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Now now Summer, I wouldn't put it past Twilight to not listen to what you have to say. Also, what's an Umbrim?
No angry being is more terrifying than an angry parent.
Another swell chapter! Good to see Celestia, Summer, Gilda, and Crystalis in this too. Can't wait to see what happens next!
It's what Sombra is or rather was before Twilight defeated him in season five.
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Wait, that was season three not season five.
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oh, sorry I thought it was in season five my mistake. There is mention of Umbrim's in the fall of the crystal empire youtube reading and they are shown in the comics as well though I don't recall which ones.
I like this chapter. It’s not too intense and we finally get to see Grampa Gruff in person. I’m guessing he ain’t one of those racist grandparents?
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no, he's not but he also isn't someone to be trifold with either
9086099 Nope. I’ve seen my fair share of badass seniors in literature and video games. On a very random note, most badasses I’ve seen in anime are under 21.
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I know I didn't really show how badass his character is in this as I wanted to prelude to that for the sequels to this story. Reread the part where he tells Celestia that if he had sent in her old squad he would have not only gotten Sombra killed but his granddaughter as well would have died. That part was supposed to be a prelude to what will happen to Sombra once I get to the first sequel of this storyline arc. I look forward to your thoughts on the rest of the story as I get more chapters out.
Mmmm my my. An interesting encounter with an old war veteran. One that puts Summer on Edge?
They know killer instinct between each other. There is not much one can do for that it seems. Still, I didn't think Gilda would have such an interesting time getting to know her new family, though with the baby, I'm sure Gruff will prove his worth as a grandfather. I wonder what she'll do next, and I can't wait to see just how it flows from here. Hehehe.
I wonder what Summer will do when she realizes she needs Gruff as an ally, now that they have a chance to keep out of Sombras clutches. It will be very different, that is for sure.
As for how things went, I am surprised you're using the Umbra/umbrim as a way to show off the difference between things! This really will be interesting I have to say. I wonder if you plan on Sombra making a different return, or if your going by comics for Sombra in Equestria?
I suppose we'll see later, but for now, I really did like the little bits of surprise here and there, and how Celestia and Summer are getting along better. I wonder if we'll see more time with them alone, despite the other connotations.
Either way, I'll look forward to see how you spin Sunset getting around the group again.
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I am actually using my own version of Sombra for this storyline arc. You are right though Gilda and Summer will both need Gruff Griffin I intend to truly delve into that in the sequel. I also intend on showing what happened to Trixie in the next chapter. I look forward to your thoughts as I begin to close out this story.
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An umbrum is what King Sombra is. It's never explicitly stated in the show, but the comics mention that Sombra was sent in pony form as a colt (with no knowledge of what he was) as a type of infiltration by the umbra to the Crystal Empire back when Princess Mi Amore was in power. The smoke version of him that we see in "The Crystal Empire" is his true form.