have stuck with this for so long I so very much look forward to reading what you will think of the next chapter once I get done and get it to the best editor out there which is, of course, icecreammac for editing. Any how again Thank you for the wonderful comment I really do enjoy reading comments like that one. Hope you have a wonderful night or day.
Oh man, it's possessed! Kill it! kill it!
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lmao! Uh, nope sorry Sunny has to live so she can be apart of the sequel.
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I know I was just being dramatic.
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So was I. I enjoy comments like that. I hope you have a wonderful night filled with much laughter and happy smiles. Thanks for the delightful comment.
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Anytime!
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Thank you! And it makes sense, considering it's less likely for any lawsuits to happen with an older website that most of the newer generation doesn't even know existed.
Great chapter, now make these little monsters regret the day of their birth.
Blaming Sunset for the suicide they drove her to. How much lower can you get?
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The next chapter should I hope, be up sometime this weekend if not then by Monday. I look very much forward to reading your thoughts on it once it is up and ready for review.
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Well technically Applebloom was the only one who blamed Sunset ,and Scootaloo just pointed out that the Cakes would never forgive em I wouldn't be surprised if she goes easy on Sweetie Belle seeing as she's the only one who feels guilty.
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Possible, though considering that Sweetie Bell was responsible for the foto's being published, i could also see Sunset being especially brutal towards her.
Assuming that she get's that information out of them of course. But torturing them into telling her exactly who did what part of ruining her life, would fit Sunsets current modus operandi.
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I haven't seen any RVB, so I'm not sure what that means. I know Church is a character though.
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Well, it's a reference to a major spoiler, so I'm not gonna ruin it for you. Might go watch some, if you're intrigued.
Apologize with tears rn. Granny Smith DID NOT DESERVE THAT
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To be far Sunset has become evil in this chapter. I am looking forward to your thoughts on the other chapters I hope you enjoy the story.