Anon-a-miss strikes causing Sunset Shimmer much pain and heartache.
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Oh fuck.
9046368
how did you read this chapter this quickly I just posted it like not even six seconds ago and haven't even finished PMing everyone about it.
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Email notification.
That’s how I knew.
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oh. Yeah I guess that would do it.
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Either way, great chapter. Very emotional.
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Thank you so much I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it comes out.
9046388
Is it gonna be just as emotional and confrontational as this one?
Yup, Applejack is paying for everything that happened bcoz of Anon-a-Miss. I doubt their friendship will survive.
Good to know that Fluttershy knows where she stands.
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But in a way, she’s right. They don’t deserve Sunset as a friend.
Ouch. Just Ouch.
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not sure I need to reunite Gilda with her grandfather so I am not sure how that chapter will play out. Then I start the "reunion" chapters
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That’s gonna be super awkward I can tell
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Thank you for the comment I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once it comes out and is ready for review.
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yes and I am not entirely sure how to write it but I am sure something will come to me I look forward to your thoughts on it once it comes out and is ready for review.
That's an understatement.
Uh-oh....
You can't the damage has already been done.
Tell her now!
Are you sure that's all there is Applejack?
Applejack, you have exactly three seconds to tell Fluttershy the truth, of you are going to get the Stare of you're life!
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Are you...bucking kidding me right now? Did I really hear her just say that?!
SHE WAS JEALOUS?!?!?! THAT'S HER REASON?!?!
That's what I'm thinking Flutters!
I cannot believe this...I just...cannot believe this.
So you could have Fluttershy all to yourself...even after what you did...Applejack you conniving manipulative little bitch!
She totally deserved that, and so much more!
Now that is a burn right there! What makes hurt even more is that its the truth!
So...now I finally know why Applejack made Fluttershy do what she did and tell Sunset what she told her about them not being friends until they learned what it means to be true Elements of Harmony. It's not because she was suspicious of Sunset, and I don't think it was because she really wanted to go back to being friends with Sunset either...its because...she was jealous. Applejack, was, jealous of Sunset spending more time with Fluttershy than her or her other friends, just like how the CMC were jealous of all five of them spending time with Sunset. Of all the reasons, of all the reasons I expected to find out why Applejack did all of that...those three words were the least likely of them all. I don't know if Applejack really know this or not, but she is now coming off as a huge hypocrite in all of this! She berates Apple Bloom and her friends for turning them against Sunset, yet she had Fluttershy do the same to Sunset as well, even though it was her plan and not Fluttershy's?! What kind of bucking sense does that make, huh?! NONE! Plus, did she really expect Fluttershy to return her feeling for her, (not that she deserves them now) after doing that to both of them?! If she did, than there is something seriously and honestly wrong with that girl, period point blank. I swear I just want to go through that portal, march right up to Applejack, and strangle her until she's blue in the face, because after finding out all of this, that is what she's clearly asking for.
I was hoping that Sunset would eventually be able to rekindle her relationship with the Humane Five, but now...I don't even think that they'll be able to do it themselves, Applejack and Fluttershy especially. The latter is the only one I actually honestly feel sorry for, and now she'll have to not only forever live with the guilt that she let one of her closest friends push her into breaking off her friendship with Sunset, but with the knowledge that that very same friend had feelings for her, and that she was jealous of Fluttershy spending more time with Sunset than with her. That's certainly gonna leave a nasty aching twist in her gut that's for sure. Hopefully she won't let it effect how she lives...whatever her future may hold now, be it with her friends or not with any of them at all...either way...I pray that she'll be alright.
As for Applejack...I don't really have much to say for her after all of this, except for the fact that she has lost just about every last bit of my respect and is not getting it back, ever. She tried to get Fluttershy to tear her friendship with Sunset apart, lied to her about why she told Sunset to not be friends with them until further notice and why she was suspicious of her, and ruined any chance of having an even deeper relationship with her. Yet even after all of that, she still expected Fluttershy to return her feelings? Applejack still thought, after all of that, she'd still have a chance with Fluttershy?
Yeah, she is definitely messed up in the head.
I really hope that Applejack has learned a very valuable lesson in all of this...not that I really believe she has. Using one of you're closest friends to end the friendship of another so you can be in a deeper relationship with the former is something that no real friend should ever do. That, and this, along with what the CMC did, is a prime example, of why jealousy is one of the Seven Deadly Sins.
Applejack was right about one thing though: Some people are just not worth being friends over...she just pointing at the wrong person. And now...she's one of them.
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Everything you said reflects my thoughts fully. AppleJack fell for one of the seven deadly Sins and ruined Sunset and her friends lives badly.
she set the stage and royally screwed up, The Rainbooms are broken, and I'm suire the others will react badly to this revelation.
and now we wait for Dash to finally realize how she let pride ruin her's.
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Thank you my good sir.
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It also explains why AppleJack refuses to press charges so much, and the biggest answer to why AppleJack pushed Sunset away as she did, because in the end......AppleJack is a coward.
she admitted she knew why things ended up as they did, the events to the fall formal, and then afterwards.
Rather than admit to Sunset the truth, she made excuses to hide the truth and true shame of her sins.
Even if it meant hurting Sunset all the more, she had a chance to redeem herself admit the truth, and then maybe maybe............But it's too late, and the truth always comes out.
Now she will pay for it, she lost Fluttershy as a friend and future bride for good.
I wonder how the others will react, they going to know something really bad happened between them, Pinkie already knows.
Now all we wait for is Dash full reaction to what she lost and threw away due to pride.
this call for a song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9U0UUDy_5ik
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Yeah...I think both Applejack and Rainbow will be the ones to suffer the most, due to them being so stubborn and prideful. It's no wonder why those two are my least favorite characters.
Yeah, Applejack was a coward through and through, and she took the cowards way out. I wonder how the others will react to all of this. I feel that it will not be pretty.
gee where does that sound familiar?....oh wait
Wow she's no better than Apple Bloom
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No, no she is not...that, and she has come off as a major hypocrite!
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expanding my comment a bit if that's not weird
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you can get email notifications?
how?
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No, its not.
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Just go to the envelope at the upper left hand corner of your Fimfiction screen, and if it has a number on there, after you've send an email to someone on their page, that means you've got an email back.
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Truer words have never been spoken.
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Me too...
Forgiveness is hardest for those who have been wronged twice. It's harder still for those who have a hard time forgiving themselves.
Jealousy is a powerful beast for many. It can drive us mad with anger, it can make us hurt others without meaning to. It can justify us for terrible things. Seeing Applejack lose another friend is part of the end game of jealousy after all. It can make us frightening, terrible creatures who contemplate the 'Why should I let them have you?' all too often. We start to see the others of our acts as not other beings, but just opposition. Jealousy can sometimes ignite rivalry, and cause something interesting.
However, Jealousy can be the start of a downhill battle where agony and suffering are the only true rewards. Now Applejack must endure her heart being crushed from her own acts. Such is the way of it. You want what you already have, but in more abundance.
I was surprised how much Fluttershy moved to catch AJ as well, but I'm kinda happy that we still see the dark echoes of the past showing true in the echoes of the future. AJ may lose everyone, and she may feel the anger of such is justified against Applebloom. Hopefully she learns from Fluttershy about what she's done and doesn't repeat it.
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Thank you for the most wonderful comment I look forward to reading your comments on the next chapter once it comes out.
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No that’s a PM
By the way what happened to Trixie
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Oh, sorry...
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Oh yes, I forgot about her character I'll try to include something about her in the next chapter or the one after that.
Sigh Applejack all I can say right now is why just why? What Dash said to Sunset once she got out of the hospital was awful but that.....that was just too far and your supposed to represent the element of honesty? Seriously though Applejack did you forget that Sunny was seeing Flash at the time so there was no reason for you to be jealous. I don't blame Shy for being I mean when your so called friend bullied you into alienating Sunset from the group just so she could have you all for yourself that is just sick and not to mention that it turned Sunny into a bully herself you'd react the same way. I hope it was worth it Applejack not only have you possibly lost Sunset but now you lost Fluttershy and I doubt she will return your feelings. I said this once I'll say this again I can tell things wont ever be the same after this. You guys better pray Sunset at least gives you a second chance once all this is over. Sorry for the late reply I was still thinking about how to describe my thoughts on this chapter, cant wait to see whats next.
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I can't wait to see what you will think of the next chapter once it comes out. I plan on doing the one where I reunite Gilda with her grandfather then I will move towards Eventide Shimmer Soliel to show what her character has been doing as I start the "reunion" chapters.
Whelp, there goes the Appleshy shipping fic thrown out into the void of darkness.
Good f*****g job cereal box reject.
Wonder what'll happen to Rainbow Dash next, probably something less or more worse.
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I could always ship them in the third installment of this series. I look forward to your thoughts about the next chapter once it comes out.
So that the end of Fluttershy Applejack friendship 😭
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not quite. They will need help to rebuild their friendship. Beyond that if I say anything else it'll ruin the sequels to this story line arc.
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And hopefully she'll teach her sister another lesson in what can happen when you use jealously to hurt someone. Applebloom has learned one lesson from this maybe a few more will remind her that she needs to be honest with others when she feels jealous.
Sheesh. This story's making like Fluttershy's the ONLY Rainboom who wanted Sunset to be her friend. To give her a chance and welcome her with open arms. Then again, that's pretty much what we expect her to do. What with her being the Element of Kindness and all.
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I do have another story where Fluttershy is trying to help Sunset become a better person you might enjoy that one as well.
Kindness : To Save A Life