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Everyone messed up in their own way without realizing the consequences. What will the punishment be for CHS as a whole?
8081959 I have not decided yet but not to worry when I get to the 'school board' chapter I should have something ready I look forward to what you think of it once it is posted and ready to go. Thank you for the comment I look forward to reading more comments from you once I get more chapters out.
Wow. I think it's just me or is Celestia taking Sunset's death a whole lot better than I thought she is.
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Well she a ruler and a Goddess, she has to have some form of control least she turn everyone to ash.
I'm sure she hurting, fruious and ready to snap, but she controling her grief and pain when the tiem comes she let it out...in private or with Luna who be watching to keep her from hurting herself in grief and rage I'm sure.
Oh quick Question has Twilight gotten the letter written to her by Sunset yet the one she wrote out to Twilight?
8082154 Oh. So, she's basically going through the process of catharsis then, am I right? She's at the building up stage at the moment.
8082154 no twilight had not yet gotten that letter that comes in the follow up chapter.
8082158 Yeah could be she over a Thousand years old, she out lived many pnies and was separted from her sister for a thousand years. She must of lost loved ones thru the centuries thou Sunset was special.
it hurts alot I betand will be very hard for ehr when she gets some alone time.
Things are going to get.....I don't know how to say it.
Celestia used "You fucked up speech" its super effective. Twilight used "Good intentions" it has no effect. Hatter used "Fire axe" on pokemon obsessed sentient desk. Sentient desk used "Crotch height drawer" it's super effective, Hatter fainted.
From a liberated desk.
"Celestia, when were you exactly going to tell me I had no real authority about that? Or that you had no books for me to read about it? I've been going months trying to find out more about being a Princess and this really should have been what you told me. I mean, I'm the Princess of Friendship. Celestia, I get I did wrong. I just didn't know we didn't have emergency power since you know, I had 20 minutes to possibly get you, the court in Canterlot all to the Crystal Empire so we could hash this out. Yes, we could have chatted a little bit when I got the portal up and running on MY time table, but it was never brought up. It would have been another 30 moons normally. During that time with how busy I was, I mean, I AM me. That's not even counting the fact that I went and helped them with the I'm finding out now Poor Sirens when we figured out finally a way to save them after they took over the school and were possibly going to return without having learned anything. I'm trying to figure out why you never felt it was relevant or not to me. I'm supposed to be a Princess alongside you, Luna and Cadance."
Celestia is really dropping the ball here on the fact she never taught Twilight any of this. Twilight I understand you're feeling a little like a punching bag, but you have to remember there WAS time between becoming a Princess and getting your castle.
I can thoroughly understand her being busy, but there is such a thing as delegating and Twilight would put time to learn about it.
Was the Changeling Threat occupying Celestias mind that much? I mean, considering she learned Magic to impress Celestia, the whole Rainboom and then she's in. Did she not pick up history books or ask for advice about being a Princess?
I'm sorry if it feels I'm ranting, but this is kind of a big plot hole, and I can't fault Twilight for banishing her when she didn't have the authority when she was never told.
It's sorry to say, blaming the babysitter you gave money to for Pizza, and leaving her a 50 instead of a 20, so she gets all the trimmings for herself and the one she watches, letting them pig out on a pizza party and likely making sure they have a crazy night..then trying to go ballistic on them for your mistake for leaving a 50 for Pizza.
It just felt like a slap in the face to me for it.
As for the funeral- I'm hoping the two come to see each other as friends and fellow sisters, Human and Pony Celestia. I mean, they all are feeling the grief in this. There is no reason to break ties when it could seriously help each other out.
Mmm I'm not sure what I'd go for with this further considering I had the bigger thoughts on what was said from Celestia to Twilight. Still, I wonder if this will strain their bond so. Twilight isn't disrespectful, and the tone I had was snarky as can be. Still, I think Celestia is realizing that side as well since Twilight didn't understand it. Perhaps that's why she's not exploding further about it and only teaching sternly about the law and powers she has for such?
8084173 I will take care of this plot hole in the chapter after the funeral if you recall within this chapter Princess Celestia said she is going to the human world to answer any questions that Twilights friends will have about Sunset one of those questions will be why Twilight was never told about what her actual status as a princess was.
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Mwahahaha!
No really, that is good to know you had a plan for this.
I do wonder what they'll say so I better hope those chapters come out soon!
Thanks for the reply and not going to mash words much tonight, but do have a wonderful evening over there!
8086963 Keep reading. you'll like what i have planed for him there's an old saying 'Pay back hurts a....lot'
8087548 keep reading it gets darker as you read but not to worry the light is coming and coming soon. I really like your comments I can't wait to see what else you think of the rest of the story.
8090555 lol. I so very much look forward to what you will think of the rest of the story. I put an O.Cs. into this story that shows up in the upcoming sequel. Can't wait to see what you think of the characters
All this Twilight bashing is starting to get very annoying. Twilight, who was the least guilty of anyone involved negatively, has been yelled at by both Celestia's unjustly (Princess Celestia being full of shit with what she said to Twilight, the first two Equestria Girls movies and a large chunk of season four focused on Twilight trying to figure out the entire princess thing with zero support from Celestia) and still has Sunset's letter to deal with (when Sunset forgave her friends and Anon-A-Miss through one letter but tears apart Twilight over a painfully obvious misunderstanding and never bothered to ask questions). Hell, Twilight has gotten more accusations and blame than the CMC and Mane 5 combined in the past few chapters, and she was the only one actively trying to help Sunset except for the one warning from Fluttershy. Yes, banishing Sunset was a stupid decision, especially after the sirens, Discord, and Nightmare Moon, made even worse with the entire Anon-A-Miss fiasco (I think you can lift the banishment now, especially since it wasn't official and she reformed), but there was still logic behind it, giving Sunset a chance to actually form friendships. If she went to court and Celestia didn't abuse her power (which she would've), Sunset most likely would be stuck rotting in a dungeon. If Celestia abused her power, then she's a complete hypocrite. I really hope when Sunset comes back, this little issue gets cleaned up. Twilight even used a powerful magic item to try and heal Sunset (from a beating Rainbow and Applejack just watched happen). Honestly, Twilight deserves better. Sunset does as well, as making her only mad at Twilight does a huge disservice to both of them and makes Sunset look like an idiot.
8090645 yes it all will be 'cleaned' up when Sunset comes back.
8090645 When Sunset comes back she will walk away from her friends when she finds out how she is connected to Twilight it opens up new doors for her. I have already shown one stage of grief and that is blaming each other. Prinpal Celestia blames Twilight for what happened to Sunset accusing her for the beating that Sunset took due to Sunset being banished to the human world. I have shown that Twilight was blamed for this as well by princess Celestia. Now I need to show the anger then comes bargaining followed by denial which in turn in followed by confusion that in turn is followed by acceptance. I didn't want to try to do it all in one single chapter so I broke it up into many chapters. I understand fully that this story might not be what you wanted it to be and that's ok. I will try to clean up some of the loop holes in the next few chapters.
8091284 Comes back?
8092018 I had wanted Sunset to do that but I felt that might have also sounded a bit creepy too seeing as how Sunset didn't really know Daisy Green and they are not friends or family.
8092651 Take a look at the cover art for this story then read the chapter called 'meeting and the demons heart' after that read the chapter called 'beat down' your answer lies within those two chapters and on the cover art itself.
8092672 Oh, I think I get and Uh oh!
Before I read this, what is the
Goreand Dark tag for ?And how bad does it get ?
8092832 The gore and dark tags are for what Sunset does to Trixie and for what happens to Sunset during her fight with Dumbbell Stallion. As for how bad it gets I am not sure I would have to say at least mid 1980's Friday the 13th style. I tried not to let it get to violent when it comes to the battle scenes in this story. If how ever this story isn't what you are looking for may I please suggest reading Rarity vs. The rat instead. That story there is no swearing, sex or violence in it. Just good old Tom and Jerry style cartoon humor.
I got this quote from Tekken 4 that I'll put in this fic's words:
And now, everyone has become little pawns for Karma to play with. I hope it enjoys toying with everyone responsible for Sunset's cycle of despair and torment.
8094871 Thank you for the most wonderful comment I look forward to what you will think of the next chapter once I get it posted and ready for review.
8102372 best comment EVER! oh I can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story. I still want to see what you thought of 'Battle for Applebloom' but this comment was by far the best one yet!
8092672 Yes I can see it now; a city filled with grief, heartbroken families, angry parents, and friends disgusted with themselves and they'd all give absolutely anything in the world to bring Sunset back, little do they know their wish may turn into a nightmare.
Yes, I see it; six feet under the ground a heart begins to beat and a maiden awakens, trapped beneath the Earth her first challenge will be to claw her way to the surface. She will break the surface of her coffin and slowly make her way up until finally, her hand will reach out to the very sun! It may be Sunset's body but it 's not Sunset, so what is it? It is the creation of Anon-a-miss, the collaboration of every negative comment to Sunset, it is everything Canterlot High has ever accused Sunset of being, and it is all of Sunset's worst traits come to life. In a word, it is pure evil. This creature is Sunset but not at the same time, it is the embodiment of everything mentioned, but mainly it is Sunset's revenge come to life.
In other words, it might be a good time to start learning how to beg for mercy.
8103452 Another great comment and how I so am left looking forward to what you think of the next chapters once I get them posted and ready for review.
8103468 When is the next chapter coming out?
8107384 in just a few hours I need to get in contact with Icecreammac and see what he thinks of the latest update to it then I can post it and I will have another up shortly after that. I am very sorry that it is taking so long I know you like many others want to see what happens next and I am eagerly awaiting your comments and thoughts for the next chapter. I look forward to hearing from you again.
8107758 It's alright, take your time. I'm curious of what is the next chapter about. Keep up the progress and God Bless you :)
So now Twilight's back to the human realm... this is probably not gonna go well.