Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Damn, all this suspense building up. It's going to be a disaster once everything starts to crumble down around Sunny.
7635263 When the final chapter is done and all is shown I am so very much hoping to get a few people to say
"I didn't see that one coming"
If you don't mind me asking what have you liked about the story thus far?
7635619 Well at this rate, I certainly hope you achieve your goal. I do like how instead of going the normal route of having AJ adopting Sunset as a family member, you had Mr. & Mrs. Cake thinking about adopting her. That's new from what I've seen so far. So you have that going for you.
I also wonder how/what you plan to do with the other Sunset Shimmer. Because I'm sure that will throw Sunny and her friends for some loops.
Also, anyway you could share what she meant by "She can't be alive?"
7638004 I am a little concerned about stating why Sunset Shimmer said "She can't be alive" the reason is I am worried that it might give away the entire plot. I am not sure how to write things right now to where it doesn't give the plot away yet at the same time leaves mystery as to whom the other Sunset is.
7638389 It's alright man. If it's possible to ruin the plot of the story, then you don't have to worry about it coming from me anymore. Just keep doing what you're doing, and don't let anyone stop you.
(I also feel sad for the Cake's, and what they'll feel when they find out Sunset Shimmer's dead.)
Man, poor Sunset.
Hmm... Why do I feel like there's cloning involved in this story. But then again that wouldn't be a bad thing.
7913339 Thank you for your comment I look forward to reading more from you as you progress throughout the story. I would love to answer your question yet I feel that would wreck the story's ending for you. So thus I will leave it up to you to decide what you think is going on within this story as I said I look very much forward to reading more comments from you.
Okay, now i'm getting intrigued on just what Sunsets origins in this one is
WHAT