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The feels are for real!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment I look forward to reading your thoughts about the next chapter once it comes out and is ready for review. If you have any questions about this story please feel free to ask them I'll answer them as soon as I can.
The Cakes were so kind to take Sonata and Trixie in...the feels are for real!!!
Nobody wants to be in the way of Momma Bear!
Beautiful chapter.
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment I look forward to your thoughts on the next chapter and I hope you will enjoy what Mrs. Cake does in the final chapter with Trixie, Sonata, and Sunset. Don't worry though it won't be the last chapter with this story it'll just be the last chapter with Trixie, Sonata and Sunset all in the same chapter. We'll see these three again in the sequel.
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Thank you I am looking forward to your thoughts on the next chapter. I hope you'll enjoy it as much as you enjoyed this one.
Its good to see Trixie finally accept them as family. And still holding hope that the baby looks like her mothers despite not having Sunset's genes
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I will show what Sonata's child will look like in the sequel to this story it'll more than likely be in chapter 30 as I want to build up showing how bad the war is getting in Equestria and then show how happy and caring Sonata and Sunset are who are both not aware of how bad things are getting in Equestria. I look forward to furthering comments from you once I get more chapters out. Thank you for this wonderful comment.
I'm really hoping for their child to have something of Sunset's. Also I've noticed that the cards that Trixie has been dealt? Sucks.
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don't worry Trixie is about to get a winning hand, Mrs. Cake, Sonata and Sunset all will be shown just how much they love Trixie in the next chapter.
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Sweet
But what about Rainbow?
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We will see what happened to Rainbow in the sequel.
9163241 Sequel? Ooh, now I'm looking forward to it.
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I'll be waiting! As per-usual!
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Ah ok
Another cute and sweet chapter Im glad Trixie is part of the family now Sunset and Sonata BEST SISTERS EVER Its nice that Trixie has changed her ways and has reconciled with Sunny but then again if you grew up with parents who don't care alittle about you I cant blame her for acting like that. Looks like tomorrow's the big day Pinkie, Shy, and possibly Rarity word of advise this might be your last chance to make amends with Sunny so ya better hurry. Looks like were getting close to the big climax cant wait so see what surprises you have in store for us the next chapter.
BTW will we see Rarity and her dads court hearing later on?
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Oh, shoot I completely forgot about Rarity's and her father's court date. yes we will see it later on or perhaps in the sequel I am not sure which I will do but yes we will see it I just don't know if it will happen with this story or the sequel to this story.
I'm glad that Sunset finally got a break. Even if only for a few moments, tomorrow we can call good ol' officer Jade and get the mess with Trixie's parents away.
Damn it. That's my optimism getting ahead of itself again, Isn't it?
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Well, I still need to show Gilda and Summer Sunrise giving Jade the book that Gilda has on Sombra I also need to show Twilight confronting Celestia as well. But not to worry I am working on the next chapter even as I type this up. I look forward to your thoughts about once it comes out and is ready for review.
Ahh the cravings. A classic that always shows that you can find the oddest of tastes around someone you love. Whether it be pickles and ice cream, or if you like fantasy like I do?
Why not go for magical lightning infused in edible crystals? Theres so many ways to show one can't help themselves when the interesting shows up.
I AM happy about how much Mrs. Cake is fighting to keep Trixie. I'm also quite surprised you literally used Mama Bear there. It really does fit how much she cares about others as well. I really was happy for how much she's going through just to make Trixie feel safe too. Trixie may have school, but there isn't going to be a thing they can really do when they do have to deal with that.
OK, I do love that Sunset and Trixie went from, "Tortured and Torerer" to sisters who just need time to better get to know one another. The memory short really helped flesh out where the two could stand, and I'm glad we're seeing another side of things for the two.
I just hope Trixie isn't accepting of it because of that particular scene, though it seems like she's seeing it less as a 'They're kidnapping me', to a "They may not be perfect but they never truly tried to hurt me. She scared me but she's repentant. I have a chance."
It really is going to be interesting to see where it goes next.
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Ok thanks
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Yep any time. Let me know if you have any other questions about the story.
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Ok.
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Your welcome and will do
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thanks for the wonderful comment I look forward to what else you will add to the other chapters
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Just finished your last chapter. Can't wait to see what will happen to Trixie😃
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Thank you. I'll have another chapter up soon. I look forward to your thoughts on it once the new chapter is up and ready to go.
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Good luck
Looks more like a bonding session. Let's see how everyone else is handling the situation? I mean, Sunset did kill Dumbbell so will she be charged or you can't charge a dead person?
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kinda hard to charge someone with murder when that person is supposed to be dead. Besides Brushed Jade has already said that no one wants to take Sunset Shimmers case so yeah it'll be hard to convince anyone on a jury that she died then came back to life and is now living in ponyville.
Should there be trauma counseling for the CMC? What about the Rainbooms?
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All that will take place during the sequel as this was meant to show how the war in Equestria got started and who the major players in that war will be. It was also meant to show how and why Sunset won't go back to Equestria as she has a child to take care of. I'll show the affects of how everyone treated Sunset in the sequel to this story.
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What I meant was evil to whom, evil is not simply a you are evil someone has to think your evil. So eV=vil to Whom.
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well then I misunderstood what you were saying then. Summer Sunrise is supposed to be evil towards Princess Celestia and anyone else that gets in her way Chrysalis created Summer Sunrise to be the perfect weapon. However as Summer grew and became more aware of her role in what Chrysalis wanted for Equestria she didn't want to become something that was made to be evil or something that was made to be used as a weapon so she left Equestria to find her own path in life.
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Okay that does make sense
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Cool. I hope you have enjoyed the story so far I plan on adding another chapter soon. I look forward to your thoughts on it once the new chapter is ready for review.